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I have a bad feeling about this visit, you don't react the way mark did just as a heat of the moment thing. He's gonna pull something, try and brow beat Kayden like he's done for years, and make him come home. I honestly half thought mark would be hiding in the back seat when cho pulled up and they were gonna kidnap him 😅 I'm so thrilled trent is pushing the fitness sessions on Kayden, he's gonna become a little Dynamo. I just hope he gets over his self consciousness about his body. I seriously hope trent grows out of the excessive smoking and drinking though, everything in moderation is fine but i mean come on lol they haven't done hardly a single thing that didn't involve sex or drugs or alcohol when not in school. the movie thing was also actually pretty refreshing.

Awe man 😭 i was so looking forward to fin and zad navigating their new romance and now i find out zad dies before middle age 😭😭😭 poor fin I feel so sorry for him, he finally was able to embrace his love of a wolf only to have it snatched from his hands. I hope that guy who caused this gets what's coming though.

I'm sorry but i don't have much sympathy for Kayden and Trent 🤦🤦🤦 i mean really? All my sorrow goes to emma this chapter, i was so dang excited for her and then that stupid woman ruined everything. Please kill her off 😅 it may have been her only appearance but it would give me immense satisfaction if they were to come across her obituary that week 🙈 also, screw mark and the horse he rode in on, go eat a 🍆 you miserable jackass

I'm sorry but i don't have much sympathy for Kayden and Trent 🤦🤦🤦 i mean really? All my sorrow goes to emma this chapter, i was so damn excited for her and then that stupid cunt ruined everything. Please kill her off 😅 it may have been her only appearance but it would give me immense satisfaction if they were to come across her obituary that week 🙈 also, fuck mark and the horse he rode in on, go eat a dick you miserable fuck.

i just found this story and binged every chapter up to this one in an afternoon 🤣 I LOVE THIS STORY

I'm so glad this story is back up and running! i absolutely love it so far and can't wait to see where it goes! i wanna see kayden take a wrecking ball to trent's inner walls and past trauma. also wanna see kayden escape the clutches of his batshit crazy father, hopefully into trent's arms

awesome chapter! loving where this is going 😁 i agree with the big guy, as sexy as youngsters are all together, kotik needs to get out from under baldrics skirt and get some real training. baldric is in over his head with kotik.

the dragon ball Z 😂😂😂

now let's hope he doesn't vanish for 100 years when the world needs him the most.....👀

i don't think I like baldric's father too much, not much at all. baldric could so easily overthrow him it's comical that the duke thinks he can order his son around after what he just accomplished on the battlefield

absolutely amazing, i hope Old Man isn't gone for good!

oh sweet jesus i need popcorn! stat! 🍿🍿🍿

OMG THIS CHAPTER!!! i absolutely loved Old Man's secret identity revel, and the way he made baldric feel like a child instead of the calm cool collected man child he's made himself out to be! i seriously hope this birthday is a birthday to end all birthdays. please don't send Old Man away so soon after kotik's get together.

just keeps getting better and better!! 😍😍😍

i haven't been this invested in a story since the kandric saga, please never stop 🙏 this story was made for me!

i might have been wrong about the polish threesome but I'm definitely not disappointed lol

i hope bartek gets in on the action and they rock little damien's world

I'm hoping for a hot and sweaty damien sandwich!! 😋😋😋

i can see a massive strain about to be put on artie and dizzy's relationship, adam is already watching them like a hawk and foiling any plans to be intimate. sadie is going to ruin what little intimacy they can get when adam isn't watching. sadie, like adam, also seems to treat artie like a child, someone who needs to be parented because they don't know any better. artie and dizzy need independence from those two and to start making their own decisions regarding their young adulthood. i think with this new development, artie and dizzy are going to end up unraveling, just like dizzy was afraid of with ezra having an influence on artie, unless they take a stand and say enough is enough. dizzy's mom doesn't strike me as being any better than sadie. it's almost as if she'd rather they not be together. NEWSFLASH ADULTS: artie and dizzy's relationship is none of your business whatsoever, and you have no say on whether or not they're allowed to sleep together or show affection. either support them completely or state your intentions to sabotage them.

I'm enjoying Chris's new cockiness, i was getting tired of the meek boy he used to be. I'm kinda slapping my head though, three kingdoms, three artifacts, three tattoos, three voices, library directs you to three books when asked about the three different voices, three separate energy signatures..... i mean come on Chris give your head a shake man! it's right there in front of your face! instead of pouring energy into the 3 in 1 book, i think he should pour some of his soul into it instead. instead of trying to use it like it's just an item that serves a function, he should try to communicate with it as if it's a separate entity altogether. ask it to show you what's on it's pages instead of trying to force it into showing you.

i thought you said that when you graduated from an apprentice hero to full member you get to pick a different name anyway? i was not expecting rampart lol not exactly smooth rolling off the tongue

Adam's obsession with keeping them from getting too close is getting old, no wonder artie hasn't been comfortable with PDAs, Adam would probably come down on them. confining dizzy to the couch makes me think Adam is projecting his own insecurities with artie growing up onto their developing relationship. two 15-16 year old boys having a sleep over? sure who cares if they sleep in the same room! or even the same bed! boyfriends? absolutely not, to the couch with you! really makes me shake my head 🙄 artie needs to do exactly what he did in this chapter and call Adam on his bs more often. Adam treats him like he's a child and not a young adult.

I'm beginning to wonder if victor feels insecure or inadequate being Chris's boyfriend, he tends to give Chris a hard time whenever he displays any amount of his power. he should be encouraging it, building Chris up to be as strong as possible.

awesome chapter! i love that you made it longer, the 5000 words or less ones seem to fly by in seconds. it looks like Chris is slowly (very slowly) starting to realize he is no longer a little school boy and is someone of note. would like to see his maturity blossom a little more though, he still seems a bit naive and doubtful of his abilities. i find it comical that Chris's dad is still pushing the college entrance exams 🤦‍♂️ he's an elven prince, now ambassador between the 3 earthly races and the elves. he's not gonna have the time to study meaningless human subjects when he's so much more than that! why the hell is he going to pursue a petty human career when he is entitled to more money than he could spend in 5 lifetimes, and is potentially going to live 1000 years or more? get your priorities straight William, Chris is above this now. the tower will be his new school library and the hall will be his new classroom along with the sparing room. i really want to see Chris leave behind the little boy and for the man inside to emerge finally. on a separate note, I'd sell you my organs for a threesome with Chris, victor, and etalos in one of the upcoming chapters 😬😘 he sounds freaking cute!

what do i keep saying? BACK TO THE HALL WITH YOU!!! lol now he needs to refine all that raw power he has swirling around inside of him. i knew i liked ethnar, he's the only one who sees the potential in Chris and can mold it due to his own significant power. everyone else tells him to be careful and not overdo it or just cowers in fear and amazement, ethnar steps up and says bring it. i wonder what those chains are all about? i wonder what would have happened if Chris hadn't of been tripped up by them setting off his magnus spell prematurely.