Geoffrey257
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This inability to understand the other person's point of view regarding coming out seems to just go back and forth between them. First it was Noah and Jenn, then Jordan and Aiden, now it's back to Noah with his mom. Edit: actually the first one's not true. Jordan was very supportive there.
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I agree with most of what you said. Noah is the bigger problem here, but although Jordan isn't exactly pressuring Noah to come out right now, it feels like that's what he wants. So that does kind of seep through. If Noah doesn't come out now, Jordan seems to want an exact timeline when he will come out, which is something that Noah can't do and something I find unreasonable. However, that said, I think Noah is being more unreasonable in this situation as a whole.
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I think they're both overreacting on this. Noah's face isn't in the video so he should be fine even if the video gets around to his mother. He's already told her that he has a gay friend. He should also be more aware and understanding of Jordan's wishes to be captain and not shoot it down immediately after seeing the video. At the same time, I don't think that Jordan should be pushing so hard to getting Noah to come out. It should be Noah's decision. He even said that it's wrong to out Sebastian, so why would he want to keep pushing for Noah to come out to his parents? If having a boyfriend who's out is a deal breaker for Jordan, then he shouldn't be dating Noah.
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I think it's very likely. He was under their control in the past
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I hope he doesn't immediately attack the prince. @Disjecta Membra I noticed you updated quite a few of the past chapters. Was it any change to the story?
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Thank you, it's clear now, but what about Alex? Where was he during the body swap? It seemed like he had some memory of the body swap, but it sounded like those memories weren't very good so he chose not to remember the body swap and to remember the accident instead. He also seemed to know what happened between Carter and Aron during Carter's time in Alex's body. Oh, I almost forgot! What about Taz? Is he staying with Carter? If he does, why does Taz stay with Carter now and not before when Mark gave him the memory choice the first time?
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I was just curious because I originally thought Mark might have been related to Greek mythology, but then he mentioned Machu Picchu (I think). I don't find your answer disappointing, creating your own character without basing it on another religion/mythology is just fine. I was wondering about the body switch. I'm not sure if I missed it, but was there an explanation for it? I understand Carter was meant to die, and Mark prevented that, but why were Carter's and Alex's bodies switched? And where did Alex go/what did he experience when it happened?
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Wow, this seems like a lot of work to make someone "un-gay." Is it really necessary? I guess the elves also don't know Kieran has the artifact which helps resist and undo their influence. I wonder what they're practicing for. It's probably useful for resisting any future changes from the elves, but they don't really know this. What's Burrimul's reasoning?
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I can't wait to see Milan's wolf as well...and Ilaria's reaction when she learns of this. I'm almost convinced now that Grandma Asta is Sanctuary or a channel for the town. It's unclear how old she is though.
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That was a great ending. I'm glad Alex's angel convinced him to do the right thing. What if Carter decided not to accept the mint. Would he still remember or was it just symbolic? So does Mark not come from any religion? What religion did you base him on when you created him?
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Hmm, imagine if it was Aron's "Mark" or "guardian angel" that caused the switch because it was something that Aron wanted. Or rather he may have wanted Alex to be more like Carter and the guardian angel thought the simplest thing to do was to get them to switch bodies.
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Grandma Asta said that Rory had to wait until the poisoned blood/infusion was clear from his system before Rory could change Milan.
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I just assumed that as a magic bracelet that it shifts in and out with him unlike regular clothing
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I've been thinking, the Sanctuary kind of sounds like Grandma Asta. I wonder if she's a living form of the town or maybe a channel through which the town can speak to the people (in particular to the Alpha). I feel like Iris and Grandma Asta are related somehow so maybe Iris could be Grandma Asta's replacement when she passes away. I think we only know the answer to the first one and it's simply because Rory doesn't want him dead. Although he did state this before Sanctuary told him of the murders, I think his position won't change. When he's clear headed (unlike when fighting Dolon), he doesn't seem like the type to want to kill.
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I was kind of waiting for Aron to notice the list on the table and ask Carter what it's for, haha.
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I'm glad everything worked out for them! I wonder how people feel now that we've heard the rest of the conversation. That phone call with Jenn would have been a good opportunity to bring up that he used her picture saying that she is his girlfriend. Aiden is going to meet Jenn very soon now.
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My guess is that Dolon was kidnapped but then became voluntary with the promise of power. Or Cade's drugs allowed them to control him.
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Yeah, that's my thought as well. I sure hope Jordan didn't have sex with Aiden and I think that it'd be out of character for Jordan if he did. He was quite upset when his ex cheated on him so I can't imagine him cheating on Noah. If Aiden did kiss Jordan, that may cause him to feel bad and make him feel like he's cheated, but it shouldn't affect his decision to live with Noah after the break.
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Based on the scene a few chapters ago (19) where we met Cade I now assume Rick was the one talking to Cade and that Rick hopes to take over Portento and to be the Alpha.
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Argh, Carter is just so oblivious! I wonder if Simon truly believes Aron to be a "really great guy." If he believes that how can he not see that Alex is a horrible person?
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While I don't agree with Zane's beliefs, I do respect him.
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Oh of course, I always have my own opinion about what might happen...I just think it's just not as fun to type up a response about my speculations on a story that's already done. Like you say, some stories with authors that engage in the discussion makes the comments as fun as the story, which is a plus for on-going stories.
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I have mixed feelings about reading completed works. On one hand, I can read the whole thing without needing to wait for the next chapter, but I generally don't read comments at the end of each chapter. On the other hand, I won't get to participate in the speculations after each chapter and I enjoy reading the comments.
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Yeah, I was wondering that as well. Doesn't she pack a really strong punch?
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Maybe but why would Dolon be sneaking through the school (or rather why would Rory sneak after him) and why would he attack Milan? He was also "given" to Cade by one of the pack members. Though I guess it's possible that the infusions allowed him to be strong enough to break out.
