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Chapter 39 A Peek at the Cards
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 39 A Peek at the Cards
I think Candy's struggle is very real. The ultrasound has to be hard on any surrogate, but to have one with so much guilt, can't be easy at all. So no gender reveal party? Were those en vogue yet in 2011? -
Chapter 38 Holding a Golden Hand
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 38 Holding a Golden Hand
Ok, can I just take back some of what I said last chapter? That was absolutely beautiful. I think I squealed a little when he walked in and saw Michael on his knees by the tree. I could instantly see the scene. THIS is why I read romances... For chapters like this one. -
Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
So... Sweet... And sappy... Stuck... In... Molasses!!! Just kidding. Another great chapter. I think the only thing that bothers me about Kendalls point of view is that it seems to say you can't be single and happy. I get that he is deleriously happy and most of it is because he is with his perfect soul mate, but some of us are just fine being single. Again, maybe I'm just envious. After all, there has to be a reason that I only read romances, eh? -
Chapter 36 Claiming the Pot
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 36 Claiming the Pot
Oh when the saints, come marching in, oh when the saints come marching in There you go making even the most vile characters human and sympathetic. Damn you, Gary... Can't you let me hate at least ONE of your characters?? -
Chapter 35 King of Clubs
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 35 King of Clubs
Go Deuce! Remind me not to get on his bad side. The dynamic duo wins. Now we just have to keep her safe for 6 months. -
Chapter 32 Four of a Kind
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 32 Four of a Kind
What a beautiful house! Is it based off of a real property? -
Chapter 31 Playing For The House
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 31 Playing For The House
Ah... Nice, calm, domestic bliss. I'm so happy for them. Oh, and by the way, the baby is totally going to be a -
Ok... That was hot!! Holy Fuck, indeed!
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Chapter 29 Poker Face
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 29 Poker Face
I think she just set herself up for extortion charges by accepting the deal. I'm hoping she gets double crossed and they don't end up giving her a cent. (Oh wait, you guys don't do pennies anymore so I hope she doesn't get a nickel!!) -
Chapter 28 Putting Together a Good Hand
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 28 Putting Together a Good Hand
Adding friends and allies is always a good thing! All I can say is thank God this story is set in Canada instead of US. At least our boys have a better shot with the courts up there. 🇨🇦🇨🇦 -
Ah, Gary, you have a heart of gold. Everyone is redeemable in your world, and I love it because you stay true to your beliefs through every story.
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Chapter 26 We'll Deal
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 26 We'll Deal
Candy is a This is going to be a nasty fight, but I have an inkling of who will ultimately win it Do I sense a redemption arc coming for The Baboon, er, Lanny? -
Chapter 25 The Jokers Are In Play
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 25 The Jokers Are In Play
WOWSA!! This is the chapter I had been waiting for and it didn't disappoint! Just Charron's performance made the chapter great, but the reveal at the end... Ok, time to pick my jaw up off the floor. I had wondered why Candy and The Baboon got engaged so quickly. Now we know. Good chapter, Gary! -
Chapter 24 Winning Streak
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 24 Winning Streak
I got over it... The crush, not the gay thing! That was Hilarious -
Chapter 23 The Wild Card Effect
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 The Wild Card Effect
Neurotic (nur-ot-ic) n. : see: Dooley, Kendall That was a lot of emotional baggage to unpack there! At least they have matching baggage to make a set! -
Chapter 22 Making Your Own Odds
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 22 Making Your Own Odds
Me thinks Candy and/or The Bafoon are behind the juvenile graffiti, although why they would only use soap stumps me a little. One would think a can of spray paint would be just as accessible. Glad there was no damage though. -
Chapter 21 Lucky Charm
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 21 Lucky Charm
These boys could do a seminar on communication skills in a relationship. The emotions were laid out bare in this one and it worked well. I had written up a critique of the last chapter because I felt it wasn't very strong, for several reasons, but I lost it when trying to post it, so I took that as a sign to just move on. This chapter rebounded very nicely. Good job! -
What a tough chapter... You handled it very well, although I don't know if my Dad would be so calm. He'd be ready to kill.
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I am really enjoying the story. I'm also really hoping that Carlos becomes a friend and not someone who comes between our boys. I don't trust the way he's being introduced.
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I think part of Devin's problem is that if Kevin is gay, it might mean that he is too since they share the same genetics. We know that's not true, but to a 15 year old it has to be very confusing.
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This is a beautiful little love story. It's pure Headstall through and through, which means instantly lovable characters, steamy, yet romantic love scenes, and of course Happily Ever After. Excellent writing, believable dialogue, and a good time by all. Bring your toothbrush and floss, there's a lot of sweets to digest here.
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Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
I have really enjoyed reading everything. I've been on vacation and you were with me in my free time, and on the plane, and all day as I get ready to go back to work. Cheers, Gary! -
Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
Ace and Deuce are in for one helluva surprise when they get back, eh? It was a beautiful story and a perfect companion piece. A little sappy for my tastes, but it was pure Headstall through and through. Thank you for sharing it with us! -
Chapter 9 Beautiful Day
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Beautiful Day
I don't have enough floss to protect my teeth from all the sugar and sweetness ;p It reminds me of the old joke: What does a lesbian bring with her on a second date? A Uhaul. These boys didn't even make it that far! Maybe I'm just jealous, lol. -
Chapter 7 Bridge Over Troubled Water
Potterslashfan commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Bridge Over Troubled Water
I'm glad Arron is smart and not bullheaded. I loved watching his mind process everything, and get to the right conclusion.
