Mrsgnomie
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Doesn’t matter if I had 6 months, this entire chapter was just 💔💔💔 It’s the kind of chapter you don’t just “get over” because you read it before everyone else. I’m still not done with the stages of grief. im stuck at anger.
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Progression of emotion by Michael Scott:
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This is REALLY good to know…for next time lol. Sorry @Mancunian lol
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When I recently went over @Mancunian Anthology, it turned out our word systems were not compatible. Something I have never experienced before. When I saved it, it essentially turned all my suggestions into permanent changes and only left my comments for them to accept or decline. I felt terrible because it made it impossible to compare their original work to what I was suggestions. It probably made me look bossy AF, like, you MUST ACCEPT MY SUGGESTIONS. Tech fail for sure!! Sometimes you’re asked to Beta/edit, as @Carlos Hazday had asked me a few months back, and the product is practically flawless and your left feeling like, what am I supposed to do here? Grasp at straws? Don’t mind if I do! Lol
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I also wanted to comment, that for my first story, I did have someone edit it (you’d never know by reading it). I was new and didn’t know much about the process. The trust is, although they caught a lot of edits, they did a TON of reformatting that made the story very difficult to follow. I haven’t re-edited that particular story since I posted it, but part of me wants to just to fix that. What I’m trying to say is, sample their work if you’re not familiar with it. You don’t have to accept someone’s help just because they offer. I learned the hard way. You also don’t have to accept all their suggestions. Kbois is always trying to edit out my coconuts drinks. DECLINE!
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It’s so important to have more than one pair of eyes on a story. Even when you have two extra sets, things still get missed!!j Anyway, a recent memorable one was from my latest story. Jay and Loren were in Mexico with their friends and Aidan got Loren to give him a ride around the pool. I had this great vision of Aidan feeling like he was the king as Loren swam like a dolphin. Like Poseidon on his peasant dolphin. What I wrote was “ Poseidon on his pheasant dolphin. Oh. @kbois had a field day with that one. “Half bird, half dolphin? From water to the sky?”
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I’m glad you checked it out and even more thrilled you enjoyed it. This is a labor of love and I had fun every step of the way.
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Technically, I had already read the story. But now that I have your permission...
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And now everyone knows I’m a little evil also. 😈😈😈
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Sounds like it. But there has to be some twist. @kbois will find a way..
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*enters local CVS* “Yes, hello. Where do you keep the burn cream? And the anti inflammatory medication and Neosporin? Oh, aisle 5? Thank you.”
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Don’t worry, I’ll finish posting the story for you…
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Surely Elijah will realize Kage is taking too long and will come to the rescue. Shifters are able to heal themselves, so Kage has that in his favor. The part that scares me is that clearly the knife was laced….but with what? That could be a problem… Elijah just lost both his parents. Losing Kage would be mean. Even for @kbois
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When shapeshifters touch, it forces them out of shift, which is what happened to Kage and Elijah and why they had to be careful not to touch when they were in shift.
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I’ve been holding this back a while. I’m not happy.
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