Mrsgnomie

Admittedly, in the past, I haven't been much of a Dragon reader. I'm not familiar with Anne McCaffery and her stories, but I really enjoy Mawgrim's take on them. This story kept me coming back! Jevikel and Kaden have amazing chemistry, which improves any story. The pacing was spot on (not always an easy task. The story itself was crafted masterfully. If you're not sure, just read it. Do it. Now.

Was late on the last few chapters but I'm almost glad I got to read them straight through. This was such a great story. Good work @Mawgrim

I'm sure you can find that here. I think working your way into the community here is so smart! That's how you get to know people enough to build working relationships. Still, you'll might have to post your first story in all it's humble glory. When people can read your stuff and get to know your writing, then you'll likely find someone willing to invest in your products development. How long are most of your works?

Replied to my own comment instead of editing it. This is why I need a team 🙄🙄. I can’t be trusted.

I’m still team building. It’s definitely not something that happens over night and it takes time to find people that can and will do good work. I’ve been lucky, in that’s have/had some decent people, but I’m still working on rounding out. You’re asking a lot of someone when you mostly write full length novels. It’s not child’s play. Would it would Awesome tO write a story and not need anyone else? Hell yes. I’m not that good. Not even close. I NEED a team cleaning up behind me. @kbois has been my ride or die for a while. I look at my earlier stuff and wish I had someone to read behind me. There are times I struggle to communicate what is in my head, having someone come through and say “hey, we’re you stroking out when you wrote this? Here, try it like this.” BOOM. I would like a solid team of three. I think that is my magic number. Since @kboisis kind of a catch all and does a half decent job with obvious edits and, flow, storyline stuff, I don’t feel like I need 2 betas, not that it would hurt. @Mawgrim has been a great addition and I’d keep him around for as long as he’s feeling up to it. Cancer is kind of kicking his but right now, so there’s no pressure from me. Hopefully he’ll be willing to jump in and work his magic on the JL 6 chapter extension.😉😉😉 I would like one more beta and one critical editor. I found two people who are going to help during my next story. I’m curious to see how it will fan out. It’s all about finding the right fits. I do self publish my stuff, but only because I get a lot of requests from readers who want to have it paperback and such. They already know where my errors are 🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️I’m not looking for fame or $$$. I’m not that kind of writer. I don’t have the balls to be critiqued by a publisher. I barely have the balls to be critiqued by every day Joe’s/Josephine’s. 😉

A mention is different than a permanent ship name.

Oh. We’re resorting to blackmail? No offense, but you haven’t asked me, either. So…

Why the F isn’t it G&K?

How cute.

This was interesting lol. I almost heeded your warning and didn’t venture forward lol. I’m not big on my fairytales being bastardized. Glad I did! Curious to see what else you have up your sleeve If this is your twisted nursery rhymes lol

And yet you were the one to message me "Oh, you better go look...he he he he"

Also, the nickname for Huck Finn.

At a minimum. You can’t show up and out of nowhere and start commenting first. That privilege is earned. watch your back @Salerion. Watch your back.

I mean this with no disrespect, because I like Tyler. He is a rock and a great person. But…Caleb is my McDreamy. I know he made a bad choice in the last story and he is currently paying the price. With that said, I hope Caleb’s mate is someone insanely special, and that is not Tyler lol. Tyler is awesome, but not quite what I’m looking for in a mate for Caleb.

Elijah has a mate?! I love this chapter and I’m very much looking forward to what comes next. I feel like a new adventure is on the horizon.

Neither are you! Who is @Salerion and where the heck did they come from?! Lol i was up most is the night with freaking heart burn. There was no 5am PST in my cards. There is barely a 5:30a lol

I don’t remember this because we also call it a blinker here 🤣🤣🤣

Good job everyone! You got her there plus some. Best crew ever.

You haven't read shit either. Go back and finish the story.