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chris191070

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  1. An interesting take on sci-fi, but a wonderful story. Just think what those powers could do in the wrong hands.
  2. I'll have to read it later, 6.30am and on way to work.
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    Chapter 11

    Danny and Nate are both growing up, but they have a great friendship. Jake and Danny are getting closer it looks like, dinner, wacky backy and what next.
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    Chapter 34 S2

    A nice pleasant Thanksgiving had by all.
  5. What a fantastic way to save the world. Eliminate a few world leaders.
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    Chapter 10

    Lachlan, Nate’s brother sounds a bit of a badass who deals with problems.
  7. Only a couple. I think @Lee Wilson has scrambled all of our brains.
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    Chapter 8

    Awesome chapter. Greg has certainly been left with a huge mess to clean up. It's no surprise that you can add crook, to everything else the old Baron was doing.
  9. Famous Five, Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys, The Hobbit and then in later life, Alex Rider, Harry Potter
  10. I don't like faggots.
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    Chapter 9

    Poor Jake. At least Danny was able to clean him up, before the Police arrived.
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    Late August

    Beautiful description of late August early September
  13. Well that was interestingly weird. I want Ned's power.
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    Chapter 8

    Wow, things don't look good for Jake.
  15. Cottontail likes hot phone sex.
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    Chapter 7

    So Jake bought a new camera, to take photos of Nate and Danny. I hope the painting comes out well.
  17. I'm wondering what Ned is and why he's using Mark,
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    Chapter 7

    Awesome chapter. Opas backstory was interesting and gave alot of information about the prophecy. Jake's eye colour will be interesting when we get the meaning. Look forward to the meeting of the Baronets.
  19. Intriguing beginning. I'm glad Prentiss, has a friend in Ned.
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    Chapter 33 S2

    A relatively calm chapter.
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    Entry 53 & 54

    I think Adam may have made a mistake by going to the movies with Thomas. It's obvious that Thomas fancies Adam.
  22. Things went well at the UN. Interesting times ahead it seems.
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