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Yeah.... I actually started this story in third person and decided to switch after 3 chapters. I had to go back and change everything. Third person is my usual go-to so I'm not surprised it slipped in. That's what my editing team is supposed to catch but @Mrsgnomie had things going on this week. Life happens. And @astone2292 missed it too. He's also been suspiciously quiet. Things are going to start moving along. As far as which direction.....there's no compass capable of pinpointing it.
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Probably not very long.
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It was Troy panting like an overheated dachshund.
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Every time I hear that name all I can hear is Phoebe singing "hold me closer Tony Daaanza" 🤣
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The feasts can't all be about food.
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Hehe. Gnomie got smacked!
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Hello! Welcome to the Korner Krew where conspiracy theories and sarcasm abound! Hopefully @weinerdog didn't eat all the snacks. If he did we'll have to muzzle him again.
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The trust from Miles grandparents was already established so nothing changes with that. It wasn't a life changing amount. I never decided on a figure because if it's enough to cover 4 years at a state college or university, then it could very well be 5 figures, maybe low six at most. The identity theft has been taken care of. It's already been mentioned that the Porters aren't pressing charges so there's nothing the police can do Miles didn't use the identity for financial gain. Again, I wasn't going to get bogged down by the little details.
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For the sake of the story not getting bogged down in minute details I had to make it easy. Also...Kyle gets mentioned in the next chapter. I just didn't have time to stick a reunion scene in there.
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I am elated to see that I have have conditioned the Krew to go down the darkest paths and that nothing is off limits.
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The Drop In Centre 3
kbois replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
I had a meatloaf sandwich for lunch lol. I'm so glad your dental saga is over. (Let's hope it stays that way) Sorry Michael is under the weather. Vietnamese will be there when he's better and can enjoy it. Hope he feels better soon. xo -
Gnomie can't take credit for much this time around. Caleb.... Not gonna happen Also, you should be anxious. So much so that I suggest you make sure your prescriptions for anti anxiety meds have been refilled.
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First one to call out the Easter egg gets bragging rights for the rest of the story.
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Yes, Miles father is in jail. As is his mother. Neither of them will be getting out any time in the near or even distant future.
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Damn. You guessed it.
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I will drop a little tidbit. There is a smidge of foreshadowing in this chapter but it's extremely subtle. It'll be interesting to see see who picks up on it when it becomes relevant later on.
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That Chevy will haunt me to my dying days. But you hit the nail on the head. Making a big deal over the money would distract from more important issues.
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Eh... Be careful what you wish for.
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Miles will tell him. It's only fair as Miles knows that Troy has a trust too. Neither of which will be a big deal. Oh, and I lied. I think Miles trust gets mention 4 or 5 times, not once or twice. Still, not a major contribution to the plot.
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