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  1. chris191070

    Chapter 1

    Awesome start to the story.
  2. Pedo Pastor is going down. Natasha stooped very low this time, reporting the party and trying to hurt Noah, with evil comments about his father and what the party would be.
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    Chapter 30

    Matt’s break, whilst not ideal has helped him and Levi get closer.
  4. Great chapter
  5. Don't drop the soap in the shower.
  6. Richard isn't fully over Nicholas, but with Harriet and Vicky he is fast getting there. Vicky was amazing with the school board.
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    Chapter 16

    Great chapter
  8. They look so sweet and innocent.
  9. There is a system that takes place in the dark. Galloway hasn't learned it yet, but he has Elias as his temporary protector.
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    Prologue

    What a horrible place. Blackwater sounds like place you can't escape, unless you want to die,
  11. The enemy are not expecting West and Carter, a British soldier and CSIS agent with the help of the US Military. All unsanctioned to attack there base of operations.
  12. What do we do with completed stories? I can't remember.
  13. I've got two nearly finished.
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    Chapter 11

    Thursday 5am so only 54 hrs
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    Prologue

    Great start.
  16. This is the 5th book in the Charlie vs Series. You really need to read the others before attempting this, or the wonderful cast of characters will confuse. Charlie and the family are going on a Mediterranean Vacation. But we have a whole lot of things to worry about, Cecil with separation issues. Then when they arrive on the island, everything goes wrong. We have the demon baby, angels with issues, goblins and to cap it off Mr Hartley is winning everything. To find out how all this connects, continue reading. You will not be disappointed.
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  17. Hope you feel better soon
  18. A wonderful ending. Angelo and Cecil are gonna have so much fun together.
  19. I love how Will, bonded with Yani. Food and warm clothes. Yani has told Will how to solve his political problem.
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    Chapter 11

    Only 65 hrs till Chapter 12
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    Chapter 11

    A wonderful chapter. Meg recovered. Troy and Miles made love. All is good so there bound to be some drama between the guys.
  22. Harriet and Vicky, will help Richard forget about Nicholas.
  23. chris191070

    Before Sunrise

    Wonderful chapter
  24. A beautiful chapter. A wonderful moment between Kent and Randy, where they share there first kiss.
  25. chris191070

    Chapter 7

    I agree with everything that has already been said. A bittersweet parting for Julian and Sam.
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