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  1. In the time I've been with GA there's been a few stories that I've not been able to finish because of bad editing, but I have reviewed stories that are not 100% perfect. Some stories you have to take account of the type of person as @Kitt said. With my own writing I try to get them as near as perfect as possible, but im quite sure that mistakes have slipped through.
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    Bob's Dilemma

  3. I thought Midday on the 30th September was perfect.
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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Introductions

    Yeah, they take money and don't give it back easily. Next Chapter on Saturday.
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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Chapter 16

    Gray and Raffa are gonna be good for each other. I'm pleased Raffa is gonna help him with the testing. I'm glad Tom was sacked, they are enforcing there policies at work. Let’s hope there is know repercussions inside or outside of work.
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    L & O Chapter 4

    I think Harold is pretty incompetent or corrupt and has done this type of thing in the past. He needs investigating. Dalton is a lucky young man, as he knew law. Great to see him reunited with his family.
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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Bob's Dilemma

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    Bob's Dilemma

  16. Hope everyone is well. All is good here. Wow, two weeks has flown by. I'm back at work tomorrow after my two week break from school, back to cooking for 270 children. Take care all xx
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    Bob's Dilemma

    As I'm back at work (School) tomorrow after the Christmas break. I'll be posting new chapters on Saturday and Sunday.
  18. The next day, Rosie was still sleeping when Darryl used the bathroom. He got up early to get ready for work. Bob had similar intentions. Darryl heard noises coming from the kitchen and went to investigate. Bob was putting up coffee for all of them, and had defrosted the bagels and rolls resting on the table. Like Darryl, he was completely naked. “Good morning,” they said simultaneously. “Bob, I need to tell you something. I really don’t have to, but I want to.” “Shoot.” “When
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    A New Term

    Interesting chapter. Quite a few questions to be answered. Mostly pointed out by @Summerabbacat Why did I never have science experiments like that, think of the fun the boys could have in class, purely scientific of course.
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    Introductions

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    Introductions

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    Introductions

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    Introductions

    There's 12 chapters in total, so keep reading 📚 😀
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