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One thing I like about this story is nobody is an A-hole Marshall Lee in this chapter also showed he's a good brother when they went with Axl on the date. "He's not fine," Marshall-Lee muttered. "He's been like this all week. Re-folding that uniform. Practicing his smile in the mirror." "I did not practice my smile." "You definitely practiced your smile. I heard you. 'Charming but deep. Charming but deep.'" How many mirrors does their place have? Between Marshall Lee doing his and Axl practicing his smile anyone else would never get to use it That's what decent people do." Ollie knows how to be a decent person he just thinks what his father would do and does the opposite You watched a video on waffles?" Marshall-Lee's voice. "I watch videos on everything. It's called being prepared." Ollie laughed—that real laugh, warm and easy. "He's right. The first three batches were disasters. We're finally getting the hang of it." Axl f--ks up pancakes while Ollie f--ks up waffles if that that doesn't make them a match made in Heaven what does?
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The only problem with that name is it sounds too close to taint I hope he didn't have a tough time growing up
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This was very tough to read I think the author captured what kids being kicked out of their home go through. Kitt is more resourceful and is a type who doesn't give up and it was very scary for him could you picture another kid even younger and more unprepared? I hope Matt remembers Riverbend and makes the connection
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I just opened my water bill and electric bill at the same time....I was shocked.........Have a good day despite of what I just wrote😄
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"I know who you are. I know you're a private eye. Now, why don't you tell me why you're really here?" From the moment Lily introduced him as Killian Kendall I thought uh-oh. Since this is sort of undercover I'm surprised Killian didn't of using another name. "Yeah, you didn't have to come over. I could have shown Killian to the site," Jacy chipped in. Me thinks Jacy had another motivation for showing Killian the site. "Wait... Lily, Rose, Daisy? Five girls and you all have flower names?" Daisy should have been named Narcissus (Daffodil) since it sounds so similar to narcissist. There is a garden flower called pansy I bet Daisy would have been even more livid with Flecther if she was named that😄
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I'm not done reading the chapter yet @Josh Aterovis but I had to comment while this was fresh in my mind Why just last week he got so upset when I went shopping that he ate the neighbors' cat. They were so angry! They wanted to put him down!" Her voice was actually filled with righteous indignation, as if she couldn't understand why her neighbors would be upset that her dog had used their cat as a chew toy. "They just don't understand you, do they? Do they?" You DO know you might have just alienated @Summerabbacat don't you?
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If Orel could get 847,392 subscribers for Isopod Canada imagine what he could get if he had a hidden camera on Axl and Ollie and put that on YouTube?
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Just the tip? I thought it would be the whole........never mind
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I think we all are🤞 Lets hope he's on a vacation or something
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I have an idea if Bobby posts that video someone should post the video following that one with Shaun kicking Bobby's ass .What would that make him?
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Wasn't that already in one of your stories🤔
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I'm guessing that suit is either a record company exec or perhaps wants to be Defaced Manager
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Now for the aftermath.... you know what that means! 🤭 I think I do BUT!!!!....It is you we are talking about so I'll shudder in the meantime
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What Don Fraser is doing it seems like it Axl and Marshall were wild kids they would get away with who knows what. I bet they could plan an orgy around Don's schedule.......HEY!!!
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After seeing the Pancakes Axl makes CPS might take Marshall Lee out of the home
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Maybe the attitude is different in Canada but in the U.S. most people would consider 22 and 17 to be too much of an age difference. I have a very good friend (Just a friend although he's gorgeous) I worked in a rec center and he showed up there I was 20 he was 15 and all we did were friend things and we got stares. Also in the US people here will hear 17 and go aaaaaah!!!! Interesting the other night Axl made Marshall and Aiden go on a delivery with him and now he leaves them alone.
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Part of the reason Kitt ran were these thoughts He pictured that same anger turned on Matt. On Matt’s family. He couldn’t do that to him. He couldn’t drag him into this storm, let his father name him as the problem. Couldn’t risk the Everests being pulled into the blast zone. “Don’t ruin his life too,” Kitt whispered, voice breaking. Kitt is assuming Matt's family will be the same way and chances are that isn't true
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Wow if I were Toby I would be thinking the same thing about "killing" Morgan it would be hard not to😢 it inspired some songs but overall so tragic I bet Greg has done this with other students what does Ollie do?🤔 Professor Nikolai Volkov .Seriously?Did you use a name of a wrestler for a Russian professor😄I wonder if he sings the old USSR anthem before class
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Thank you so much for posting that.When I woke up this morning my first thought was "What would I have to do to keep A yak?🤔 Seriously I think this group could cover everything
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Uh Why a Pizza Hut pizza?🤔
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The box was too small. It covered maybe forty percent of the necessary area. But it was something. Either Axl is really well endowed or Dominos make really small pizza
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I looked Isopod Canada on YouTube you weren't lying to us were you? "Mrs. Slater's not... she's not doing great. Someone's gotta make sure they eat." I might make cracks about Axl but he's a good guy I'm glad Orel is doing SDP2 I think Axl and Oliver might be good for each other
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You said weird a lot in this chapters and it certainly applies. While feeding a stray cat is a good thing Aidan must have seen other things over 6 years to have the interest in Guimauve er.....Marshall
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Tips would be a whole lot better for them if they did.........They would get my business even if I hated the pizza company's pizza
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It looks like some progress what made with Tad I'm guessing baby steps with perhaps with a step back for every few steps forward.Having Tad meet Jake (That was his name right?) Is a good way to have Jake in the story and that's good but if I recall he wasn't in the most stable of places himself
