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Backwoods Boy

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  1. Klamath Falls, OR
  2. clown around
  3. A very enjoyable read. Though it may be your own interpretation, the essential components of the legend have certain parallels with another supposedly-unique mythology, always an interesting discovery. Thanks for sharing this.
  4. WILLY Walter immensely loves Larry's youthful FRAME
  5. skill required
  6. A perfect story for the season 🎅
  7. grows marijuana
  8. Sydney, Australia
  9. (sorry - missed my own previous entry ) vision
  10. Kangaroo Valley, NSW, Australia
  11. looking pleased
  12. coming quickly
  13. Backwoods Boy

    Chapter 1

    This is my first exposure to your writing, and I like it very much. The interactions and dialogue quickly make the characters and family relationships real. The character descriptions are neatly woven into the prose, and are clearly envisioned by the reader. From a technical perspective, the grammar and spelling are excellent. Yes, current writing tools are very helpful, but there's a lot more to it than that. Though a matter of opinion, I like the shorter chapters. A picture is quickly formed and maintained, waiting for the next chapter. Good work!
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