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Honestly there is enough there for a sequel. Only in this one Ryder's family gets repaired. We already have the bad guy in Ryder's dad and we watch Ryder's brother grow up .And since Owen is in the story we can get updates in his situation plus Margot and Jules.Hey I'm not trying to make more work for you @mastershakeme just a thought.If you already dealt with that next chapter you can always erase it😜

Here's my take on that I don’t understand how my son sat at this table for eighteen years and I didn’t know him. That’s on me as much as it’s on you and I’ll sit with that. That I considered a positive response that he at least acknowledge that much,But as others have mentioned he coldly said the word investment as if thats all he saw Owen as. “A guaranteed career. A family legacy. Financial stability for the rest of your life. For a lot of people that would be appealing .I bet Thomas thought he was showing love. Gerald married Beth a wonderful lady and raised Eric who we find out in this chapter is a great guy.So it stands to reason he might have some of those same qualities.I say this because since Gerald built the business with Thomas he might be able to get through to Thomas in a way other's can't.

Luckily Thomas thought putting the car in Owen's name was a business investment

It if wasn't that would have added at least 3 more chapter. @mastershakeme probably said to herself "Screw it I'll just put the car in his name"😄

"I am not sharing a bed with a pizza thief." Damn straight if I ever get married I'm going to insist in the marriage vows "And do you promise never to take the last two slices of pizza

a high-pressure system parked itself directly over our county and simply refused to leave. The asphalt outside my apartment window had been slowly baking for three straight weeks, The store’s air conditioning unit had surrendered halfway through June, Oh you were not happy with just a suffocating heatwave no. You HAD to have the 7-11 air conditioning go kablooie.......MASOCHIST!!!!!

Oh so Warren's unknown dad is......Anthony Michael Hall?

This progression show why some people who meet in the military form a life long bond

Miguel has nothing on Magnum P.I.as far as getting in trouble during a investigation goes

More should be said about Paige .The perfect response in that situation. I wonder if Paige knew something was up with Margot. Paige and Beth gestures might make the others physical reactions less of a s__t show. A good move would have been was for Beth to also hug Ryder and get motorcycle grease on her dress.Owen's mom would say 'Beth your dress is ruined" and have Beth respond "Better than Owen's life be ruined"

I wasn't thinking that although that was a valid thought. But my mind was all over the place with irrational thoughts the biggest one was did Owen's dad do something to prevent Ryder from showing up? Hired a P.I.or something and got the intel. Thankfully none of that all my crazy thoughts happened

Only in a @mastershakeme story is the sound of a motorcycle pulling into the parking lot the most dramatic moment.Very well done

Reception???........OH YEAH!! Reception.

"You bagged Tom. Nice." He offered Warren a solemn, deeply respectful, slow nod. "He’s hot. No homo." "Yeah, I'd totally do him," the third brother agreed instantly, tossing a green grape into his mouth and chewing thoughtfully. "No homo." "I'd totally let him rail me," "No homo." I wish all of us here could start an orgy that lasts til the break of dawn......No Homo

Mr. Weatherby? Were you reading an Archie comic book when you wrote this?

Don't get me wrong I'm glad to see this but now my system is out of whack.I was all set to see what happens next with Caleb

WHAT!!!! haven't you seen a guy with a AR-15 before

The countdown started with this chapter and I was thinking there are 33 chapters so if it happens this chapter then it's 3+ chapters to fix the fallout. But it looks like it will happen next chapter so 2+ chapters to fix the fallout,Still a doozy but if it happened this chapter it would have been a catastrophic doozy😄

D-day?...War analogy?.......Yeah appropriate

People say that before a wedding.........Just not the way YOU"RE saying it

I am not some quirky character, stuffed into the pages so that someone can win an award. Then what are you doing in a @Topher Lydon story

That would mean he would have to admit to the rest of Grey Harbor that he had been with Diana.....Well would you?

Our Sunday or @Wayne Gray Sunday? ( I swear I'm not doing this on purpose) Oh look first on page 2

that would be too normal since when does @mastershakeme do normal?

Wait a minute I don't own any pink glitter cowboys bo.........Oh is that the doorbell I hear ringing?