Dahawk
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Love the story, and i despise the so called grandparents. Not sure much else needs said other than I love the way everybody worked to make up for Artie's birthday.
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Great start to a new story, glad I stumbled across it today!
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But it would be fun Auntie @empresslovesreading
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What a sight that would be, the kids pulling somebody on skates. Although, it might be a good way for them to wear off some energy.
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Thanks, @jaysalmn, nobody messes with Kasey's cousins, he is a fierce little guy when it comes to family.
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Thanks, @FanLit, the kids definitely keep everything interesting. Kaleb has definitely been on a rollercoaster of emotions.
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Thanks, @Estiveo , glad you didn't have an annerism thingy!
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Thanks, @tinytoes , we will definitely have to wait and see in the next chapter!
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Hmmm, I wonder who you mean? LMAO... That cliffhanger was the only way you guys didn't end up with a 20,000 word chapter. Oh, come on we were gonna ask you to chaperone the kids next summer.
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We are working at getting the story back to a regular weekly posting, it will hopefully be on Sundays or Mondays depending how things go.
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Haha... the kids can definitely keep the adults on their toes!
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How bad can things get with this family? Uh... scratch that, we'll have to wait and see.
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There was a lot of laughing done writing this chapter, glad you liked it.
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We’re goin’ to Disneyworld: “Bella, honey, wake up,” Blu gently rocked his daughter. She slowly rolled onto her back, yawning, “What wrong, Pop?” “Sweetie, I need you to wake up and pack a bag for the next couple of weeks. Pack shorts, bathing suits, basically hot weather stuff.” Bella sat up quickly, “What’s going on?” “We are going on vacation, come on get up we’re leaving in one hour. Quickly pack your bag, then you can use the bathroom in our room so the boys can get read
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Great chapter, I really wish the boys would have shoved Don over the Falls while on the visit. I hate to say this but Robbie and Alex might be a good couple.
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Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
Dahawk commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
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I'm sad to say goodbye to the story, and to you Jeff. You're writing has touched and inspired many of us. Being from Pittsburgh, I've always connected with W.A.R. You're characters each earned a spot in my heart, I hope someday you find peace in your life and will possibly share more of your talent with us as I believe there was much left that could be told. See you later...
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I hope you will continue the story. These guys have so much more to tell as they have only just started their lives as adults. Great job as always!
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Looking into the Future: Sunday breakfast was in full swing, the kids talking excitedly over one another about the last few days of the school year and their upcoming pool party since construction had finally been completed. “Bella, how many friends are coming on Saturday sweetheart?” Blu asked. He was trying to keep track for Kaleb to cater for the party. He and Kyle wanted the kids to have fun and enjoy themselves but they didn’t want the numbers to get out of hand. “
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Awesome chapter!
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Beginning and the End: Blu couldn’t get through the period quick enough, the excitement was building for him to watch Levi’s reaction when he realized he was going for a ride in the Viper. There was a little bit of anxiousness for him to be able to drive it too. The chances he’d ever own one were minuscule, Kyle and he had better ways to spend their money. ‘Levi Dalton please report to the office,’ bellowed over the school intercom. He smiled when he heard the announcement, “Okay guy
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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Dahawk commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Great chapter, my heart breaks for the stuff Rob has endured and what his Grandfather is putting him through. I'm glad Rob found some positives in this chapter, the hockey game, his Dad proving how much he wants to involve him in his life, and the neighbor kid. Keep up the great work Hopper, looking forward to much more. -
Wow, Billy's mom really stood up for the boys. Brett's mom absolutely is a piece of shit. Then that video, I'm at a loss of words for it, as mad as Billy is I can't picture him letting Dustin be devestated again. Nice job Jeff! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Kaleb is definitely wound up over the baby, every time he opens his mouth he seems to become an even bigger babbling lunatic.
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Here is a link to the Dodge Viper I can't get it to let me link the image directly http://auto2017.com/2017-dodge-viper/. Kaleb is an excitedly nervous mess! I'm pretty sure Davis will never leave Kaleb live his craziness down after the baby arrives.
