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If I recall correctly I think I remember @Josh Aterovis saying somewhere that Jace is 19. And yeah you're right @refueling835I didn't think of that but Kace or Jillian would be cool.

I almost said a spoiler last chapter comments...sorry. Have to consider the possibility of things ending with Micah and then...Asher again? I like both characters so whatever happens ,happens. One case was reserved for his collection of detective novels, many of which were autographed first editions. Did you sign one of yours for Novak @Josh Aterovis?

We got the pre-game analysis from Aube along with @Topher Lydon and @drpaladin studio pre-game show. Now it's time for the game plan

A B+!!!!!!!!! oooooh I feel faintWe all heard stories about demanding parents and the majority of them are not good

Well as long as Jason stays in the house he'll be okay but does Andrew and Peter know that? I figured it would be something Tanaka would tell Andrew.

Are you going to have a scene where Clovis beats up Brick?Or better yer Denton?......Can you write one🤞

What @mayday said about Kitt's dad. I wonder if he was one to have fun when he was younger because he seems clueless to Kitt's state of mind.I wonder what Christmas is like at that house. “I just… didn’t know how to say things. So I didn’t say anything.” And for the most part they still haven't said much at least not in any detail. I guess Matt saying 'I miss you" was an icebreaker of sorts......Oh that might be an unfortunate choice of words see how they spend time at a lake thats starting to freeze over

“You have made me rethink all my previous opinions regarding the quality of gay people. You are a fine young man.” Even when Michael tries to do the right thing he does it an a F'ed up way

I'm saving that comment for the next time I say something stupid in a chapter comment (Which may be the next one)

Especially if it connects to CC

Disappointed to hear how Tad is acting. Adam said something similar what @RichardWrites commented on last chapter and I have to agree it is a huge ask of Micah because Killian is only 18. If I remember right Nikki knows Lily Snyder (correct me if I'm wrong) I ask this because I wonder how Killian gets in contact with the characters from the previous story. If I'm right then I could see Nikki bringing this up to Killian after he has that awkward conversation with Asher.

Okay I'm a little confused (as usual) and not by the chapters being out of order. I forgot to ask this yesterday but I thought The Warlock and Carel was trying to avoid The Dark Lord but here it looks like they are working for him. Did I miss a chapter?

Unless I misread the chapter Jason has been on the streets and then Will took him to his house and Andrew and Peter say they are coming. During those two months there was no mention of Denton and his thugs doing anything. Now that they say they are taking the Mule to get Jason these thugs show up like they know that. I don't think Denton and his neanderthals are smart enough to bug phones so how did they find out?

Forgive me for being cynical but things are progressing too nicely. I'm guessing once it's apparent they are more than just friends then things will happen. From one of the families? You would think it would be from Kitt's family but you never know.

Judayah name sounds suspiciously close to a name of a famous traitor I bet that wasn't an accident

Man this was gut wrenching but beautifully written. Now what is the plan against Jason's POS father?

I have to agree with @drpaladin the scene with the twins melted my heart. “So,” she said slowly, “the guy you were trying to kill a few weeks back… is now dead? How… convenient.” I like the character Gretchen but here she was STUPID!!!! grabbed Cliff’s arm, and dragged him around behind the garage, already hissing at him under her breath.Hey Moron..er Monica Cliff is the best thing to happen to you better then you deserve are you trying to F that up also? Between me and Cliff…and Monica, we’ll get everything in order over here. No child left behind.” The only thing wrong with that perfect statement is the pause should have been longer 'Between me and Cliff and....................................monica

I wonder if Sean will ask Gabriel something unexpected and Gabriel gives a wrong answer? Gabriel immediately spotted a man trying his best to look nondescript as he casually leaned against a column as he thumbed absently through a battered magazine. The man was attempting to look thoroughly engrossed in the magazine but couldn’t stop himself from looking at every person that walked by. Maybe Lonnie wasn’t as experienced as he first thought. How lame who reads a magazine these days. Lonnie should have have been looking at his phone instead maybe even pretending to be having a conversation on said phone

Maybe because they both like ....butts?...yeah I know that was a reach some times I'm as dim as a two watt lightbulb ..I mean...never mind

It will be interesting to find out why Kitt is the way he is

“No, Dimitriy. Oh, poop. I thought you were calling me Allen. Everybody calls me Dimmy though. Funny people called me that also.....I wonder what the reason for that is?

much better than your typical sixteen-year-old answering questions from a boyfriend or girlfriend’s parents, where most responses consisted of monosyllable words at best. Miguel was polished.Is this Miguel being coached as to what to say? “And he’s based here in Medellín?” “Primarily. Though he’s almost always traveling. He has some other holdings too – real estate, a logistics company that moves freight across the country, and a few boutique hotels on the coast.” Juan Camilo raised an eyebrow. “Which cities?” “Cartagena, Santa Marta,” Miguel replied. “Small properties. Not chains.” You just know what Hunter's dad and Juan Camilo will be doing with that info. Could it be disinformation? “And now, the U.S. has decertified Colombia as a partner in the war on drugs,” Miguel added. “Which means many more millions of dollars in aid will be lost. It could destroy the economy here and worsen the drug problem.” You can tell Miguel is a smart kid so he might know this on his own or does he know this from his father? Miguel has expressed interest in leaving Columbia with Hunter.Is thier a sincere gesture about his feelings for Hunter OR is he also being used as bait? As you can tell I'm undecided on Miguel but I'm considering both scenarios equally

Here is what I'm not getting and why David didn't at least make this argument. Why take the word of someone who is already in Juvie over the VICTIM!!!!! the victim knows who did it.

So Ollie has to maintain a 2.8 GPA? If it turns out he's one of the better basketball players he'll be surprised how some C's might all of a sudden turn into B's @Lee Wilson sounds sentimental there so I hate to rain on his thoughts. But Ollie will be roommates with Logan who had a crush on Ollie and perhaps one night with a little too much alcohol?.....Just saying. They are only human

Your are writing Peter and Jason perfectly "Peter! The toaster has declared war! There’s smoke and everything!".....Not sure I would want to hire a lawyer who can't do toast