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  1. I think Candy's struggle is very real. The ultrasound has to be hard on any surrogate, but to have one with so much guilt, can't be easy at all. So no gender reveal party? Were those en vogue yet in 2011?
  2. Ok, can I just take back some of what I said last chapter? That was absolutely beautiful. I think I squealed a little when he walked in and saw Michael on his knees by the tree. I could instantly see the scene. THIS is why I read romances... For chapters like this one.
  3. So... Sweet... And sappy... Stuck... In... Molasses!!! Just kidding. Another great chapter. I think the only thing that bothers me about Kendalls point of view is that it seems to say you can't be single and happy. I get that he is deleriously happy and most of it is because he is with his perfect soul mate, but some of us are just fine being single. Again, maybe I'm just envious. After all, there has to be a reason that I only read romances, eh?
  4. Oh when the saints, come marching in, oh when the saints come marching in There you go making even the most vile characters human and sympathetic. Damn you, Gary... Can't you let me hate at least ONE of your characters??
  5. Go Deuce! Remind me not to get on his bad side. The dynamic duo wins. Now we just have to keep her safe for 6 months.
  6. What a beautiful house! Is it based off of a real property?
  7. Ah... Nice, calm, domestic bliss. I'm so happy for them. Oh, and by the way, the baby is totally going to be a
  8. Ok... That was hot!! Holy Fuck, indeed!
  9. I think she just set herself up for extortion charges by accepting the deal. I'm hoping she gets double crossed and they don't end up giving her a cent. (Oh wait, you guys don't do pennies anymore so I hope she doesn't get a nickel!!)
  10. Adding friends and allies is always a good thing! All I can say is thank God this story is set in Canada instead of US. At least our boys have a better shot with the courts up there. 🇨🇦🇨🇦
  11. Ah, Gary, you have a heart of gold. Everyone is redeemable in your world, and I love it because you stay true to your beliefs through every story.
  12. Candy is a This is going to be a nasty fight, but I have an inkling of who will ultimately win it Do I sense a redemption arc coming for The Baboon, er, Lanny?
  13. WOWSA!! This is the chapter I had been waiting for and it didn't disappoint! Just Charron's performance made the chapter great, but the reveal at the end... Ok, time to pick my jaw up off the floor. I had wondered why Candy and The Baboon got engaged so quickly. Now we know. Good chapter, Gary!
  14. I got over it... The crush, not the gay thing! That was Hilarious
  15. Neurotic (nur-ot-ic) n. : see: Dooley, Kendall That was a lot of emotional baggage to unpack there! At least they have matching baggage to make a set!
  16. Me thinks Candy and/or The Bafoon are behind the juvenile graffiti, although why they would only use soap stumps me a little. One would think a can of spray paint would be just as accessible. Glad there was no damage though.
  17. These boys could do a seminar on communication skills in a relationship. The emotions were laid out bare in this one and it worked well. I had written up a critique of the last chapter because I felt it wasn't very strong, for several reasons, but I lost it when trying to post it, so I took that as a sign to just move on. This chapter rebounded very nicely. Good job!
  18. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 9

    What a tough chapter... You handled it very well, although I don't know if my Dad would be so calm. He'd be ready to kill.
  19. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 4

    I am really enjoying the story. I'm also really hoping that Carlos becomes a friend and not someone who comes between our boys. I don't trust the way he's being introduced.
  20. Potterslashfan

    Chapter 1

    I think part of Devin's problem is that if Kevin is gay, it might mean that he is too since they share the same genetics. We know that's not true, but to a 15 year old it has to be very confusing.
  21. This is a beautiful little love story. It's pure Headstall through and through, which means instantly lovable characters, steamy, yet romantic love scenes, and of course Happily Ever After. Excellent writing, believable dialogue, and a good time by all. Bring your toothbrush and floss, there's a lot of sweets to digest here.
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  22. I have really enjoyed reading everything. I've been on vacation and you were with me in my free time, and on the plane, and all day as I get ready to go back to work. Cheers, Gary!
  23. Ace and Deuce are in for one helluva surprise when they get back, eh? It was a beautiful story and a perfect companion piece. A little sappy for my tastes, but it was pure Headstall through and through. Thank you for sharing it with us!
  24. I don't have enough floss to protect my teeth from all the sugar and sweetness ;p It reminds me of the old joke: What does a lesbian bring with her on a second date? A Uhaul. These boys didn't even make it that far! Maybe I'm just jealous, lol.
  25. I'm glad Arron is smart and not bullheaded. I loved watching his mind process everything, and get to the right conclusion.
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