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Graeme

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  1. Very nice. I just hate that I think I'm going to have to wait another 12 months to find out what happens next I think he may now have a better understanding why he had been forbidden to enter the human realm. The difficulty in accessing magic in our realm would make it easy to trap a young magician who wasn't fully prepared.
  2. Cool image! Now for the horror story...you're a day late It's already the 1st November here in Australia
  3. There are too many great parts in the story to try to pick a favourite However, I absolutely love this interview because it told us that there will be at least a book 3 (she used the word 'titles' in the answer to question about the title of the story) so I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a book 4 as well), focused more on Indie and Preston. And, no, I'm not going to try to pick which is my favourite couple -- they're both great and fun, but in different ways.
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    Greedy

    An interesting question... What if all his blood is bad? He's still young; maybe there's some good blood still in there.
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    Greedy

    Well, he's known to not trust doctors, and leeches are an old traditional treatment for a variety of conditions. And Ben is clearly in need of having bad blood drained away...
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    Temporary Dads

    LOL -- they certainly will.
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    Chapter 2

    LOL -- yes, the armchair parenting is fun. It's so easy to know the correct way for someone else to parent Remembering back to when my boys were toddlers, one of the books we had explained that personality-wise, there were four categories of toddlers: angels, angels most of the time, angels when kept under control but can easily become devils, and devils. The parents of angels could never understand the children who were devils, and tended to blame poor parenting, when there's a small (but extremely visible in public) set of toddlers that just don't do what they're told. They'll grow out of it and learn some self-control, but it's just the way they are. Most toddlers are in the second category, with the third category being the largest. The important thing to take from that is that there's no one-size-fits-all when it comes to parenting. You need to adapt and learn based on the children in front of you, because what works with one set of children may not work with another.
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    Chapter 2

    You may be right with your parenting advice, but Alan and Peter need to work things out for themselves. However, I disagree with letting the kids decide what they want to eat, because they need a certain amount of nutrition to be healthy. What I would prefer is a second meal being cooked (more work for the parent in charge of cooking) that they know the boys will eat. They still don't get a choice about eating it, but it's a compromise in that they've previously indicated that it'll be food that they will eat.
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    Chapter 2

    Thanks, Jeff. Working on this story is bring back memories for me, too, since the drafts of the first few chapters were written years ago when my boys were only a little older than Troy and Bradley.
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    Greedy

    Thank you! Yes, Ben wasn't as clever as he thought. I don't articulate in the story how the old man knew who was at the door, but there are certainly a number of ways. The easiest is if his blindness isn't 100% and that he can see vague shapes. That would mean he knew that the size of the three in front of him didn't match the apparent age from the voice. However, that's not the only way he could've known
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    Chapter 2

    Sometimes, yes, being a parent can feel like having a death wish, but other times, it is one of the best jobs in the world
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    Greedy

    I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Ben certainly found his just desserts.
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    Chapter 2

    I wouldn't wish what happened in chapter 1 on anyone, but I wish that if it did, the children would have someone safe and loving to go to.
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you! That was my intention, because it really is a whirlwind until you can get yourself settled
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    Greedy

    LOL -- actually, you were one of the people I was thinking of when I wrote the story. Too many people think blind means 100% no vision...
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    Chapter 2

    Thanks! Yes, the first day went as well as could be expected. However, it'll be another week before Alan can get to the Thursday playgroup, and even then that could be problematic if he goes back to work. At least he has Tracey to talk to when needed.
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you! Things go better when you have a routine, but the guys don't have one yet. They have to remember to do each and every task required...and that is not only tiring, but also almost impossible. Mistakes will be made; they just need to learn from them.
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    Greedy

    “Are you sure about this?” The pirate, better known as Dennis Hanson, looked worried. “My dad told me that if I get into trouble one more time, I’m grounded until Christmas.” “Relax!” Ben Kennedy, the vampire, gave his faithful compatriot a reassuring smile. “It’s Halloween. We’re supposed to scare the little kids. All the other times have just been practice for tonight.” “Yeah, but taking their candy…isn’t that going a step too far?” “What’s scarier to a kid than losing his candy? It’s calle
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    Greedy

    For Halloween 2016 Three teenager thugs try to steal candy from other kids at Halloween, but will they end up being too greedy?
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    Chapter 2

    “Is that everything you need?” Alan asked. Troy nodded. “I think so. Mummy usually does it.” Alan grunted. There were a lot of things that “Mummy” did that he would need to learn. He was crossing his fingers that he had packed Troy’s school bag properly. Peter had found some papers from the Watsonia Meadows Primary School, which they were hoping was the right school. Troy had shrugged when they had asked him to confirm it. “Come on, Bradley. It’s time to take your brother to school.” Peter s
  21. Happy Birthday!
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    Chapter 1

    Lisa's lost her husband -- her kids are all that she's got that's left of him. I don't think it would matter how much pain she was in -- she'd be think of them...and him.
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    Chapter 1

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    Chapter 1

    Thank you! I have a soft spot for kids, too. As for the story, I don't think Alan and Peter really understand how difficult the task is going to be...
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks, Sammy! I'm sorry about your uncle -- I didn't think to put a warning on the story for situations like yours. I think it's a reasonable assumption that the grandparents won't give up on their efforts to 'protect' their grandsons.
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