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Laura S. Fox

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  1. First, let me thank for another insightful comment. And, second, let me address all the points in your comment, as they do require consideration. Good point on noticing Aron's tendency in bedroom affairs. But, you may be surprised what that really means and in what roundabout way Aron got to that. Carter really needs to get out of that river you mentioned last time, or he might just drown, lol. Yeah, you're totally right, his brain is the one 'making' him do stuff (ahem, gay stuff). The title is all on me, and by the way my notes look at this point, it's safe to say that I will reveal its meaning in the last chapter. Yes, I know, I am that evil, ha, ha. But I will leave breadcrumbs along the way, and I think people will figure out what's all about until I reach the finish line with these characters and this story. Yes, Carter will have to face his husband when he gets home, he, he. He'll have a little detour, which will take the entire next chapter, but, when in Wonderland, detours are the norm, right? And here I gave some spoilers (shaking head to myself) And now for the sensitive issue, the updates. Once in a while I might update sooner than a week, but, as things stand now, I don't want to make promises only to fail people later. Let that be a nice surprise! Thank you again, And lots of hugs! PS. And I hope I'm still Rumpelstiltskin to you!
  2. He, he, I believe Carter starts to realize exactly what you said. That is a line that once crossed can never be uncrossed. As for why Aron likes this kind of play, I hope the story will reveal some interesting bits in its progression. Loved your comment about the talking dick! Obviously, in Wonderland, one cannot help but let his dick do the talking! Hugs!
  3. Oh, he will have a lot to deal with! And I can promise only one thing: that this rabbit hole will just go deeper and deeper. So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks a lot!
  4. Ha, ha, ha, got so excited with this comment I was definitely hoping to get that I pressed the thumbs up repeatedly when I was just wanting to go for the heart thingy! Thanks a lot, Wes, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  5. Chapter Nine – Nut, Nuts, Nutter “Your husband called a few times,” Mark chimed in, holding the door for him, and seeing him to his desk like he was crippled. Carter threw his secretary a confused look. “You dropped your phone here, before heading to your meeting with Yolanda. I didn’t answer. But it’s all for the best that you didn’t have your phone with you,” Mark added in a low whisper. “I heard she’s a beast if something or someone interrupts her meetings.” “Really?” Carte
  6. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 23

    Thank you for reading! As a consolation, I will just tell you Klaus's parents loved Jake
  7. Ha, ha, color me evil ... Well, to avoid making people even more confused than they are already, I will admit to the truth that the receptionist is not an important part of the plot, and was there just as the necessary obstacle in Carter's way to see ... himself again. BUT ... as far as the chaos is concerned, ah, definitely expect more. Certainly. Undoubtedly. Thanks a lot for dropping by and commenting! Hugs!
  8. Hey, hey, thanks for the nice review/comment! Carter is clearly bent on trying at least one type of diet, so one hamburger a day sounds like a good start! And the unicorn horn, he, he, I haven't thought of that before! Well, I must say that I'm glad you noticed the mentioning of Carter's parents. They will not be just a footnote in the story, as you will see later. As for rewording the thing with the love in the ass, ha, ha, you just put it better than me! Last, but not least, thank you for liking Yolanda! She's my spirit animal!
  9. Well, my dear godmother - I feel like I should call you that, now that you gave me a new name - thanks for laughing at my jokes! Ha, ha, but really I hoped I'd make people laugh with this story, so it's a reward to hear I manage! Loved the de-nial joke, so good! :)) Well, and you're not off the mark here in regards to our guys who like to swim in the said river. How is that saying? Fake it until you make it? I don't think that ever worked. Yolanda is fooled by Alex's care for a perfect image ... well, she has no reason to doubt him, as she's my good-natured character who cannot see bad things in people, and I'm saying that without any fear of spoilers. And it's not only because she's gullible, though. Alex is a very skillful man, and let's leave it at that for now. As for your last question, I won't answer directly, but, hey, it's a comedy, and death shouldn't be in the tags, right? Lots of love, Rumpelstiltskin.
