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Been busy today....
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I'm OK with not being the most loquacious among us.
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This was a really emotional chapter. Especially knowing some sort of encounter is coming. Caleb has so much work to do on himself. But don't forget... this is me. All might not be as it seems with Caleb. Just sayin'.I
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Can you wait until the next chapter?
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The more comments I read like yours just reinforces my decision to rewrite this chapter. Thanks for the great feedback. I love making readers cry. Lol!
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I still occasionally grab one at the bank. (I have to go for work a couple times a month, haven't been inside my own bank in years)
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I went out to lunch with a friend. Two and a half hours later... 69 notifications. Lol You're absolutely right. Elijah has to have a conversation about Kage with Ashton before they can even think about moving forward. The Laramees will open their arms to anyone who had a hand in bringing their boys home. Caleb will have plenty of hurdles to get over. He has a really long road ahead of him to redemption.
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Hope is the perfect word for the theme of this chapter. You nailed it perfectly. Book 3 will get there. I just have to push a few things out of the way first.
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I love pulling on heartstrings. As a mom, I can't even imagine the anguish of having a child go missing, let alone her only two. It was fitting that Ashton's first message was for his parents. In my mind, there was no other choice. The Laramees could care less what sex their children's mates are. They are the poster parents for unconditional acceptance. Ashton is the more extroverted. Austin was quieter. They'll balance out Elijah and Tyler. The twins have a lot of recovery to do, but I think they'll be okay.
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Try being me. Spirit Wolves got started about four years ago and sat stagnant for at least two before I dusted it off. This story consumed nearly every waking moment for four months. These guys were so insistent to have their say. I tried to get the third installment started, but even in editing this gang had to be the center of attention. (Like some other people we know) But, yes. There will be a third story. Unfortunately you'll have to wait a while. It's a privilege to know that so many of you are invested in this series. 😘
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It remains to be seen what role Corbin will play in the next book. He might make a good addition to the friend roster. Enjoy your party!
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Honestly, this chapter was a joy to rewrite. It needed all of those little moments, even the sad ones relating to Caleb. Attention Krew! If you behave I'll give you candy!🤣
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Score one for a direct hit on the heart ❤️
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Great minds think alike. Cinnamon for sure. Elijah got the peanutty smell associated with Ashton's favorite cookie. Makes sense to use a snickerdoodle related ingredient for Austin.
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I like it. Cinnamon is crucial to snickerdoodles. I don't think I've used cedar yet.
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But not after the dogs have been let out.
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You're not right! But in a good way 🤣🤣
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Loose ends need tying at this point and Caleb needs to be segued into his story. It's complicated, but so far I'm keeping all the balls up in the air as I juggle. I haven't figured out what Tyler should smell like to Austin. Amy suggestions?
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The mom in me totally took over writing that part, as well as the lollipop scene. My kids always made sure the plunked the sticky end in my hand. Lol
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I'm so happy I rewrote nearly the entire chapter. The rough draft sucked donkey balls. I don't know what I was thinking. This version is 1000 times better. Thanks!
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