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i can see a massive strain about to be put on artie and dizzy's relationship, adam is already watching them like a hawk and foiling any plans to be intimate. sadie is going to ruin what little intimacy they can get when adam isn't watching. sadie, like adam, also seems to treat artie like a child, someone who needs to be parented because they don't know any better. artie and dizzy need independence from those two and to start making their own decisions regarding their young adulthood. i think with this new development, artie and dizzy are going to end up unraveling, just like dizzy was afraid of with ezra having an influence on artie, unless they take a stand and say enough is enough. dizzy's mom doesn't strike me as being any better than sadie. it's almost as if she'd rather they not be together. NEWSFLASH ADULTS: artie and dizzy's relationship is none of your business whatsoever, and you have no say on whether or not they're allowed to sleep together or show affection. either support them completely or state your intentions to sabotage them.

I'm enjoying Chris's new cockiness, i was getting tired of the meek boy he used to be. I'm kinda slapping my head though, three kingdoms, three artifacts, three tattoos, three voices, library directs you to three books when asked about the three different voices, three separate energy signatures..... i mean come on Chris give your head a shake man! it's right there in front of your face! instead of pouring energy into the 3 in 1 book, i think he should pour some of his soul into it instead. instead of trying to use it like it's just an item that serves a function, he should try to communicate with it as if it's a separate entity altogether. ask it to show you what's on it's pages instead of trying to force it into showing you.

i thought you said that when you graduated from an apprentice hero to full member you get to pick a different name anyway? i was not expecting rampart lol not exactly smooth rolling off the tongue

Adam's obsession with keeping them from getting too close is getting old, no wonder artie hasn't been comfortable with PDAs, Adam would probably come down on them. confining dizzy to the couch makes me think Adam is projecting his own insecurities with artie growing up onto their developing relationship. two 15-16 year old boys having a sleep over? sure who cares if they sleep in the same room! or even the same bed! boyfriends? absolutely not, to the couch with you! really makes me shake my head 🙄 artie needs to do exactly what he did in this chapter and call Adam on his bs more often. Adam treats him like he's a child and not a young adult.

I'm beginning to wonder if victor feels insecure or inadequate being Chris's boyfriend, he tends to give Chris a hard time whenever he displays any amount of his power. he should be encouraging it, building Chris up to be as strong as possible.

awesome chapter! i love that you made it longer, the 5000 words or less ones seem to fly by in seconds. it looks like Chris is slowly (very slowly) starting to realize he is no longer a little school boy and is someone of note. would like to see his maturity blossom a little more though, he still seems a bit naive and doubtful of his abilities. i find it comical that Chris's dad is still pushing the college entrance exams 🤦‍♂️ he's an elven prince, now ambassador between the 3 earthly races and the elves. he's not gonna have the time to study meaningless human subjects when he's so much more than that! why the hell is he going to pursue a petty human career when he is entitled to more money than he could spend in 5 lifetimes, and is potentially going to live 1000 years or more? get your priorities straight William, Chris is above this now. the tower will be his new school library and the hall will be his new classroom along with the sparing room. i really want to see Chris leave behind the little boy and for the man inside to emerge finally. on a separate note, I'd sell you my organs for a threesome with Chris, victor, and etalos in one of the upcoming chapters 😬😘 he sounds freaking cute!

what do i keep saying? BACK TO THE HALL WITH YOU!!! lol now he needs to refine all that raw power he has swirling around inside of him. i knew i liked ethnar, he's the only one who sees the potential in Chris and can mold it due to his own significant power. everyone else tells him to be careful and not overdo it or just cowers in fear and amazement, ethnar steps up and says bring it. i wonder what those chains are all about? i wonder what would have happened if Chris hadn't of been tripped up by them setting off his magnus spell prematurely.

