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Laura S. Fox

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  1. So glad you enjoyed it! More will come!
  2. He, he, thank you! And hugs!
  3. That you are right about! Several chapters left, and yes, the story will reach its conclusion. Aron had his suspicions, he could not be blind after all, and with Alex back in full swing, everything Carter had built during the body swap sort of got swiped away. Thank you for reading and commenting!
  4. He, he, in a way, everything is, indeed, new to Carter (even though he had that 20+ chapters detour in Alex's body, lol), hence the awkwardness. Plus, that's him all right Soooo, you want poor Simon to be kicked at the curb? Don't you remember what Carter said about the guy's eyes? Those sweet puppy eyes ... He, he, just kidding. Hugs, too!
  5. Ha, ha, Carter knows how to defend his lover! Thank you for reading my story and commenting on it!
  6. Ah, thank you so much, I'm glad that these chapters are making you happy ... Carter and Aron deserve it, too, after all the struggles
  7. Thanks for the comment! He, he, indeed, Carter should now take good care of how he dresses. As for Simon, that's what at least he thinks he wants.
  8. Chapter Twenty-nine - There Goes My Heart He was still pondering over how the hell he had managed to get Aron to have sex with him so quickly when his phone started ringing. This time, he didn’t hurry to get it. Yeah, he was going to be a little sore, that was for sure. But he could barely stop a small surprised gasp when he saw the caller. “Hi,” Aron’s warm voice came through from the other side. “Hey, did you forget your keys?” Carter mumbled and looked around. “I guess you’ll
  9. He, he, Carter and subtleties ... not his strong suit, I'm afraid. The guy has a one-track mind once in a while, that, if his brain allows it ... Oh, the accident will be made all clear. But please, please forgive me if I reserve that for what I consider the perfect moment (even if the rest of the world may not agree with me, but, well, I have a brain like Carter, it's a little scumbag). And, damn, my red herrings work even when I don't intend them to be red herrings! That innuendo from Alex ... was not about suing. It was, in a way, Alex just being honest, as much as someone like him can be Thank you for keeping up with my crazy story!
  10. He, he, you're right, not telling! But you will see!😘
  11. Thanks! As for Carter, well, there is a reason why this story is named the way it is
  12. Then I'll think we'll play that game until that's over, lol! But I'll catch you, eventually!
  13. He, he, yeah, I know, that's so true about pets! What would a dog think? 'Man, that's not how you should do it! You need to come from the back! Oh, finally! What? Is that a sex position named after me? By all means, I'm flattered!' Aron ... yes, you're right, this is all new and surprising. But, in a way, he has prepared for this all his life. And he will not wait and watch. You'll see. And I think you'll be proud of him then Thanks a lot for commenting!
  14. Yes, you're reading both characters well. And trust me, I had to fight the desire of just having them 'say it' so hard while writing this. It would just not be in character for Carter to say everything directly, like this. I hope, when all is said and done, that all the pieces of the puzzle will fall in place as they should. But I trust you to tell me if I succeeded when that happens
  15. He, he, he, glad you liked it! Carter will evolve, slowly, yes, but he will, I promise! Still in love with Alex? Hugs!
  16. Ha, ha, mouthwash. But the truth is, mouthwash could make a problem bigger because it dries your mouth and makes bacteria grow back with a vengeance after the initial 'cleanse'.
  17. Yeap, you summed it up well, sorry for not making it more clear from the text. As for Simon, he will appear every now and then
  18. Kisses! As for your reservations, I totally understand!
  19. And when I think I did a good job to make things a bit more clear, I realize from people's comments that I managed to make them more complicated ... My fault, not yours, of course. I believe the reason why the separation felt so sudden was because I wasn't clear about the passing of time. Between Carter 'stalking' Alex and the separation, there's been some uneventful weeks. In the meantime, Alex, who remembered the accident, but forgot about the body swap, returned to his usual ways. That means a reset of everything Carter struggled to build for that marriage during the body swap. Before the accident, Aron's marriage to Alex was far from being in a good place. It was clear that there weren't any roses and wine anymore. So, with Alex back into his body and his old ways, Aron must have gotten pretty bitter with the 'reset' of his husband. More will transpire as follows. To the point that a big fight happened. Thank you for your comment! PS. Alex's behavior has another reason
  20. I like Goldie! Sounds nice! Hugs! (Rump was sort of naughty, I guess, :)))
  21. Oh, my dear godmom, where should I start? Well, I'm glad you understand Carter and his hesitations. One thing that's always hard to do is to keep characters in character. And I guess that is why this story ended up having so many chapters in the end. Carter is a slow learner, emotionally wise, and his road to happiness is terribly convoluted. Hence all the hiccups and mishaps. Now about Aron ... Spite doesn't quite cover it. You read Aron well in the comment you left on the previous chapter. So, hint, hint, imagine just what nerve Aron's mom struck with that commentary ... You can't fix a broken man. I think you know what I mean (God, I hate writing on tablet, my hand just slipped and now I have to continue by editing since the comment got posted anyway) Now put yourself in Alex's shoes and imagine the accident. How would that look from Alex's perspective? Ponytail girl is the key to everything. So forgive me if I hold on to her a while longer. Many hugs and lots of love! Yours truly, Rump.
  22. I know there's been some anticipation, and I'm not one not to deliver on that promise. Thank you for commenting, as usual! And, yes, more will happen from now on!
  23. Oh, no! (Reaches to offer a hand!)
  24. He, he, your feeling is right on target! But Carter, he, he, my boy, he's good at stumbling over his own two feet. So glad you enjoyed the chapter! As for what you said after the word 'thanks', I'm afraid my crown needs some polishing and I have no idea where I left it lol. Now, seriously, thank you so much for all your kind words and support.
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