Jamieeeeeeeeee!!
You've wrote a nice story with a lot of cute parts and comedy. I liked the ending and I do feel sorry for Aaron, but I also kind of feel sorry for Joey as well. Not because he was abandoned by Aaron or harrassed when he took the walk, but Aaron was his first for just about everything.. lol. Riding a bike, his first fort, the first person he came out to and maybe even the first person he liked. So he lost a lot when Aaron walked out on him.
Good story Jamie!
Krista
Hey,
You know, I was going to make Mitch the gay one in the beginning and reverse the whole story.. lol. Making it more negative than it already was, but then I wanted to make it a "light hearted story" where things do work out, but I decided not to do that as well.. Deciding that Aidan to be the gay one was what I went with, I started the story with the thought of the ending and the characters I wanted.
Thanks for reading!
Krista
Hey, thanks for commenting and reading my story.
I also think it's difficult to stay friends with someone you are attracted to or in love with, if they don't return those feelings. It's also pretty painful with a lot of let downs. I'm glad you thought my characters were well-developed as I try to develope the characters and I start with that being the first priority to my stories.
Krista
Jamieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for commenting on my story.. lol. Sorry you didn't like the ending.
I'm glad you liked the story.
Krista
Aww, thanks for that Review, Graeme!
Also, thanks Sharon for editing this Anthology for me. It wouldn't have been accepted w/out you so thanks for all your work you done on it.
Krista
To be porn it has to lack creative intent. Which means that if you have some sort of plot or story line or development that over powers or off sets the sex scenes then it isn't pornography. It is just graphic as with anything else that has some sort of sex or graphic scenes. It is only Pornography when the sex is the centeral and finishing issue of the story.
Krista
hmm.. Jared so fell on his ass this morning as it had rained last night and I was there to see it bright and early when I went to fix his breakfast... now that was funny...
He didn't think so though.
Krista