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Or in this case the most audacious

Wait that means it didn't happen yet.We can still do something what do you think guys.(BTW @Topher Lydon who won the World Series? I can place a bet)

After you just wrote a chapter about people getting in trouble over a murder you're about to do the same thing

For those of you have read this author you know she is rather uh shall we say...unique. If I used all the adjectives to describe her this would be a very long review one thing her stories never are is dull. This story is easily her finest story and that is being compared to an excellent library. While all our stories of coming our different than the protagonist in this story Owen the author does an outstanding job of expressing all thoughts and emotions that Owen went through,Thought all of us to relate to.You don't need to have read this author to appreciate this story.Highly recommended

A pack a day was almost two hundred dollars a month. WOW for so many reasons I'm glad I don't smoke but the cost? I knew that were not cheap but damn My savings account had four hundred and twelve dollars in it. That wasn’t a lot. That was barely anything. But it was four hundred and twelve dollars more than I’d had when I moved in, Actually that's pretty impressive he was able to do that with inflation these days “The classroom is lucky to have you. Come for dinner when you’re ready. Love, Beth.” There you go @mastershakeme do a one off update The First Dinner (since) of course with Mr Donnelley The First Dinner could be The Last Supper. What's wrong with you all? I checked the reviews before I started writing this comment and not one yet Well I'm going to rectify that

Obviously you don't want that to happen but WTH was going to this thing so important when they were warned that it could possibly be this bad.And the adults should have considered canceling the event

He's just too stupid to realize someone's trying to get him to leave you."Was that supposed to be reassuring?🤔 He just thought she was "really supportive of his sales numbers." Well she was supportive of his numbers.......Well more like measurements

There was one author @Mrsgnomie who I kid you not added a quote Super Epilogue which ended up being 5 chapters there's nothing keeping @mastershakemefrom doing that...right?

I dare you to tell me when you ever seen a dachshund whip off his/her diaper.Okay there was that one party but I was drunk

You're actually taking his word for it

And I guess they won't be wrong😄

Why would she have a husband when she has Access to Caleb's trust?

I just discovered this I'm going to give it a shot, The cover drawing convinced me 😄 Also @kbois being the editor and @Jason Rimbaud being a beta reader was also a factor.......I guess Don't forget any mess up in any chapter is @kbois fault

Mark Park. Are you kidding me? There HAS to be a story behind using that name

We found another decent person in Grey Harbor and such an unlikely one in Archer's attorney I hope Richard decides to move back to Grey Harbor for Billy and Rileys sake or if he can't move at least allow him to live with The Hernandez family ( get Archer to overpay on child support 😄) Speaking of Archer I said in a previous chapter comment he was just as bad as Diana boy was I WRONG. At least Archer set up a trust for Caleb. There is a show on the ID network Called Deadly Women hosted by a female FBI profiler....So when will they air The Diana Holloway episode🤔

Wow all the twists and turns this would be impressive for an famous author known for his/her murder mysteries let alone someone doing this genre for the first. time. 10 stars on a scale of one to five stars @Topher Lydon

For the Umpteenthtime I might add😄

Is the entire school aware of Jimmy and Dan? Perhaps that's where the hypocrite comments from because living is hisDad's house isn't something that would make him a hypocrite . Hanging with Jimmy and Dan that is least is a reason but still very wrong to call him a hypocrite because of that.Who would think grabbing his own crucifix on the first day could lead to all that. As far as Casey goes being a Thompson he could have acted like a Thompson when he was younger which would be responsible for how people react to him. Perhaps he's getting older and is trying to get away from that but it will take a long time for people to stop being suspicious of him if ever. If that turns out to be the case them Casey and Levi actually have a point of reference Levi is ostracized for living in "The gay house' while in Casey's case it's because he's a Thompson

Honestly there is enough there for a sequel. Only in this one Ryder's family gets repaired. We already have the bad guy in Ryder's dad and we watch Ryder's brother grow up .And since Owen is in the story we can get updates in his situation plus Margot and Jules.Hey I'm not trying to make more work for you @mastershakeme just a thought.If you already dealt with that next chapter you can always erase it😜

Here's my take on that I don’t understand how my son sat at this table for eighteen years and I didn’t know him. That’s on me as much as it’s on you and I’ll sit with that. That I considered a positive response that he at least acknowledge that much,But as others have mentioned he coldly said the word investment as if thats all he saw Owen as. “A guaranteed career. A family legacy. Financial stability for the rest of your life. For a lot of people that would be appealing .I bet Thomas thought he was showing love. Gerald married Beth a wonderful lady and raised Eric who we find out in this chapter is a great guy.So it stands to reason he might have some of those same qualities.I say this because since Gerald built the business with Thomas he might be able to get through to Thomas in a way other's can't.

Luckily Thomas thought putting the car in Owen's name was a business investment

It if wasn't that would have added at least 3 more chapter. @mastershakeme probably said to herself "Screw it I'll just put the car in his name"😄

"I am not sharing a bed with a pizza thief." Damn straight if I ever get married I'm going to insist in the marriage vows "And do you promise never to take the last two slices of pizza

a high-pressure system parked itself directly over our county and simply refused to leave. The asphalt outside my apartment window had been slowly baking for three straight weeks, The store’s air conditioning unit had surrendered halfway through June, Oh you were not happy with just a suffocating heatwave no. You HAD to have the 7-11 air conditioning go kablooie.......MASOCHIST!!!!!

Oh so Warren's unknown dad is......Anthony Michael Hall?