The Fly

Gracious me. This story about Edvard, really got to me. As if I understood what he is going through. I was sad for the most part except where something nice and positive happened. I have never given so many sad faces in the story: as in this one. Thank you for such a story and inly wish we could see how Edvard developes on the ranch.

The whole story felt like a personal experience and yes, I was glued to the end. It is captivating. It is motivating. It is thought provoking. It is LOVE. It is maturing. Above all it is absolutely 100% real. Thank you Mrsgnomie

Nice start to the story And glad that I finally found the missing link.

This is funny indeed. Drew trying to stop Jay about a dress......hehehehehe.....

Stunning stunning stunning......cant wait for the next chapter

Can't wait for part 2 and part etc......

This is a really beautiful story and so very true in very many ways. Thanks you

This story has hooked lined and sonkered from the start. On more than one occassion tears in my eyes. This a story of absolute love devoted. They a relationship between two people should. Thank you for this intensely loving story. Well done.

Sofar bery interesting and cant waitnwhere this isgoing to go. Look forward to firther chapters

Fromtier has had me hooked from the start. Especially seing.my interest in yachting. This story is absolutely adventurious. Full of things that can oossible go haywore owning a yacht. The personnel account coming from Anton is heartwarming. It would be a shame for this story to end here. I smell many more adventures and Antons and Simon qualifcations coming to life

Thank you for this amazing loving, tearful story. It has emgrossed me fromt he beginning. It has led me to tear and crying many times. Thank you

Having read all 18 chapters. I have to say that is gripped me all the way. Romance at its best, with all the love and contraversy and not forgetting true friendship/s. Someone commented on the word "Hate" being such a strong word - it may be so, however it is a word that is used most often to describe a particular dislike. We all use the word - Lets not deny that fact. Can't wait read the next book. Look forward to it Thank you

This story in its completeness, is something to behold. One can feel the emotion, the tension, the release and many other feeling that make this a true to life story. This one has definately moved me. Thank you

This is one beautiful Love story telationship across many folds. It aoft and hard and emotionally connecting. Admittedly it is tear-jerking too and I loved every minute of this story. Thank you