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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    Ha, ha, you're even harder to bring down than Klaus himself :)) I must find your kriptonite!
  2. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    Oh, I succeeded! I made you like Klaus! Now let me get my diary and write it down as a huge achievement! Just joking, sorry :)) couldn"t help it. But it was really nice to read your comment!
  3. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    Ah, sorry about scaring you. Yes, Diaz did have his fair share of suffering to deal with, and I am just so glad you noticed. Not that it excuses his behavior, but at least offers an explanation. As for what will happen to Diaz ... I think I will manage to surprise you
  4. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    He, he, it was just an endearing thing to have Jake ask for the address. Let's just say that he had his head wrapped up in other things to care about details As I replied to another commenter, Jake's reaction will be the most important element to the events that will unfold. Thank you for liking the extras on Hans and Jake's scar. I always try to give all characters, even if secondary, enough flesh and blood to be more than just extras.
  5. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    Ah ... what about Jake? That, my dear reader, is the crux of the matter. You will see
  6. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    Well said! Klaus does know that dealing with the gangs has to be brutal, or otherwise it would not be effective. You practically summarized the entire chapter in a few sentences
  7. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    He, he, Wes, I know you must have been curious ...
  8. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 18

    Chapter Eighteen It was a tad disappointing to wake up alone, but at least, he knew that he was going to be wrapped around the man again tonight, and the certainty of that thought was making him feel something, between a chuckle and something ticklish, right in the middle of his chest. His phone chimed from the nightstand, and he smiled as he read the message. “Time to start cashing in your hard earned money from the construction site. The foreman has your paycheck, pick it up from him.
  9. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    Hey Lisa! Glad to see you're still enjoying the story! Yes, there will be a new chapter pretty soon!
  10. Laura S. Fox

    Poor Viktor

    "Why the long face, lover boy?" the Swiss skater grabbed a playful handful from behind, startling Yuuri. "Oh, Chris, hi," Yuuri shifted to one side, trying to get away from Chris's sticky hands. He was leaning against the bar, a glass of orange juice in front of him, which he was eyeing mournfully. "Don't be so sad," Chris nudged him in the ribs. "They're organic." "What?" Yuuri asked, not getting the joke. "The oranges in your juice. Locally grown and all natural," Chris add
  11. Yuri!!! on Ice fanfic. Viktor is bitchy and Yuuri doesn't get it, so Chris comes to the rescue. It may contain some OOC reactions, and not so clever or correct use of the Japanese language.
  12. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Nice seeing you here! Thanks for the comment!
  13. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Oh, so happy to see people enjoying Jake's 'punishment' And sorry for keeping you waiting. I just hope it was all worth the wait! Just one thing I'll add. There's still more to the story!
  14. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Ah, thank you so much! Your offer is so generous. Unfortunately, I already built the story with the idea of trying to stay away from German, since I know only a few words ... The one phrase that matters, I already know how to say it! Damn, I so wish I had your offer when I first started. I would have liked a few cuss words in German with Klaus in the throes of passion! (And now I sound like a brat, good thing I have Jake with me as company :)) Thank you again, Nina! Comments like yours make my day.
  15. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Glad to see you didn't forget about Diaz. Thank you so much for the praise!
  16. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Well .... there's a right time for everything!
  17. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    He, he, maybe Jake is a natural!
  18. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Thank you!
  19. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    If I could leave a thousands hearts on your comment, I soooo would! Yeah, I made the Ice Man fall in love yay! I mean not me, Jake! Of course! As for hermano mayor ... We will see
  20. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Ah, thanks for telling me that, I was just suspecting something, since I haven't heard from her in quite a long time. I hope she'll get better.
  21. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Ha, ha, I don't even dare ...
  22. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Hey, glad you're glad! But there's still more to the story!
  23. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 17

    Chapter Seventeen Jake eyed the belt with growing unease. Klaus was balancing the scary object, ever so lightly, and that seemed hypnotizing. He could not tear his eyes off it. “I believe you know the drill, Jake,” Klaus began speaking. This time, Jake was not fooled. This was Klaus when angry. Never mind the even tone, the controlled gestures. He was going to get it good. “You will obey each word I say,” Klaus continued. “Undress and come here. On all fours.” Jak
  24. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    He, he, hope is a good thing And yes, my baby boy is learning!
  25. Laura S. Fox

    Chapter 16

    You have a bit of a prediction there about Jake ... And yes, Diaz is a bit blind to what's going on and who he's going up against. As for the punishment, I will see next time if I raise to everyone's expectations. I definitely hope I will!
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