Hi,
I'm glad you're continuing this in the next Anthology, because I'm that hooked on the characters and their circumstances. I want to see what happens between Tracey and Casey. Even if they somehow find understanding - it's going to take TONS of conflict for that to happen... I'll be impatiently waiting for that.. lol.
The characters are fresh, but so far my favorite would be Will. I like humble, easy going characters that is a light spot on all of the drama and strained existence of all the characters around them.
So good story Viv!
Krista
Lol.. I would be worried. He would so have caught me taking a five hour nap today... how embarassing.
The person below me was worried about something to discover that it was nothing.
Krista
Hey,
Lol... I think Something Unexpected was just rough.
The snorkeling and the family portrait painting was what I needed to plan out for them to pass the time in the chapter and interact with all the main characters. The undressing is of things to come.
Thanks for reading!
Krista
Hello,
Here is the link to chapter 4
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One thing that I've not anticipated with this story is having things for them to do while their on the Yacht.. lol. There's only so much you can do out on the ocean so that's going to be a challege for them to be active and entertaining.
Anyway, I hope you like this new chapter.
Krista
Hey Lugh!
I was anticipating your Anthology story and I wasn't disapointed at all. I thought it was extremely well told and it was entertaining from beginning to end.
So yes, good job.
Krista
I do watch movies... lol. Not the ones I actually want to watch though. I have memorized Shrek 1 and 2 as well as the sponge bob movie..
The person below me is nervous about their upcoming weekend.
Krista
Small spoons, the larger the spoon the more the brats can throw by the spoonful.. lol. So there are no larger spoons in our house.
Hot Air Balloon ride or Parasailing.
Krista
Well the one thing that stands out to me is the Bomb Threats that happened the week before (As early as last Friday). No one was taking those seriously or evacuations would have been made until those threats and any other threat could be addressed. The very fact that it took over 2 hours for the campus and the police stations to be fully informed of the shooting that morning just has me pissed off.
The campus is huge and there is no way that security can protect every student. Knowing that, they should have evacuated everyone. The school officials should have made that happen no matter how stressful or costing it would have been. If someone was planning to shoot up a school he shouldn't have had any targets to shoot at. The school officials were taking a risk and this time it backfired on them and for their lack of concern they have 50 over all victims and countless other family members wondering why it happened.
Don't question your security measures when you're responsible for that many people it's a whole lot better to act and inform then when you've addressed the situation and everyone is as safe as possible then the meetings can start.
Krista
I'm just going to say, don't give up on a good thing. You know you're good and you know you like to write and you know you're good at it. So don't be moody like me and just stick to what you're doing.
I cannot wait for your Anthology piece I know I will like reading it.
Krista
Hey,
Lol, this is the best comment I've read all week. I'm glad you like my characters for this story as they're all so different from what I'm used to. I mean, I'm finally using slang... lol. I've not liked using slang all that much lol, but anyway, thanks for reading this story and commenting.
Krista
Eh.. unless Grey's Anatomy, Desperate Houswives, America's Next Top Model, and The Jeff Corwin Experience is on I have no use for Television. So the internet is more useful to me.
Do you still own: A childhood stuffed animal or a childhood baby blanket?
I still have both.. lol...
Krista
lol...foreshadowing?
I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
Anyway, seriously, thanks for reading and liking this story and commenting.. lol. All of that really makes me want to work harder so that people don't have to wait weeks between chapters.
Krista