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  1. Graeme

    Chapter 10

    “Do I have to go to bed? Why can’t I stay up?” Troy was whining as he clearly struggled to keep his eyes open. “Because it’s late, you’re tired, and we have a busy day tomorrow,” Alan said. “You’ve already stayed up way past your bedtime.” “But it’s Fun Friday! We’re allowed to stay up. You said so! What are we doing tomorrow?” “We’re going to the park to meet Bradley’s new friend Sam. Now, off to bed.” Troy pouted. “It’s not fair! Bradley gets to play with his friends, and I don’t get to pl
  2. Best of 2016: Get a dose of the best feel-good stories of the year Police officer delivers six-year-old's lost Christmas present Police hand out discount fuel vouchers to sober drivers
  3. Graeme

    Chapter 9

    LOL Yes, you can tell true friends by those that help when you need it.
  4. Graeme

    Chapter 1

    So sweet Thank you!
  5. Graeme

    Chapter 5

    Thank you! As I've said before, Peter is in a no win situation. If things get worse, he's better off telling Alan how he's feeling, but he also doesn't want to put any more pressure on Alan. We just have to hope he either comes to terms with the new situation, or he talks to Alan before those little things become a big thing.
  6. Graeme

    Chapter 4

    Teapot cozies are incredibly useful things... As for the grandparents, you're right. Life would have been so much easier for the guys if the Lyntons would just help and not hinder.
  7. Graeme

    Chapter 3

    Unfortunately, with kids of her own and a business to run with her husband, it wasn't really an option for Merry to look after Bradley. Did you like Keidan's definition of porn?
  8. Graeme

    Chapter 2

    Thank you! Food is one of the core issues with kids. Playing games is another, and for the older kids, school. These are what they see as important, and therefore they're a big thing for them. I'll admit that I was also a stubborn kid, but I wasn't a fussy eater. I've got two boys who are, though...
  9. Graeme

    Chapter 1

    Thank you! Yes, it's a huge shock to both Alan and Peter, and a critical time for Lisa, Troy and Bradley. This is a time when the family needs to pull together, and it's not good that the grandparents aren't on board with that...
  10. Graeme

    Chapter 10

    If Ryder overthinks things to much, he's going to go into a meltdown over his first date. I love the way Shawn arranged that I just hope it goes well. Ryder will probably have a meltdown if doesn't, and I wouldn't want that to happen to him. He's been through enough...
  11. Graeme

    Chapter 9

    Tim, Tim, Tim...why do you keep doing this to me? I can't comment without spoiling the scene with the doctor... Seriously, though, you're right. A lot of the time, it's the adults who cause problems in the kids. Without them, kids would be much more sane (says the parent of two wonderful boys).
  12. Graeme

    Chapter 9

    Thanks! Good friends are definitely worth their weight in gold
  13. Graeme

    Chapter 9

    Thank you! Yes, it's great to see them getting the help they need. Now, as you've said, they need to be find some personal time for themselves.
  14. Graeme

    Chapter 9

    “How long do you think you’ll stay, Mum?” Alan asked, hoping it would be for some time. “I really don’t know, dear. I want to see Lisa and spend some time with Troy and Bradley. Then I’ll let you know.” She gave him a penetrating look. “I won’t go while you need me, if that’s what you’re worried about. And your father and I will come back as soon as we can after I do go.” Alan gave her a wry smile. “Thanks, Mum. I’m beginning to get the hang of this, but there’s a lot still to learn.” “I know
  15. It was all to do with who would be drafted and to where. I had a number of options as there were characters whose draft prospects were uncertain, so I had to make some decisions. In one scenario, two of the characters ended up interstate, with associated complications for their personal lives. I eventually decided against that option, but it was tempting for a long time. I'll PM you the names
  16. Graeme

    Chapter 5

    Kids at that age tend to live in the 'now', not the past or future. Plus, they're still talking to their mum, even if they're not seeing her. Not every kid is like this, of course, but be thankful for small mercies. If the boys had significant psychological issues as a result of the accident, things would be that much tougher for Alan and Peter. It's up for debate, but I think Lisa made the right call in forbidding her boys to come and see her. If they saw her regularly while she's still badly hurt, it would definitely affect them. As for Peter, sadly this is not an uncommon story. It's the reason relationships sometimes break up after a child is born -- the new member in the relationship disturbs the balance, and sometimes they disturb it enough to end that relationship I wish that wasn't true, but...
  17. Graeme

    Chapter 22

    It looks like Jason has been kidnapped, possibly by his mother, though the tense tone in her voice may indicate she was forced to call and say what she said. I'm pretty sure that second message from Jason wasn't really from him. Now we wait...
  18. Graeme

    Chapter 8

    Stubbornness can certainly run in families Though, to be fair, Rosalie didn't really fight him, she just acknowledged it was for the kids. She probably wouldn't have accepted, otherwise.
  19. Graeme

    Chapter 7

    Thank you!
  20. Graeme

    Chapter 8

    Unfortunately, you're right. Lisa's mum is not going to takeover from Alan and Peter. She's there to help, but Alan is still the primary carer.
  21. Graeme

    Chapter 8

    Thank you! Most new parents have a support network in place, but for most of them that network is in place before the child arrives. Alan and Peter have a network, but no one was prepared. That's slowly being fixed.
  22. Graeme

    Chapter 1

    Thank you!
  23. Graeme

    Chapter 8

    A great suggestion! The only problem is contacting them to pass it on... Maybe one of them will think of it independently.
  24. Graeme

    Chapter 8

    “Alan, Dave, just the two people I wanted to see.” Alan exchanged a perplexed glance with the new apprentice before turning around. “G’day, Merry. What’s up?” She smiled. “Do either of you have plans for the afternoon of Saturday week?” Dave shrugged. “Not really.” “Me neither, though we’ll probably be doing something with the boys.” With all the challenges of looking after Troy and Bradley, as far as Alan was concerned nine days away was too far into the future to worry about. “Good! Then
  25. Graeme

    Chapter 9

    Everyone else has already said most of what I was going to say, so I'll just mention how much I enjoyed the opening dream sequence. Ryder definitely has a crush And the chapter ends with Ryder and Shawn alone in the house...
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