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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    @Mrsgnomie is probably thinking "Just an epilogue? Pftt I had a SUPER epilogue
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    Chapter 13

    WILD GUESSES!!!!!! Just for that I'll withhold my theory than Aliens came and implanted a chip in Miles before he left.....SO there
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    Chapter 13

    I hope I'm wrong, wrong,wrong about this but I'm praying that Miles doesn't find out Erik is on his death bed and then goes to the ranch and thats how Troy and Miles reconnect
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    Chapter 13

    With @kbois?????? Are you delusional ?
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    Chapter 13

    And when will that be? When Troy and Miles start drawing Social Security
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    Chapter 13

    A time jump of six month and quite a bit of time passing while sailing to all these places. You have to think there's a very good chance Troy has moved on.And everybody brace your self and be prepared to cry for Troy when we hear his POV next chapter
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    Chapter 13

    Erik really does love Miles. And Miles respects him enough to keep some kind of contact. How much detail if any did Miles give Erik for why he is doing what he is doing?
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    Chapter 13

    Bravo well done I'm 100% sure not one Korner Krew member would have predicted this. You written some horrible characters but Robin's ex and her father just maybe the biggest POS's you ever wrote.....This post was intended to be complimentary and I end up saying that
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    Chapter 13

    As I chomped into another bite, the bells over the door chimed as an older woman came in by herself. I just started reading the chapter and here's where I'm at. Now stay with me...He's in Florida where @kbois recently moved from and then this happens you don't suppose the women is..... and this actually happened?.........OK back back to the chapter
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    Chapter 13

    Ah the good old days @Mrsgnomie making sure she's first.Or is it @kbois making sure she's first🤔..Same person you know
  11. The Wedding Planner from Hell? Every divorced man in North America thinks it was the one they had
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    Merry Christmas

    “We’re all Military Police. Oh perfect....... Is there a way to have Bernie visit the Pentagon with Kurtis Mom? And then have him cross paths with Kurtis and after Bernie tries to do his Bernie stuff with Kurtis have Richard nearby and since it his jurisdiction well he can also check for bruises on his mom....Oh please write that PLEASE!!!
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    Merry Christmas

    While Anthony is 90% sure Kurtis is his son I think he would have gotten these gifts anyway,He's a good man.Oh and perhaps he could get Kurtis Mom a civilian Job on the base
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    Merry Christmas

    Oh so Bubba will be in the jail Bernie ends up in. Bubba has been in comments on other stories.Man Dude gets around breaking laws doesn't he?
  15. What's the matter with you? This is @AquariusGuy we're talking about........The mansion will explode
  16. Didn't expect to see Leo and Ace again nice surprise
  17. Think the name begins with a..a..J!
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    The Descent

    Eli checked his phone. Fourteen percent. Don't you know anything about suspense @mastershakeme ? It has to be down to at least 2%.It written in the rules somewhere trust me.
  19. Did you all think Chase was a goner? Where exactly is he? You did hint at Shiloh and Noah reconnecting so it is in the back of my mind something will happen to Chase
  20. “Now, triple-P, you know how procedure works,” Frank said smoothly, crossing his arms What does the triple P stand for? Punk,peabrain and pompous? I sure other readers could top this
  21. We haven't seen the last of Mr. Parks and we will see him again.... in another capacity. Dead I hope
  22. If I remember correctly in the previous version Charlie wasn't adopted. Is this an attempt to make Kody's family to resemble Killian's family some what? Charlie is a crack up😄. He's someone who would annoy me but I would also miss him. .and maybe fringe benefits.” I like Nick already 😄 I'm glad you retained the coffee shop. Killian's adopted brother Tad I think his name was. Have you thought of doing a future story centered around Charlie meeting Tad? I bet both Dabeagle's and your imagination could do a lot with that
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    Chapter 31

    Along with Tony telling his story and then Zack talking about being separated from his brother for years might be enough to convince Levi go with Tony and Aaron one time and I believe seeing these kids close up Levi's compassion will take over.If he's still struggling with the contradiction of his beliefs I think Father Costas will tell him he's doing the right thing
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    Chapter 31

    ‘Yeah. My Aunt Margaret . . . she turned out to be a cow of a thing . . .’ ‘You heard him,’ Matt said, with a hint of mischief in his voice. ‘She was a bitch of a thing.’ It @Summerabbacat had been Matt's husband instead of Luke and the topic of the Monolith came up instead of these accurate but short comments the chapter would have needed a part one and part two
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