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Umm yeah this just got weird. I thought at the start Seb was kind of tragic and really felt for him and his circumstances. Moving on he actually turned into someone I'm not sure I would like at this point. Having a fear of spiders, the bug thing really creeped me out. Now I'm sitting wondering if he really would just let his uncle die like that. On to the next chapter.

Interesting story. I think that with his social anxiety issues, this is probably a good way for Corey to ease himself into getting to know someone. I'd expect that were this secret admirer to approach him in person he'd probably freak. Looking forward to seeing how this goes.

Wow that was a very emotional chapter. I started out confused thinking I 'd missed a chapter or something, but Keiths' timely arrival and explanation brought everything back into perspective. I'm glad Keith finally cleared the air and no longer feels threatened by Damien. I can certainly understand how it would feel to think you were losing your only friend to someone else. Damiens' last memories of his mother and his final farewell was heartbreaking. I've thoroughly enjoyed this first installment of WOE and look forward to the rest of the series. Thanks for the story.

I too thought Verina was probably sincere in her wanting to switch sides but I'm not sure if I would trust Lucifel. As predictable as some have said the bathroom scene was, unfortunately it is a common and regular occurrence and we should never allow ourselves to become desensitized about it. I think Damien showed remarkable awareness holding back his powers to avoid the risk of discovery. It also demonstrated he still has a ways to go if he is ever going to take on angels. Maybe Verina might be of some help in his training.

Damien harbours a lot of potential, we can already see the beginnings of what he could achieve with further training. I'm curious to know why Keith owes Marc favours and what does he have against Damien?

What i love so much about MJ stories (besides the awesome dialogue) is probably whereas in other stories our main characters face trials and pressures from outside forces, any angst between thses two is usually of their own making. Watching them grow and evolve and finally come to their senses has been both entertaining and rewarding. In RL someone as abrasive as Marcus would make me run a mile, yet reading about him and Jacob, they're easily two of my most favorite people ever. Thanks as always for sharing that incredible gift of yours, always a real pleasure to read your works.

I love that I always have these guys to come back to. Every now and then I need a good dose of Marcus and Jacob, they bring new meaning to happily disfucktional. It was interesting being able to look back on Marcus attempt at trying the straight *shudder* way. At least he got a beautiful daughter out of it and can now quit fapping about and get on with his hearts real desire, that scruffy fuck Jacob with his fucking asthma.

It was a good story for the most part. I was captivated by the mystery and intrigue. Admittedly I had difficulty wrapping my head around certain concepts but I've since learnt not to let myself get too bogged down in the finer details and just enjoy the ride. I think it's a credit to your originality that I couldn't fully understand the idea of creators/enablers, something which is unique and entirely new to me. Anyway, you've captured enough of my interest that I need to read on to see what happens, well done.

Bran is an idiot. Now that we have that out of the way, someone really needs to slap some sense into him so he will stop wallowing in self pity and get on with the job at hand. I'll let Leia have the final word, " You're never going to find me if you don't start fucking looking."

So Keith has been playing him this whole time? Perhaps Keiths' enabler recognised Bran as a creator and for that reason put a stop to them seeing each other. So many questions but that surprising revelation has brought us a lot closer to uncovering the truth.

I'm beginning to think that the dream is either significant in itself or will reveal some vital information. I wonder if it might be worthwhile for Bran to discuss it with Jordan.

I love a good coming out story. Brans' parents were absolute champions in their reaction to his news. Of course at the time we weren't to know they had gone through similar with his older sister so double thumbs up to them. Interesting that he mentioned Jordan was his boyfriend, not sure if I missed them making it official, but judging from Jordans actions lately, I'm guessing we could probably accept it as a given. Here's hoping anyway.

Lot of people seem to be anti-Keith. Keith has been used and abused for a while. The school loser that noone wants to have anything to do with, unless they're after a quick BJ. So why shouldn't he get some if the opportunity's there. Not his fault Brandon keeps coming back for more. With the sudden appearance of the mysterious woman. I'm wondering if by some strange twist, they are the other team

I too believe the other team were involved in this somehow, I just don't see Leia either taking the babies life or her own. I'm thinking they are trying to cover up the crime of rape to avoid any kind of attention. I really hope Brandon can sort himself out soon and hopefully become clearheaded enough to dig deeper into this mystery. Try to remember how brave Leia was then ask yourselves if that same brave girl would just give up now.

