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  1. HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROB !!! Steve
  2. Happy Birthday! Steve
  3. Happy Birthday Kitty! Steve
  4. What does GA mean to me? Off the top of my head two words strike resoundingly loud, quality and community. Quality brought me here as the stories available are far and above the best I have ever read. Community is what brings me back, day after day
  5. Ooohhh squeeling tires! very nice CJ, dare I say it, better then the draft I intially read who said you can't teach an old goat new tricks... Steve
  6. How did I get included on this list? I'm no post-a-holic I have maybe 1 or two posts... there was that day where only greme and darkshadow had more posts then me though... I'll say it right now, I'm a social poster, nothing more, nothing less Steve
  7. Aye... perfectly evil...
  8. I will state now.. I had absolutely nothing to do with said headache... I agree with greame though, if this had been the last chapter it would have been wrapped up in too pretty a bow. Then again, the ending of the chapter would have me screaming a string of words that are better left unsaid steve
  9. Hrmm... i guess i sorta carry around my backpack. Though only on weekdays... As far as that goes... It contains my MP3 player, headphones, digital camera, bag of halls Vitamin C drops, old mail ( I should clear this out..., USB cable for my mp3 player, Laptop (always... i don't know where this sometimes bit comes in.) Sunglasses as far as the wallet keys cell phone chapstick and cash. I keep thos in my pockets, along with what ever assorted scrapes of paper I happen to aquire that day. I yes Viv it is a real wallet, leather and everything! No nauga's were harmed in the making of this post... Steve
  10. What? your keeping things from me? Bad goat! Bad goat! and as for the goat whisperer... I dunno, all this talk of goat whispering and vasiline and cameras... Id be afraid, very,very, afraid. Steve
  11. ME ME pick me!
  12. Dude... Focus! chapter 4 comes after 3 then five..
  13. Yo Rick! I have yet to read, but seeing as your using inventive ways of encouraging feedback... I'll check it out tommorow and leave you a note or two.... Ask the resident shy and retiring lurker though ( CJ ) Once I start a rarely shut up Steve
  14. That is very poetic Colin, and I couldn't agree more... we shouldn't need that one...
  15. Victims..... my thoughts exactly JK, you know I love where the story is going CJ, and ya know what they say a diamond in the rough is still a diamond Steve
  16. You should have seen the plethora I cut in the rewrite
  17. Very true... but if the same goal can be achieved through action. It would be better suited for the reader. Why imply action when you can show it? (thanks to you! If it weren't for you messing with our heads, we would have been together months ago!) *thanks to you," he shouted, "If it weren't for you messing wih our heads, we would have been together months ago." Edited to include example...
  18. thanks to you, and we would have been together months ago if not for you messing with our heads (thanks to you! If it weren't for you messing with our heads, we would have been together months ago!) Alright, the wording is better, But I would only use one of those exclamations, if any. I read somewhere that your only allowed around four per 100,000 words... Beside you can relay excitement through action and narration. Steve
  19. Well if greame didnt just steal my thunder there... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! And many... many... thanks for all your reviews for Living in Surreality!! i appriciate them more then I can say. Steve
  20. So the hand drawn picture chapter, featuring stick figures with vastly disproprtionate body parts, was a lie? Steve
  21. Leave it up to CJ to get us all posting more First, I agree on the climax side of things with DS, If this story took place over the span of a week, CJ started it on Wednesday instead of the usual Monday. Events in the characters life from the previous two days will surely still be effecting his actions on this day. Maybe the use of the prologue to fill in the gaps of the missing time was a misstep leading to this general timeline confusion. :wacko: Secondly, I dont think birds comments were too way out of wack, just providing his take on the information provided so far. All I can say if the story starts with this big a bang.... and I can't say anything else, CJ promised no one would find me if I did.... Steve I was late to the party again....
  22. shadowgod

    Mondays....

    You ever have one of those Mondays? You know the ones where you rush out of the house at 4:30 in the morning. Get halfway to work only to figure out you have forgotten your keys, so you have to turn around and drive the 15 miles back home grab your keys and head out once again. Only this time you get stuck in traffic? Yep, that was my Monday. Nope, it sure didn
  23. I acctualy think I stumbled onto GA by going through refering urls on my own website... It seems someone was foolish enough to acctualy add it to the links archive here. Been coming back over the years, checking out different authors Comicality, DomLuka. Then I figured Id join... acctualy I need to pm admin about that Steve
  24. :ranger: :2hands: :ranger: :2hands: :ranger: We are prepared to take drastic measures if the car scene is excised.... Steve
  25. OOOOHHH!!! Sounds like a challenge CJ! the only question is, can the shy quiet lurker pull it off?? Steve
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