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Laura S. Fox

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  1. In that case, you're welcome aboard! I promise nothing less but a mad tea party, as another reader called this story, :)) As for Alex's karma, he, he, all that will be revealed at the right moment (hint, sometime in the future) Thank you for reading and commenting!
  2. Ah, apparently, I'm story-hopping! But it's fine, right? Well, I believe that if the Sleeping Beauty had woken up, I would not have written this story! :)) Thank you for your nice comment, and we all know the answer to that question, right?
  3. Oh, god, I'm so moved right now I think I'm getting goosebumps everywhere ... I so hope that I'm not going to disappoint you, or the other people who take their time to read this story. In this type of delusion I seem to be portraying, there are two people involved, one who hoped and one who delivered on that hope, at least, apparently. Ah, I should not say more. When I'm talking to you, I feel so close to giving spoilers, :)) Just kidding. Your comments and insight are always more than welcome. They always shed new light, and in the strangest, but the most exciting way, I end up seeing my story with fresh eyes. Lots of love, Laura. PS. And I love my new nickname! It's awesome!
  4. Hey, Wes, as always, first! Yeah, I guess you're right about Alex ...
  5. Chapter Seven – Stiff, Stiff, Stiffer Carter took the glass of wine from the table with a methodical gesture, brought it to his lips and took a long sip of ... nothing. “Do you want more wine?” Aron asked him. “Just give me the bottle,” he mumbled. He needed more than that, but he had to make do with whatever he had at his disposal. So he just drank straight from the bottle, while Aron continued to just watch him in absolute shock and silence. “You knew that,” Aron eventual
  6. Go with the flow. And do have some cake while at it. It will definitely make everything sweeter, so other things might not matter 🤣
  7. Ah, but things are never that easy ... Lol, that's just me thinking about my very complicated plot. Yes, you are correct, they could not just admit that they were in love with each other. Well, Carter might not be well aware of that, but that is the absolute truth. And you're also right about Alex not letting go of Aron that easily Thanks a lot for dropping by and leaving a comment!
  8. First of all, thank you for your comment! I understand how Carter's denial may come across as something out of the ordinary. I hope that as more of the character's personality is revealed, especially through other people's eyes, not his, because we're never our own most objective judges, more of his behavior will make sense. As for the mystery part - eh, I'm not going to answer your question, since what happened during the accident is the crux of the matter, so to speak, and I would practically reveal the ending - thanks for pointing out the lack of a corresponding tag. I lived under the impression that I had to choose only two major tags, so I went for comedy and romance, as the genres went. But now I edited and updated them with both mystery and paranormal, so thanks for the suggestion
  9. That would be Alex's motivation, presumably But sorry if I'll keep you guys waiting to see why Aron did it.
  10. Thank you for your very Alice-esque comment! And I'm so glad you joined my mad tea party! As for the jaberwockie, all that is known is that it must be slain, without fail! Until next time, Hugs!
  11. Yes, yes, Carter is showing progress, and hey, who wouldn't like lasagna? He's no match for Aron, he, he. As for the unicorns, yeap, they're ready to roll. All the love, I adore your comments! They make my day!
  12. Well, I guess now I should start counting! :)) Not out od sadism, I promise! It's just like a difficult soccer game for Carter, until he gets to, ahem, score, it will just take a while. Especially since he cannot understand what team he's playing for. Thanks for the fun comment! I did lol'ed!
  13. He, he, that would have been something, I mean Aron getting Alex knocked up :)), which reminds me of that scene in Queer as Folk, when Brian asks Justin to marry him, and Michael's mom exclaims: "Oh, no, Brian got Sunshine pregnant!" You are very much correct in your assumption. Something did prompt Aron to walk down the aisle, but as for what ... I will just let it be a surprise of what I hope would be decent proportions, just not to say anything else. Thank you for all the insight! It is much appreciated!
  14. Yes, my friend, you are correct, and Alex's insecurities won't be the only problem. As for the sexy bits, he, he, I have to ask for apologies in advance, and in Carter's name, as he will navigate the sea of 'temptations' that will lie in front of him. In other words, it will take a little bit for them to get there. Thank you for your comment, and for sticking with me on this story! Hugs!
  15. Ha, ha, I hesitated between 'love' and 'lol' on this comment, and I chose the former. Yeah, Carter will do his best, that's what he always does
  16. Chapter Six – Do Cats Eat Bats? Carter had never known the blessing of having a personal assistant, but as a programmer, it wasn’t like he needed one. He wasn’t even a good team player, and he worked as a freelancer for that reason. But leaving everything in Mark’s professional hands had made him feel relieved. Tomorrow, he was going to go to work and have his entire schedule well prepped by his new assistant, while he only had to worry about being pretty, as Mark had said, while almost thro
  17. I think it's something more mundane than drugs, to answer your question and just a way to prove Alex's flippant attitude toward everyone around him, as will be shown later. Yes, it was definitely a convoluted way for Carter to spend a first day as a model, and he will have to take it all in stride. Thank you for your comment! Looking forward to surprise you, as well!
  18. Ah, ah, I'm so sure you will be extremely surprised as characters' motivations are revealed (and their true selves). Okay, without giving spoilers, maybe Alex will be the smallest surprise. As for Aron and his attraction to Alex ... Evil hint, it was not the guy's pretty face that first appealed to Aron. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the story! I hope you will find what's next interesting as well!
  19. He, he, nice pun! Thanks a lot for leaving a comment!
  20. He, he, call me a lil' witch, but you will see who Mark is, at a later date. As for the other two things, ah, yes and ... yes ... Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
  21. Ah, ah, ah, I so totally love your comment! I didn't think anyone would notice the Malis/Alice trick! As for your depictions of all of Carter's adventures in Wonderland, they are so to the point! I didn't even think them so thoroughly myself. And the Beatles reference ... 😘 As for pizzas and burgers being diet foods ... that could be arranged 😋 Thank you so much, your comments really make my day. It looks like you're really seeing through my carefully laid out setting. Hugs, Laura. And mad tea parties are always better!
  22. And you would be totally right. As for the ten pounds, he, he, Carter might just set a goal for that, lol.
  23. Hey, welcome aboard! Ha, ha, I like the "straightening out" pun. I just think that Carter will go through much transformations that might just leave him a little wrinkled, that's all As for the hot sex, he, he, maybe I should say that this story is a bit of a slow burner ... I just hope people will put up with all the characters' shenanigans until then. Lots of love, thank you for reading and commenting!
  24. Ha, ha, that will definitely happen!
  25. Well, you're definitely not off the mark. As for Carter playing the 'hysterical', I bet he has never faced a greater challenge in his life, :)) Thanks for commenting, and for reading this other story of mine
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