Marty
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My thoughts entirely.
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I'm getting confused here. There seems to be something wrong with the continuity in this story... At the end of Chapter 18 Aiden smashes his phone by throwing it against his bedroom wall. In Chapter 20 Aiden is seen scrolling through Facebook on his phone whilst waiting for Jason to arrive at his car, and later on also texting with Matt. But now, in Chapter 22, we find out that Aiden is only just buying a new phone to replace the one that he smashed 4 chapters ago..?
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Just what I'm hoping to see before this story ends! (The wedding - not Nicholas dressed as a bridesmaid. 😆)
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I spotted the same thing. I also spotted the fact that @Rob Colton used the correct name Sheila a few paragraphs later.
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I'm reminded of this quote (about Derek) from Chapter 1... And I'm expecting that Eli is soon going to open that discussion with Noah...
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I hope what you're suggesting is that Nicholas makes a play for Reagan, and not that he makes a play for Derek.
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Reading between the lines, I suspect Derek has already found his next twink.
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Finally! Noah gives Derek the treatment he deserves.
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I've said it before. And I'll say it again. This time with a bit more passion...
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Don't cha just love mammies?
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Yep. Derek's definitely an asshole. I just hope (probably for his own safety) that he doesn't become a dangerous one.
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Wow! Derek really is an asshole!
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I'm beginning to think the same about Matt...
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For a major part of Andy's interaction with Chris, I found myself hating him. By the end of the chapter I simply pitied him.
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And you're a fucking, stupid idiot for doing that!
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I'm just hoping that Andy and Matt will actually talk face-to-face eventually. Hopefully over the Christmas break. They need to clear the air and talk about the elephant in the room.
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Damn, Andy! I told you at the end of the last chapter to contact Matt. So what happens? He contacts you at the start of this one, and you don't even email him back. Is this going to keep happening until you bump into each other during Christmas break?
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Message to Andy: Contact Matt!
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Great story, @Palantir! Sad thing about it ending is that my education in the language of Aus has maybe come to an end. Although I did learn the word yabby in this chapter. 😉 (And I suppose I could also check out your stories profile for other Aus based stories...)
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So now I'm wondering if Joel has said anything about just how close he and Peter have become...
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Another great chapter! So... Joel's planning to bring Peter home to meet the mammy. Hopefully Mammy will be accepting. But I do wonder how some of the other residents of Tittybong and its environs may react if they find out the relationship between the two boys... And, yay! 😂 A new word to add to my expanding knowledge of Aus vocabulary: scroggin (what us normal people just call trail mix 😆)
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Lollygagging... A new word for my vocabulary. (Although Google suggests it's of American origin rather than Aus 🤣)
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If Phillip does (as I mused about at the end of the last chapter) have designs on Sam, he might need to consider the words of an old Beatles song... "Money can't buy me love"
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Although some readers might find the idea of intergenerational sexual relationships off putting, I can't help feeling that such may happen between Philip and Sam. And, yes, I know, I don't think we have yet been told what Philip's orientation is.
