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Men. They are un-understandable
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Matt needs to feel/know he has the independence/strength within himself. And I think you’re exactly right. He needs to succeed on his own but he needs to know Seamus is there. And that will come. It’s not always easy to navigate- 37 comments
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Men. They are un-understandable
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
This. I know some are frustrated with Matt. But he's freshly 21, his relationship is bounds above others. Living with someone you're dating is different than living with someone as a roommate. I think its okay for Matt to slow it down if that's what makes him feel comfortable. Especially if his past relationships didn't work out. Do they need to talk, yes. And Matt knows that. He's learning how to do it right.- 37 comments
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Matt was on a roll—absolutely killing his classes. There was one month left and he was almost finished with everything he could be done with and his end of year projects were as far as they could be at this point. He met with a small group between classes. He loved it. They each created a business plan and then someone in the group would audit another. It was challenging and involved so many different aspects of what he’d been learning. It felt like a real-life trial. Matt was more excited than
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Double post- 34 comments
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Hmmm...Seamus and Kelly vs Seamus and Matt. Possible parallels... interesting- 34 comments
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
I hope you do read them. Just be prepared for some angsty drawn out drama. Suffering is my style, evidentially. We still have 13-14 chapters left. Them getting together is just the beginning. Lots of stuff coming our way.- 34 comments
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Thank you!- 34 comments
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
I get where you're coming from but "going home for the summer" is kind of an honored tradition. It's not so much that Matt is being dumb, as Matt's coming from a place where he knows this is the last summer he has with his dad before he get's an adult job and adult responsibilities. I think he talks more about this in the next chapter *Spoiler* how he would feel guilty giving up his last summer with his dad because he wanted to be with a boyfriend. Either him and Seamus last, in which they get to spend their whole lives together, so it's no big deal to spend one summer apart. Or Matt stays with Seamus for the summer, they break up, and Matt missed that time with his dad because he was basing his decisions on hormones and feelings. Matt going home shouldn't be Seamus's decision. He is still a college student, he should be able to go home for two months.- 34 comments
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Yes, kids are clingy. Especially when their world is so small!- 34 comments
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Yes, that would be a very good thing! If only so many of us could see us through other peoples eyes.- 34 comments
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Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
He does...and he doesn't. Matt genuinely wants to give Seamus a break out of fear that Seamus would get burned out or feel taken advantage of...he just doesn't understand how it might come off to Seamus...........- 34 comments
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It took longer than usual to navigate the door lock. Seamus could barely keep the key steady as he tried to get the damn door open. Looked like Matt wasn’t the only one sprinting on nerves and adrenaline. Was any of this a good idea? Matt had no clue. Was it a terrible idea? Hell no. Finally, Seamus pushed the door open. Matt smirked as he walked by. Took you long enough to which Seamus blushed. Seamus never blushed. But he composed himself quickly and took Matt’s hand, pulling him along, r
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Phew! I saw the angry and was like...wait, what?! But, yes, this makes sense lol- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
He really doesn't drink much from here on out. Only a couple times, but not much. He hates who he is and knows it's not a good look on him. Sucks. I don't think Hilary was instigating as much as pointing out an obvious fact that everyone saw but Matt needed help seeing.- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Yes, I reread it a few months ago and was annoyed with myself. Oh well, that ship sailed! This was one smoother.- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
actually.... You should read my other books. This is a speeding rocket in comparison. By far the quickest two of my characters have ever gotten together.- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
We learn more about Seamus's dating history soon. It explains some of his reservations. But he did it, for the sake of sanity, he was direct with Matt. Matt knows Seamus well but I do think Matt is a little more observant once he's in the loop.- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Steaks! Steaks! Steaks! Steaks! Yes. Onwards and upwards!- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
I don't know what you mean when you say "you could end it right here?" That sounds terrible. There's so much growth left. We don't even really know Seamus! Tell us more about Kelly. Or Matt. How does Matt grow as a parent? They haven't even consumated their relationship. Who causes the conflict? Climax? Resolution? End now? Blasphemy.- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
I think Matt will always feel like the relationship is unbalanced. But it won't actually be.- 50 comments
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Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
I don’t know that he’ll ever need to. If he does, I don’t think he’ll advertise himself like that again lol. He learned his lesson- 50 comments
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Friday night, after Aidan was safe and sound with Grandpa, Seamus dragged Matt out of the apartment and took him to Coffee|Bar. Despite having worked the day shift a while now, he’d never been there after hours. The live music was a woman and her acoustic guitar, singing cover songs that were better than the originals. Patrons sat around the tables laughing, enjoying the low-lit atmosphere while waiters and waitresses served beer and wine. Matt wasn’t even sure this was the same place he’d worke
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Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
Correction: 19 chapters.- 40 comments
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Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
14 chapters total, so a few more to go! There is a spin off book in progress but not staring these two.- 40 comments
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*gasp* I’m offended
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