That was very untimely and I have to wonder if Leias death really was a suicide or if something more nefarious is going on. Poor Brandon is absolutely shattered and Jordan is reminded of his own tragic losses. So much for the boys to go through while at the same time trying to make sense of these confusing feelings they are having for each other. A very sad chapter but written with such feeling and great sensitivity, hats off to you.

Awwww I think if Bran hadn't run off he might have discovered that Jordan wasn't necessarily opposed to the idea.

I was really hoping Brandon might actually open up to Jordan but then the moment was lost. I can appreciate it would be difficult to talk about what he's going through, I just hope he takes up Jordans offer and at least calls him before he resorts to any kind of self harm. As for Keith, it's almost like the cutting, he returns to feel the pain along with the good feelings that come with it. It's a bit of a vicious cycle for him which hopefully he can be broken out of. Finally I wish he would stop resisting, Jordan has pretty much proven this is real, continuing to deny it is wasting valuable time, they have a friend to save.

Brandon certainly has a lot to deal with, more than your normal teenage angst.Parallel dimensions, a pregnant friend who was raped, being practically raped himself but going back for more, and having to deal with his sexual identity and the sudden realisation he may have feelings for Jordan, little wonder he's not thinking straight and making questionable decisions.

I felt like crying as i read the cutting scene. Just as Brandon observed, the world suddenly went from beautiful people to ugliness. Keith was such an arsehole and should have got the crap kicked out of him. Dark but compelling, very well written.

Creep factor aside, I'm just thinking of all the cool shit i could do with that kind of power. And I guess that's where things start to go wrong, when someone starts to abuse their powers. I can't really see how Leia could cope. It's one thing to be in denial and make up a story, but the truth of what may have happened is so terrifying it would probably drive any normal person insane.

Interesting first chapter. I was happily reading along and then we suddenly veered off into ??? I'm intrigued and looking forward to more. My first glimpse of your work and already I like the way you write.

Always loved these two, they're an acquired taste. I agree with everyone that they are stubborn and painfully retracted, but that's also what makes them so appealing. Sure, it could all be done easy but where's the fun in that? Without the drama and fuckwittedness, they'd be just another ordinary couple. However, they are not ordinary and we love them because of it. Always a joy to read your work.

What a great story with a really satisfying end. Tibs really came through and the Turners got what they deserved. Picturing the perp walk accompanied by the bad boys tune. Also glad the PI came clean and pretty much sunk the states case enabling Adam and Rob to be reunited. Loved the judges closing comment, " Mr. Smith, congratulations, it’s a boy." Happy endings all around. Adam and Rob, Adam and Duncan, Rob and Giles, even saw Tibot somewhere in there so brothers as well, like I said, really satisfying and happy ending. Thanks again for the awesome story and looking forward to reading the next installment of the TC's.

Wow just wow. Firstly, Duncan finally admitting his feelings for Adam. Unfortunately all this crap is going down so they can't really explore that just yet, but I am really glad he's there for Adam in his time of need. Loved the convo he had with his brother Ian in the car. As for Tibot, he's lead quite the secret life. And his connections to the Tampa Mafia, definitely not someone to get on the wrong side of. Didn't like or trust him at first but now I'm really really glad he's there and prepared to help Adam. " I have a lot red in my ledger, and you, Brother dear, hold most of it." I have no problem whatsoever seeing him deal to the Turners, they started all this shit and judging by Tibs phone call they are dirty as. Adam can be good cop and Tibs can be bad cop, so long as they get Rob back and send a clear message to not mess with them anymore. This was for me the best chapter so far and now I gotta read the next to see it all go down. Great job !!!

Man what a chapter. Was afraid something bad was coming but that was just the worst. Had no idea Robs' grands were such bigwigs, explains their ability to pull shit. Clearly they don't really need the money so this is just bitter vindictiveness. The aunt, what a bitch, sterilize her. I was really fkd off with Sylvia too but then realised her hands were tied. We may know the truth but clearly they had an obligation to investigate to ensure Robs' safety. Little comfort but at least hes' going to Adams' parents and not some home and Adam still gets to visit. You know you are in the right when the other side has to make up shit and resort to dirty tricks to try to win. Not sure how that's gonna help, looking forward to seeing how this gets fixed. Damn good chapter.