This is my first exposure to your writing, and I like it very much. The interactions and dialogue quickly make the characters and family relationships real. The character descriptions are neatly woven into the prose, and are clearly envisioned by the reader. From a technical perspective, the grammar and spelling are excellent. Yes, current writing tools are very helpful, but there's a lot more to it than that. Though a matter of opinion, I like the shorter chapters. A picture is quickly formed and maintained, waiting for the next chapter. Good work!