  10. Hmm, the truth being the body swap? No, it's not a dumb question, but, as Carter wondered about this, even from the beginning, he has no other reason but that he doubts he would be believed and considered crazy instead. Also, there's another thing, that will be revealed later (And I have the bases covered ;)) You will see why.
  11. Thanks for commenting! Well, to answer your question first, I didn't plan to write any other character's POVs, although it might be cool, thinking of it. At the same time, Aron's POV would give away too much and I'm evil incarnate and I want you all to suffer! Just kidding. But it truly serves the Mystery tag, the lack of any other characters' POVs. And yes, poor Carter ... But there's always a reward for trying to do the right thing, right?
  12. That's great to hear! And I love to read other people's speculations! It's just so much fun!
  13. Ha, ha, Wes, I'm sure you would do a much better job! Too bad I distributed the role to Carter already! You would have made the perfect MC! Hugs!
  14. The sofa was clearly there only for visual appeal and nothing more. Carter tossed and turned, but no matter what he did, how he coiled and uncoiled himself, he could not find an ideal sleeping position. Eventually, he settled for throwing his legs over one end, and lay there, like the perfect crash test dummy. There was no way he was going after Aron, like before, or sleeping in the same bed. In a way, this was convenient. He wasn’t going to engage in penetrative gay sex with his best frien
  15. Which only means that everything and every topic is well covered :))
  16. More as a joke, I once read a forum thread in which writers were debating, sort of, this topic, wondering how far a niche they should go to drive and draw readers' attention. Someone offered, on a funny note, that maybe a story with gay zombies would be 'fringey' enough to rise interest. Well, one might think that not such story was ever written, but, surprise, it seems there is. It is not a story in the literary sense, as it is a manga (a Japanese comics), and it's called BL of the Dead! While this might sound ludicrous, and I haven't read it, it looks like it's a pretty intense storyline that deals with tragedy and similar topics.
  17. Oh, no, by all means, speculate away! Just kidding! Whether my revelations are a surprise or confirm your suspicions, I will still be glad!
  18. You can't be more right! Carter is by no means in charge of what can and cannot transpire, as he still needs to act as though he is Alex. Plus, there might be some other obstacles in his path Thank you for your constant support!
  19. Thanks a lot for joining me on this journey, as well!
  20. Well, Carter will be faced with tough decisions along the way, some more difficult than others, that is for sure. And he will do what his heart and brain dictate, each and every time, that is what I can say! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment!
  21. First of all, thank you for the comment! Second, yay, I'm glad someone doesn't forget about the assistant! But I'm afraid that I will disappoint both you and ObicanDecko when I'll reveal the girl and her role in the story, lol. I hope you will continue to enjoy! And welcome to the mad tea party! We might not wash the dishes that often, but otherwise we have everything we need! :))
  22. Ha, ha, ha, now I've been terribly exposed!
  23. Rumpelstiltskin reporting for duty! I won't leave you in the dark in regards to Aron's motivations, at least that's not my intention. As for hope, well, hope is a good thing Just on a side note, I have the entire story figured out - you won't believe how horrible my notes look like, I think they tend to be as long as another story - including the ending and all the explanations needed. I have even a thing with the process that led to the title written down, but all right, I think that's too much useless info :)) Thanks again, for being such an insightful and generous reader!
  24. No worries, everything will be explained! And so thrilled you noticed the eyewitness! She will play a crucial role when the time is right. Ah, my big mouth! I should not say anything anymore!
  25. Hey, thanks a lot for the love you have for the story! Yes, there are explanations that will be revealed when the story gets to that point. The thing with writing a story from a single point of view is that it is impossible to know what the other characters are really thinking. Yes, you are right, Aron is not a shallow person, and he didn't just fall for Alex's good looks. All the characters are on their very convoluted paths and there is a string of ups and downs that brought them to the current time of the story. I'm glad that you're enjoying my story so far. And I hope that when everything will be said and done, you will remain with the same pleasant feeling And I feel a bit of satisfaction that you expect surprises up next. I can only guarantee that I will keep them coming Thanks a lot for all the insight! It's much appreciated!
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