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  1. Mrsgnomie

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    But in this situation, he’s not blaming his father for anything. He was explaininng a situation, which is father was a part of, that lead to his comment. There’s a difference between blaming and explaining. Also, he’s never really blamed his father for his own actions. It can’t be helped that his father helped shaped him. And possible that, up til now, there’d never been a reason to try and stand up to his father. I’m not making excuses for Shane, but everyone hits different milestones at different times. To say his actions are only justified until 22 isn’t taking into account his (or anyone else’s) specific story. I guess we’ll see what happens!
  2. Mrsgnomie

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    But also, it can be yesterday night. It’s like...soda vs pop. 100%
  3. Mrsgnomie

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    No, no no no. My friend is gonna read this. It’s gonna be bad lol. I’m not saying yesterday night is 100% correct, but it’s not 100% wrong either.
  4. Mrsgnomie

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    Don't over think! You’ll be going down the wrong rabbit hole, I promise. lol
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    Why does it make Shane an asshole? We’re talking about an event from his past and the way him and his friends have dealt with it. That’s a person choice for them and It’s not uncommon by any means. Hell, I laugh and joke about worse things in my own life. Shane’s not allowed to? With th that said, when Donovan asked him to leave, Shane respected him and left. My story, along with any other story, aren’t going to be liked by everyone. You haven’t like it from the first chapter and I imagine you won’t like the last. 🤷🏻‍♀️ Can’t win them all.
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    I agree, and obviously there’s still more conversations to be had between them...so many things are still unclear. We’ll see if they can work it out.
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    So, this is an argument that a friend and I have regularly. I say both—last night and/or yesterday night. He swears the proper way is ONLY to say last night. I call bullshit. BUT I wrote that in to make him laugh, other then making my friend laugh, that scene is pointless lol. And if anyone has thoughts on the matter, please share. ETA: We’ll see if you still think Allé is a good friend after the next chapter.
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    I arrived home, exhausted from AARP’s family reunion cluster fuck, and fell backward onto my bed. I stared at the ceiling in disbelief as I thought back to the day’s events, scratch that, as I thought about the last twenty-four hours. Generally, I considered myself a good person. I worked with kids who had cancer, I paid my bills on time, I donated my time and money to good causes, I didn’t cheat, and I kept lying to a minimum. So why did I feel as though I couldn’t escape the F5 shit s
  9. Mrsgnomie

    Family Reunion

    Tonight or tomorrow morning, depending on when I can do a once over (haven't read it since I wrote it months ago) and make sure all is good to go!
  10. Mrsgnomie

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    This is always a terrifying statement. My mind automatically assumes you'll find tons of holes and errors the second time around. But this was a relief. *wipes nervous sweat from brow* Thank you.
  11. Mrsgnomie

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    I must say, you guys are wonderful. I struggled with this chapter and almost decided to do a re-write but was talked down by several of my Patreon friends. I have to remember that when I wrote this a few months ago, there was a reason behind everything. I really need to learn to trust myself! Also, thank you guys for making me seem like I know what I'm doing. You find depth in my writing that is totally unintentional. I read the comment and think 'holy shit, I didn't even pick up on that!'. You know what they say, "fake it til you make it". With that said, it will take a few chapters, but pieces will fall together and truths will be told.
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    💯💯 agreed.
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    This is very true. We can know, realistically, something is bad. On paper it can be very black and white. But emotions make things murky and grey. I think it’s good, though. In general, shitty people can be a diamond in the rough and need someone to see the grey.
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    Without going into too much detail, or spilling anything I shouldn’t. We do hear from Shane and his story. Rather it’s right or wrong is a matter of opinion.
  15. So many times, I’d wished to wake up without a hangover, more times than I could count. Never, in all my years, had I woken up wishing I’d had one, yet, there I was, upset because I wasn’t somehow incapacitated. I felt great, physically anyway, but mentally I was undercooked scrambled eggs—worthless. I got out of bed and tried not to think about anything. It was nearly impossible as the events of the night before replayed like a bad montage video. I’m not a fag, I just like a tight ass. I c
  16. Now!
  17. Mrsgnomie

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    AARP is a non-profit organization for elders. It stands for American Assocoates of Retired Persons lol
  18. I got it fixed, but when I did my once over on the chapter I started cringing. It’s not my best work, in fact, I really don’t like it. I’m working with my BETA now to see if it’s fixable. Ugh...
  19. The fact my internet went out and a tech can’t come out until tomorrow morning puts a halt on cracking under pressure. Also, would love to see them dress in dragAlso, would love to see them dress in drag
  20. It's really hard for me to read the comments and not explain what's gonna happen, or post the rest of the story so you guys can read it in one go. I won't though! I will, however, post the next chapter tonight. It might be twice as long as normal because there's really no good place to break.
  21. ^this comment 👏🏻😂
  22. Totally understandable.
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  24. 11/10 Trouble, that's who.
  25. I guess we'll find out soon, I'm not sure how soon, a couple chapters? Of course not, the next chapter is ready to go, should post in a couple days!
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