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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Geez take 3
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Take 2
  3. weinerdog

    Echoes

    I told myself the nightmares would fade once I grew used to the sounds, that each patrol would become a little easier than the last, that eventually the explosions, the gunfire, and the names carved onto memorial boards would stop following me back to my cot at night. If that actually ever stops happening thats when someone is damaged
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Unless this story stretches until they are 18 which I don't believe you done before (could be wrong) We want a one-off update for when they turn 18. @chris191070 after he sees this will start calculating the days, hours and minutes until that time
  5. So did Croft do the "hex"
  6. Breaking NEWS: Unauthorized Tart consumed Government orders shutdown
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    I was thinking the same thing.If Casey and his gang of morons leave it at that while they would be still bad but they wouldn't be that bad. But I fear they won't leave it at that.
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    For some reason I wasn't aware of this song with those four in it,Thanks for that
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    Levi managed a small smile at the sight that was revealed, of Father wearing a plain black t-shirt – with the logo of an old rock and roll band on it – and black pants underneath You could have thrown @Summerabbacat A bone and made it an ABBA t-shirt
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    For the record I had to do the same thing for my step dad that @kbois and @drsawzall did for about 2 years. Although I always recognized what a selfless gesture it is actually experiencing it helped deepen my empathy for people who do this
  11. This could be grounds for firing Tessa. In the epilogue please have her land a better job
  12. Look at it this way Ben will transition from being a lover to a Sugar Daddy😄 BUT!! a Sugar Daddy who loves Julian
  13. Wren acted more like an AI companion operating within the parameters than Julian ever did. Wren is the one that needs "Corrective action"
  14. Every moment of this chapter was gripping
  15. Dude must have had a jumbo espresso with a couple of vivarins crushed in
  16. This is usually @chris191070 line but not only back to Jail,Seeing why he's there he's going to get introduced to Bubba
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    I thought someone would have done this by now so I guess it's me
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    @kbois was thinking of Tony Banta on Taxi and Sam Malone on Cheers and split the difference of the actors names
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Guess which one is @kbois and which one is @Mrsgnomie
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Clark, Danson, Quigley, and Wells: Attorneys-at-Law.BTW Dewey,Cheatham and Howe wasn't available?
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Oops I meant Tyson I AM reading a story with a Dylan in it. Plus I know a guy named Dylan Tyson yeah thats it
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    what could you possibly do that you already haven't done?..... Troy is really Tyson?... Forget I said that PLEASE forget I said that
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    In your story that will be true. But outside the story you never know with our legal system
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    You're asking the wrong reader I pant after running 25 yards to catch the bus
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Well when you wake up at zero dark thirty and then wait awhile you're not exactly at your peak are you?
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