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Because he's smart enough, he's good enough, and gosh darn it, Drake loves him. I'm glad Drake has a sister like Cal to call it as she sees it. Poor Jimmy.... He was so deflated. It was heartbreaking 💔 to see. Good chapter, Gary!

Great chapter... Good mix of hormones and trepidation. Your dialogue and scenes are all very vivid!

Smart move on Adams part, shutting off the phone for the night. He needs to be a parent right now. Fuck the Grandpa. Money grabbing Hope we get to meet the other gay teen soon. Rob could use a good friend!

What a perfect pause point. New house, new life, and a good trip down memory lane. I wonder what they have in mind for the Special Toys... This has been one heckuva adventure. Whenever you resume it, I will too!

These are some damn special boys. Both very mature for their age. Hopefully the pressures of school don't get to them. Loved the chapter, mate.

Excellent chapter, mate! The communication, the dialogue, the insecurities, and of course, the incomparable Mrs B! What a merry Christmas!

Michael sure came off as a stick-in-the-mud the whole time. Almost more whiney than banter-y (is that a word??). St. Kendall is going to be such a great dad. Those sweaters... Just...

Hmmm... Fatherhood is a piece of cake, eh? Sounds like famous last words to me! That gift giving scene with the lil cinnamon rolls was so precious. I love exploring the developing feelings. I feel like a broken record right now, but if you're going to keep giving me happy feels I'm going to keep telling you about them. I the ugly sweaters!

I can't figure out if its you, or the boys, that are secret sadomasochists, Gary. If this were the real world I'd worry, but something tells me 2 puppies, a baby, and one and a half full time teenagers at home isn't going to be too much of a problem.

Gary, I really wish that you were the God that created the real world instead of the one we got stuck with. Maybe if you were given the job there would be a lot more love and understanding and humans wouldn't be so bull headed in our misguided beliefs. Anyway, I'm just waxing poetical to say Good Chapter.

1) Nate and Bodie... so.freaking.adorable. 2) K & M Playing Doctor... what other fun ways are you going to come up with to keep our their sex life interesting? 3) You must be playing for the long haul, by promoting Sandy from cameo/bit part status to (probably) recurring role status. I hope that her story line has some impact on the overall story arch and isn't just another example of "St. Kendall" for the sake of it. These little side stories can be intriguing, but they can also bog down the pace quite a bit. I guess I'm just slightly skeptical of how it fits in at this point in the game. I have faith in you though 4) How are these boys so fit? Yes they go to the gym a lot, but all I've ever seen them eat is Chinese food, bacon, pancakes, and Mom's home cooking, which I'm guessing isn't exactly Jenny Craig food. Damn these beautiful boys and their metabolism (Okay, I'm projecting my insecurities onto your lovely boys, sorry) 5) GROUP HUG(S)!! (I can't figure out how to get the spoiler box removed once I accidentally hit it... no spoilers listed there, lol)

My little angels sleeping peacefully... happy birthday, Nate! What an amazing birthday for an amazing boy from an amazing writer Gary, you make me believe in love again. Cheers, Mate

It just keeps getting better. For now this story has morphed into Nate's story, and that's okay. K & M have plateaued (at least until the baby gets closer) and our young lovebirds have a vast untapped potential, which so far is not disappointing at all! If you ever do go back and re-edit this whole thing, I think I see at least two, if not three distinct books out of the whole project so far, which might help focus everything. I don't think I realized until about 10 or 15 chapters that this is more of an ongoing, open-ended, serial instead of a true book/story format. I'm glad I've stuck with it. Cheers, buddy!

**Pumps fist in air** YASS!!! My little cinnamon rolls!

Baton down the hatches! Hurricane Agnes is headed straight for Toronto... She's a force to be reckoned with! The boys finally got some alone time. Hopefully they realize how little they are in for after the baby gets there... get it all while you can now, boys. Good Chapter, Gary.

Bodie is definitely a mini-Kendall! At least they know not everyone in the school is going to give them a hard time. Also, Michael, NO MEANS NO. Quit being pushy, there's plenty of time for Kendalls dick when he gets home! Bad, Michael! (J/k)

These boys are great for each other. The hurt they've both been through will make them a force to reckon with

I am absolutely gushing! How sweet and courageous to open up to each other!

So pure, so innocent, so

Nate has breathed new life into a story that was on the verge of turning (ever-so-slightly) stale. I think that he opens a plethora of storylines and he is so cheeky and adorable.

Big Mike sure sounded like a cop there... Or maybe a lawyer. Gary, you're not predictable, but you are transparent, and that's not a bad thing. Don't ever change who you are Good chapter, buddy. You made one gay teenager (not to mention this middle-aged gay man) very happy!

Nate and Bodie, sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g Oh, Gary, we haven't known the boy for 10 minutes and he's already matched up, lol. A house, a baby, a foster kid, a dog, and 2 parents. That's going to be a Full House (Yes I'm assuming Nate moves in with them)

Alright, can I breathe now? You sure know how to crank the emotional meter up to 110. Is anyone surprised that Nate is 13 going on 30 and able to channel his inner Aceto so powerfully? Masterfully done, Gary.

I just want to give Nate a HUGE hug!! I was fighting back tears that whole chapter. Thank God he has the Aceto clan to fall back on.

Very erotic. Their Love radiates, and you strung out the buildup just about as far as it could go. Good chapter.