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    Just Friends?

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Just Friends?

    Kapucinski is right. Shane’s knows he was a victim, but admitting rape isn’t always easy, especially with Shane’s background. It’s psychological warfare
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    Just Friends?

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    Absoultely. I, in no way, consider myself talented in this area. SYWM was the first story I’d every written on my own free will. Runner up, something mandated by the educational system to graduate high school. I’m always trying to improve. The conversation issue is something my editor changes. He makes so many really wonderful improvements, but dialogue isn’t always one of them. I usually try and change it so it flows better, but I can’t always catch them. I did find your examples and edited them, those we’re errors (so thanks for bringing them to light). I’ll continue to try and catch those things. Also, the water in my face. It was never suppose to say my, not sure why it did.
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    Just Friends?

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    Yes, I agree. I feel bad for Shane because Donovan said no, then goes out of his way to tempt him. It’s rude.
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    Just Friends?

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    I should’ve consulted you prior to writing this chapter because Donovan as Plain Joe would be good. Also, DAKS will talk. It’s not over.
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    Just Friends?

    Mrsgnomie posted new chapter in Three Strikes

    It’s true what they say—you should be careful what you wish for. I should’ve been more specific when I complained life was too boring and I’d do anything for a little excitement or drama. Other people’s drama, not mine! Damn. I’d only wanted to sit back and point my finger at all of the sorry bitches who needed to throw shit around on Jerry Springer. You know, someone and their brother who were both supposed to be the biological fathers of the same twins, or some shit like that. I
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    Now!
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    20 minutes! I’m doing a read through and I’ll post it.
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    Today! Life got insane but I’m doing it this morning!
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    Tomorrow-ish
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    I don’t know that he WANTED Donovan and Shane to reconcile as much as he wanted his friend to be happy. Donovan didn’t exactly tell him “hey, I want to be with that giant dumbass...in the light of a new day, it’s possible he was just trying to distract him.
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    They sit down and talk in the next chapter!
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    Cool, call me out on this plot hole, lol. I'm gonna say that Davis works for corporate and it's very possible the time he visited the unit, Donovan wasn't working. Either way, they haven't crossed paths prior to the incident at the bar. I agree, but I really don't think Shane meant anything by it, like, I don't think Shane realized Davis had a crush or was flirting until it was too late, then it was back peddling. Right or wrong, it was stupid but he wasn't being malices. Also, he couldn't really advice Donovan since they hadn't been talking... I agree, they should have said something to Davis when he was talking about Donovan...but I also know what it's like to get caught off guard in the moment.
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    The one regret that changed everything. It was eight o’clock in the morning and the contractors were back to work, filling my house with the obnoxious noise of renovations. I crumpled my pillow into a ball and shoved my face into it as I let out a frustrated cry. Lately, I’d been spending most nights with Aaron since my house is basically nothing but bones with a bedroom, but after Friday night, I was basically exiled until I figured out how to fix things with Donovan. The bastards didn’t c
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    Dead 😂😂
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    Technically, yes. But when has life ever been black and white. Just because the law says you can do something, doesn't mean you have to feel good about it.
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    Yeah...lets go with that lol
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    WE WERE ON A BREAK!
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    I just have to say, these made me laugh. If only for the fact that it was SO INCREDIBLY AWKWARD TO WRITE. I couldn't agree with you guys more, cringy. I only ever re-read it once, I just had to leave it. It's there for a reason. That reason has a purpose but that doesn't mean it's easy to swallow.
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    Yes. This. What happened was a mistake but it's also the catalyst that will contribute to the turning point. Thank you, I'll post the next chapter sooner rather than later, mostly because I know this chapter was a little out of left field. Again, bingo. This is 100% a revealing chapter. Like I commented above, it's the catalyst to the turning point. Things have to change, but first we must reach a point where we see what's wrong. This is the cracking of that window.
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    When I'm writing, I never think about the reader response, I think about the end goal. With that said, I'm so sad over the volume of disappointments. It is what it is, and it's not for nothing. @drogon I can tell you this, it's not fuel to an explosive cluster F. Although things will transpire from this, it's not going to be the big blow up you might imagine.
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    “Fuck,” I moaned as I stirred from a less than gratifying sleep. My face was much too close to Nelly’s armpit, Nick’s elbow was digging into the back of my neck, and Sammy was laying at the foot of the bed, which prevented me from stretching out, and there’s nothing worse than not being able to stretch out. I might as well have been sleeping on an airplane. At least, then I would’ve been on my way to an exotic location. It didn’t matter how many times I told the bastards to use the spa
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    Catchphrase

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Catchphrase

    Okay, okay. Give me an hour and I’ll post lol
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    Catchphrase

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Catchphrase

    We’ll learn about Davis soon, although it’s 2 or 3 chapters out
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    Catchphrase

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Catchphrase

    Technically, the next chapter is ready to post. But in real life, I'm trying to finish the final chapter and told myself I won't get distracted by posting an update on GA until I've finished the chapter I'm writing. I'm working hard, I might cave and post...we'll see, but it should be really soon.
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    Catchphrase

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Catchphrase

    Well, that's quite the compliment! Thank you AJ. You won't be disappointed, lots of Art to come.
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