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  1. kbois

    Chapter 1

    You start out so nice and sweet... it's cute... but we all know better.
  2. kbois

    Chapter 1

    Oh....definitely buckle up Buttercup. Hope you like twists and turns. Rage moments are real. Make sure you read the comments... they get better and better as you go along. My Krew is "special". Enjoy and feel free to comment along the way. Also... don't believe anything a short-legged yapper says.
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    The Offer

    Thankfully, most cops are decent, hard-working people who take their job seriously. But, there are more than a fair share who not only stretch the truth- they twist it, pull it, smash it and squish it. Government around the world is rife with corruption. @lawfulneutralmage has done a fantastic job of making us question who's who in the spin cycle of bad guy vs good guy. I still think Jamie needs to come clean with Mike. Nothing good ever comes from hiding important things from those we profess to love (**slowly backs away whistling a mindless tune because only one person in her real life knows she has a secret alter-ego**) 😆
  4. Nothing else will drive your readers over the edge. You know what they say... Go big or go home. 😈
  5. I really love my supernatural series, but you're right.. it was extremely time consuming. Started the first story in 2019 and let it sit for two years. Then it was another 2.5 years of finishing the first story and writing two sequels. I've had to put my new story on hold fora bit while real life interrupts me with a gazillion things to do this month. The supernatural genre will get put on the back burner for a while... there's too much other stuff taking up space in my head right now. Lol
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    Retirement

    I know you know that I've said multiple times that I'm proud of you... but I'm saying it again... I'm so effing proud of you! Yes, you are fortunate to be able to ditch the hassles of people-ing for a paycheck but you don't need to feel guilty. Many others are able to do the same thing. All of you are doing what is right for you. Michael gets to provide for your needs and take care if you, Dan gets to make sure you are taking care of yourself and that you occasionally get donuts, and you, my friend, are finding a new person inside of you... someone who is happy. Seize whatever opportunities that come your way to enjoy life to the fullest. And never forget your donut soul mate🍩❤️🍩 xoxo
  7. Sorry I couldn't help with this one. Way too much on my plate right now!
  8. kbois

    Chapter 1

    Thanks tim. It's kinda fun having a character like Lucifer lurking in my brain... 🤣🤣
  9. kbois

    Chapter 1

    Lucifer only checks in with me occasionally.
  10. Another thought... I don't think Jamie will be able to keep his abilities from Mike. For one-Wanker is shady AF and I would take everything he said with a grain of salt. Sure, Jamie needs to figure out the extent of what his abilities are, but he needs someone he can trust to help him gauge what he can do so he doesn't hurt himself or others. Wanker is an idiot.
  11. It's been an interesting first two weeks at my new job. I get that online training modules are the way to go for most companies nowadays, but there's something to be said for hands on, in classroom training. It's one thing to read how to do something and pass the knowledge test and another to actually practice it and being shown how to navigate all the different software systems. Eh.. it'll come eventually. Still waiting to hear about a condo we're interested in. Keep your fingers crossed. It'll cut hubby's commute down to about 10-15 minutes and mine will be about the same but I won't have to battle the idiots crossing the Manatee River everyday. Snowbird season winds down at the end of March... woohoo! Goodbye weekend... until next time. Have a good week everyone!
  12. Interesting chapter. The plot thickens and the possibilities are endless. Supernatural stories are fun both to read and write.
  13. I don't doubt it one freaking bit. (I'm kinda partial to the 'in uniform' option) 😆
  14. yeah... my mind just went there.
  15. What's a story without a few red herrings? And cliffies. And the awesome twisty-turnies? I'm now thoroughly invested in the story. Great writing. The editing ain't bad either. (Luv ya tim! 😘)
  16. kbois

    Discoveries

    Wait..... This is a paying gig? 😄
  17. kbois

    Fly!

    That and a voice box. Can you picture the lemmings running toward us in cute little miniature gladiator outfits yelling Chaaaarge! We'd be screwed.
  18. kbois

    Fly!

    Stubborn Cow-man indeed. You've got a warped mind, my friend.
  19. kbois

    Discoveries

    This was a great building chapter. It's not often that you see characters so upfront with each other so early in their relationship. You can't build anything unless there's a solid foundation and these two have laid it down (yes... double entendre..lol)
  20. You're a little extra spicy today aren't you?
  21. Unless you count the blisters on the end of my fingers from typing all the suggestions. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Great way to end the story!
  22. Dominic swiping Dylan's phone..😅😅 Lock your phones peeps... just do it. Otherwise, kids and pain in the ass siblings will run with it. Every. Time. (My brother learned the hard way after a certain sister changed his background photo not once, not twice, but three times. Close up of the nostrils, close up of the inside of her mouth and a close up of the crease of her bent elbow. Sucker.)
  23. kbois

    Life ... Really?

    You are in such an amazing place right now and I'm so proud of you. Sometimes it's hard not to focus on the negative, especially when it brings you into a headspace that's not a good place to be. We all need reminders everyday of what's good in life. Having a support system is crucial. Thanks for the reminder to stop and focus on the good stuff (like donuts) xoxo
  24. Where's the fun in that?
  25. Life without donuts would be a sad place.
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