I'm absolutely loving this new lian after 2 years!

i wonder if rory and finn would adopt me lol

Chris at the end of the spar: "wow i was really nervous about fighting 4 platinums, thanks for holding back though and letting me win!" the 4 platinum elves: 🥵🥵🥵🥵 i can just see it now lol

life will teach much more than classes ever could. i would be as far away from the public eye as possible if i was immortal. i would have a library as big as any in the world but no i disagree that education=knowledge unless you mean self education. there's a reason the smartest people in the world have been dropouts. the educational system tried to put them in a box and they wanted to be outside of it. having a mentor and learning skills and applying real world teachings is different than what you would experience in any classroom.

why in god's name would you need or want college when you have the realm waiting for you to live in for practically an eternity??? lol goodbye earth! nice knowing ya!

I've been waiting for ethnar to give Chris a kick in the pants, everyone else is coddling him. kind of like those scenes in the movies, someone needs get him alone, give him a real one-two slap across the face, and tell him to grow up. 18 years old is plenty old enough to start acting like an adult. i was hoping after the ascension that he would be a little more "with it", but he still seems totally innocent and naive about life in general. i think his father and now victor are partially to blame, they treat him like he's made of glass and shelter him from the less beautiful parts of life.

i envy kids that are learning to spank it and have locks on their doors lol that's a luxury i never had growing up. i swear it's like parents think their kids are cooking meth in their bedrooms sometimes, like no we just don't feel like giving you an eyeful because you don't know what privacy means lol

whelp.... that was a curveball lol i wonder if jake is gonna get blue balls with this prolonged dry spell.

holy shit balls go eat a snickers dude lol jk 😅😅😅 that was almost as long as this chapter. I'll never make a predictive analysis ever again! pls don't beat me 😱😱😱

I'm a simple guy, i see Andrew Todd, i click. I'd like a red eye ticket to this "emerald isle" as well please 👀

don't you remember the little snippet about levi never ever touching the cookies he gives dorian? even when offered some? if you ask me that's a dead giveaway, whether or not his mom is in on it remains to be seen. I'm just curious if Dorian has figured out it's the cookies yet

jesus christ i think i just went cross eyed trying to follow the emotions in this chapter 👁🙅‍♂️👁

he's finally starting to realize this isn't just flattery and platitudes, he's the real deal! i can't wait to see what kinda power king ethnar has under his belt! he's probably the only one in the realm that can give Chris a run for his money. i wonder how old Chris will end up being?? I'm guessing full on immortal. Chris is going to need his own personal harem to keep him sated lol

i think that's the final hurdle at the end of the race for danny, right now he's on the very edge. would you rather be in a relationship with a girl and sneak around with your best friend cause "you have feelings for him but you don't know what they are" or do you take the chance at seeing where those feelings go. it may take days, weeks, months, or even years to sort out where they lead but jake will be there to help Danny with his feelings and to offer support. some people don't "realize" that they were in love the whole time until it's almost too late.

the situation i have in my head I've read somewhere before but can't remember where. basically ryan knew this was gonna happen at some point, he could tell jake never fully got over danny but was so in love with jake he just decided to roll with it and enjoy their time together while it lasts, pretending to be ignorant to the inevitable conclusion down the road. danny and jake are gonna be a mess and ryan is going to be the rock. i can see ryan becoming a best friend to danny and a supportive ex to jake. now that the horses have left the barn so to speak, ryan will give up the pretense of a forever relationship and push jake and danny together.

i wasn't gonna say i told you so, but......👀🙈

hopefully this ascension will knock some sense into Chris lol the most powerful vampire on earth is nervous around you and you say he's just boosting your ego lol i wonder what the scanner would have read Chris as? probably would have short circuited the thing lol

now that danny is starting to accept who he is i think shit is going to hit the fan soon. he probably pushed ryan into Jake's arms because he couldn't face trying to reestablish the direction of where their relationship was going before the bedroom confession. he wants jake to be happy but after breaking his heart and telling jake to move on he doesn't see himself as that person anymore. despite his supportive encouragement on jake pursuing ryan i think deep inside it's killing him and he's going to reach a breaking point.