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Mrsgnomie

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  1. Thank you! I may be partial but I do think this is a great story. I hope you enjoy it
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    Sweetest gift

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    Sweetest gift

    EST?! That's aggressive...
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    Sweetest gift

    It should be coming soon. Honestly, I needed to do a re-write and I was really struggling with it. Good news, I think it finally came to me and I'm actually working on it right now.
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    Chapter 5

    I think you meant to say: Anything but coconut: 1 Coconut: Infinity Glad I could clear that up for you. I also can't say much more. The secret handshake is giving me anxiety. I'm sitting here watching the shoe rise. It will soon block out the sun, before crashing down. It's all very terrifying.
  6. I'm now determined to work this word into my vocabulary on the daily. Watch for it in my next story. I will make it happen.
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    Plot Twists

    I think the groundwork is CRUCIAL. I've read so many stories where the author is overly obvious about what's coming and they beat the clues to DEATH. When the plot twist finally comes, you've already been watching it from a distance, it no longer adds to the story. IMO. My favorite stories are the ones where the author keeps it so simple. Lay it, water it, but leave it alone for the most part. Small details that make you think and wonder. I hate being told. I want to use my brain! I want my imagination to be challenged.
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    Chapter 5

    I see everyone is still hating on coconut... Adoption is such a complex thing. Sometimes great, sometimes not. There is one thing that is always consistent, adoption can be difficult to navigate. When Kyle was adopted, closed adoptions were super normal. Not just closed but tight-lipped. A lot of kids had no clue they were adopted, it's just the way it was. It's different now. Lots of study to show the importance of open communication. I always cringe when parents keep it a lie, but it usually comes from a place of love. In reality, it's still brand new information for Kyle to process. How he feels about it can change day-to-day. So far, he's doing great.
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    Sweetest gift

    Wow, seems to me that your husband needs a Seamus Matt was also like, “yeah, that’s a no.” I think it was more of the gesture that Seamus was after. It’s addressed a bit more in the next chapter
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    Chapter 4

    Everyone's reaction to Kbois cocktail: OH yummy! Can't wait to try it. Everyone's reaction to my cocktail: Barf. Coconut? HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US?!!
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    Chapter 4

    Everyone hating on my coconut drink. But did you try it? DID YOU? Loving this story. The ball is hanging...just waiting to drop.
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    Chapter 3

    Cats. Ugh. now I want to go to New England....sounds like the Oregon Coast. Right up my alley.
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    Chapter 3

    Where can I get a Jett of my own?
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    Chapter 1

    Drama. We need drama
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    Sweetest gift

    Careful what you wish for. Once I post again, it's over.
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    Mike...disappearing
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    Chapter 2

    New romance. So sweet. Bruce + Rosie
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    Sweetest gift

    I’m sorry to hear that. I’m glad you’re back. Hopefully that means things are on the up and up
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    Sweetest gift

    My brothers name is James. Does that count?
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    I was 85% right. I had the general idea but couldn't confidently say why.
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    Yeah @chris191070. Where have you been? I thought you'd been pretty quiet. I was worried I scared you off or something!
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    Sweetest gift

    As if having him steal lots of money over several years isn’t enough, mike won’t go down without a fight
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    Sweetest gift

    Ok, so I want to be like “duh, I know the difference”. But I’m not going to be the kid that stands up in class and answers the question just to get it 😑 . Why don’t you tell me the difference and I’ll tell you if I was right or not?? 😬😬😬 lol
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    Sweetest gift

    I’m not sure Matt had the foresight to withhold some critical information, not anything the pros wouldn’t have been able to find. I think he was just anxious and exciting to do it, it didn’t occur that something would come of it
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    Sweetest gift

    Yet, if I can’t find the thing right in front of themYet, if I can’t find the thing right in front of them
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