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That... would be criminally evil. Funny.. But criminally evil. Really enjoyed this chapter. The peek into the governing and general mentalities of the vampire nation always makes me smile.
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Nice to see their family dynamic working so well. Imagine how inconvenient that would be. Just chilling (pun intended) before dinner and then suddenly it's snowing and the temps plummet. On the upside for the family, summertime just improved 100% for them.
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The story is off to a good start. I'm excited to see where it goes. I love a strong matriarch in a story. They are usually such cool people
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Just caught up, I know I'm very behind. I do hope finishing the story is still in the works. Curious to see how plays out.
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But what became of benji.. I must know that the tiger is ok.
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So he's a little broken in the head, but it could be much worse. Oh to be a fly on that wall for the psych appointment. Most dangerous couples counselling to on the planet. Love the plot twists though. This has been a great direction. And nearing so close to the end. I hope you'll decide to keep writing. If you need alpha or beta readers. would be happy to offer my help up.
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Talk about parent issues. Not a mental break, just an alien grafted into your head at the dna level, and a prince at that. That may take a little bit to get their collective heads wrapped around. Wonder how JJ will deal with that tidbit of info, If he forgives for being set on fire. Poor Benji and that upcoming cry session. "my bf set me on fire, then got shot, then vanished.." Just how badly do you want to break Dr Dull's brain with revelations.
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Short but wow. Feel a little bad for them. First relationships are always rough imo. Glad he didnt do any major damage to JJ. Now if he can just shut down the explosive part of that exchange hes in business. Another trip to talk to the others in his head should prove interesting.
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And the star of the book appears... "Benji, his plush Bengal Tiger." My new favorite character.
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I get it, of sorts. I was an only child and the pastors son at that. When they found out I was gay at 14, I was kicked out. So the abandonment issues I get full course. The browbeating the oldest is abuse like any other in my book. Hate that it happens.
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I think its a safe bet most of your readers would be looking forward to more. I personally am looking forward to more. Work has a way of wearing everyone down, don't sweat the small details where you can. Would rather a late chapter than a burnout. Gotta say I do kinda dislike Travis's parents. So aggressively combative to him and not the other brat.
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Yeah. I died a little for them.
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Good start. Love the cuddleing. It's a great way to spend any first date imo lol. Granted dates don't usualy end with the other side throwing fireballs. Coming out really was a go big or go home lol. But yay, once they deal with the powers, and the fact he could have appeared in josh's bedroom any/every night with no consequences. They can start figuring their shi*t out.
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letting loose a little might help him get a better understand on Prometheus. Who i think could probably drink them all under the table lol. But yes. a kiss and a promise wouldn't be a bad way to cap a night before going back to pissed off parents because the brat would totally tell on him. I do feel bad for JJ. When your friends dump on you when your being yourself. it suck. Did that far to many times in high school/college/work.. maybe someday we can learn lol
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Good. The story was a very entertaining read, glad you decided to post a little to tidy up it up a little. Will be interesting to see some of the missing details and where if anything you go from there.
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Morning wood... Facts of life that should be accepted by teens lol. Still nice to see them getting along better. I think everyone without siblings has that kind of thought about how it would be nice to have them. The reverse of that is also true. But his brother needs some serious work. parents to for that matter. "you've found friends... finally! now stop spending time with them and come do free labor..." Still excited to see where the story goes. Good luck with the new job!
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So cute watching a couple bicker. Nice he's finally letting someone else in a bit.
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Been stuck in a tent camping all weekend. This has Ben an awesome distraction. I'm eager to see how long it takes for him too come to grips with his feelings for jj.
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Much better now. Released and everything.
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Had only just started the early chapters in the previous 2 book,Novelas w/e. Ended up in the hospital. This story became one of the things keeping me sane. Love wyns character. So want to see him go on to be amazing. And maybe steal a bookworm. anyway, good luck. Can't wait for more.
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Chapter 2 - Match and Matched
Restolock commented on WritersBlock404's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Match and Matched
Deeply enjoying the story so far. It's unique and I'm excited to see where you go with it Love the snoopy AI -
I Want to Be a Part of It
Restolock commented on Altimexis's story chapter in I Want to Be a Part of It
Really enjoying this story. Curious to see where you go with it. -
Book 1 Epilogue: Elementals.
Restolock commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Book 1 Epilogue: Elementals.
This had been a really great read. Spent some time in a hospital so feel a bit behind for a while. Absolutely love the character development that had gone on and really curious to see how the story continues from here. Looking forward to reading more from you. -
Chance: Into the Oblivion
Restolock commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Chance: Into the Oblivion
Just finished binge reading the story. So very good, there is so much going on. Looking forward to seeing what comes next. -
Really looking forward to what comes next. The start has me intrigued for the whole story.
