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  1. Awesome chapter. Kevin and Ian are really getting to know Joseph and create a bond with him. A great day at the zoo had by all. I'm just waiting for the problems to occur.
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    Chapter 13

    But the jumper cables, will jump start you into resolving this cliffhanger. Now wears the 🪶 feather.
  3. Wow, what a chapter. So well written with the training, perfectly described. You almost felt like you were undertaking the training with Jamie. Courses all passed, now bodyguard to Morris-Walker.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks 😊
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    Chapter 4

    Big question 🤔 we'll just have to wait and see.
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    Chapter 4

    Maybe, Maybe not.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks 😊 we will just have to wait and see, who is balls deep.
  8. Maybe jail won't be so bad for Fred, whilst Mo is looking after him.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks 😊
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    Chapter 4

    Plenty of questions, with no answers available.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks 😊 Rogue cop, where.
  12. “Chief,” I whispered through the bars. “We must question the night guards. Unless they were asleep or unless they are the murderers, they had to have heard something.” “You’re right,” he said. “I’ll call them.” He whipped out his cell phone and I thought that rank indeed has its privileges.The cops had confiscated the cell phones from the rest of us. In a moment the Chief and I were released from our cells and taken to the front office. As we left, I could hear the moans and groans of
  13. There is alot of obstacles in the way for Ian and Keith, but hopefully these can be overcome and they can take Joseph home to Manchester.
  14. A beautiful, feel good chapter. They make great mates for each other.
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    The Offer

    Jamie is asking for trouble, keeping all these secrets from Mike. The Minister is a dodgy character, who shouldn't be trusted
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    Chapter 13

    @Ticklishboy30 is tickled until he reveals the result of the cliffhanger, you better not hurt Ethan.
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    Chapter 13

    Loved the chapter. It was great to see Cam and Fabien enjoy time together, playful and serious at the same time with plenty of tickles.
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    Chapter 13

    Bad @Ticklishboy30 nasty cliffhanger.
  19. I think Fred is in trouble, he's not looking innocent in the eyes of the jury.
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    Meeting Joseph

    Tissues were needed. What an emotional first meeting for Kevin, Ian and Joseph. Manny did a wonderful thing by rescuing Joseph, hopefully Kevin and Ian can finish what Manny started and take Joseph home.
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    Retirement

    Your sounding much happier and more relaxed. With time to enjoy things you like doing. Health is important, especially mental health to all of us.
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    Chapter 3

    Thanks 😊
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    Chapter 3

    Not always
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    Chapter 3

    Bakers dozen
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