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  1. weinerdog

    Prologue

    Well something is going to happen where Wylen shows how useful he can be. “Your not small,” Wylan replied with a slight smile. “How do you know that?” Darien asked as they trotted along. “Last night, ser. You’re bigger than I am at any rate,” Wylan shrugged. I'm sure I wasn't the only reader thinking this but I'll be the perv to say it Exactly WHAT was bigger according to Wylen
  2. “Okay,” he whispered. “I’ll… think about it. About writing.” My first thought after reading that? Okay so four chapters later Maybe tomorrow he’d buy a postcard. Maybe he’d write: Mom, I’m safe. Then a few sentences later it's November well did say maybe. So I'm thinking Thanksgiving?..Christmas? Stephen’s hands tightened. “Afraid that my son choosing that path will ruin him. That people will hurt him. That his life will be hard. That he’ll suffer.” “And you think driving him into the snow made his life easier?” the pastor asked softly. If it was anyone else but the Pastor saying that I think the perfect follow up would have been to say DUH!!!!!
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    Chapter 2

    ‘Although it’s actually more commonly referred to as the Southern Ocean.’ When did that happen? When I was is school it was only The Antarctic . ‘Hello boys. Have you been having fun?’ Charlie and I glanced at each other. ‘Yes, Nan,’ he answered. ‘Just been playing some games.’ Well he wasn't lying
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    Chapter 2

    He was wearing only a pair of boxer briefs and looked like a drowned rat, his hair dripping everywhere, apparently having just come from the shower. ‘I certainly hope you’re not going to school dressed like that, young man?’ I don't see a problem with that?....Do any of you?🤔
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    Chapter 8

    I have the perfect comment about Morgan McNutjob(Not her real name) and this situation.....But I can't post it because I haven't filed the proper forms yet.
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    Chapter 20

    I did
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    Chapter 18

    You are NOT speaking ill of the dead ...You are speaking ill of the fictional dead..Sort of like when a movie audience cheers when the bad guy gets it...That works for me
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    Chapter 51

    The last time you said one as in one more drama before TBOB we got five (or so)
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    Chapter 18

    We could ask Paul McCartney ...oh wait that was came IN through the bathroom window
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    Chapter 7

    Tune in? I've been reading instead.What station is this on?
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    Chapter 18

    What a predicament they are in I would like to be alone with either of them in a bathroom but not like that. Here's thought Jacy showed a real interest in the artifacts if McClain confronts them maybe Jacy can say "I know some of those artifacts were stolen" That nightmare Killian had is very disturbing
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    Chapter 18

    Invite Jacy to the cook out Killian
  13. weinerdog

    School Starts

    I love your scene with Scott and Willie but maybe I had a better one "Hey Willie I'm so sorry I didn't notice a couple of your teeth were imbedded in my fist I didn't mean to walk away with them. here you go"
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    Chapter 7

    Lilith, now dressed in clothes that Chloe had helped her with (a process that had involved much swearing, one near-breakdown over the complexity of buttons, and a brief existential crisis about the existence of zippers), Lilith should be thankful that in this case she's not a guy if she is having trouble with the concept on putting on clothing imagine the tragedy of zipping up pants "How do we shield?" "You think about the least romantic things possible." Give them all a picture of me in a thong problem solved
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    Chapter 19

    How do you do that? I can't get my coffee creamer to spell Good ❤️Morning
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    Chapter 19

    Hope everything goes well🙏
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    Chapter 19

    Okay I'm confused (I know nothing new) It seems like like it should be one more chapter coming but there's a Share Your review now link as if the story is over. You said it was 20 chapters and this is chapter 19 but the prologue is also being counted as a chapter so I wonder if this is a GA thing?
  18. What the children did was very cool. And its good people around him remembered Kitt's birthday.So what will be the thing that will make Kitt ready to really talk to Matt?
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    Chapter 51

    Very well done❤️ . In most GA stories Xavier would be the biggest a-hole in this one I'n not even sure he's in the middle of the pack. Come up with something really good for him in the epilogue....something like he found out his GF is really a Man😄
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    Chapter 51

    Ben had come back an hour ago with three bulging McDonald’s bags and four drink carriers of Coke, Well thats enough for me what is everybody else having? Actually in my heyday that isn't that far off
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    Chapter 6

    Oh yeah I forgot about that.....The U.S. sucks
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    Chapter 6

    That looks a lot like my first day at Drivers Ed....I not exaggerating by much
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    Chapter 6

    I don't like that .That means everybody is illegal and jailbait
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    Chapter 17

    I love Satchmo's rendition of What A Wonderful World(Along with others songs).He is a perfect example on how passion can overcome a limited voice Wow quite a revelation for me about Perry Como😭 Totally agree about Sinatra I think Dean Martin was way better But I will say this about Sinatra while he was soooooo overrated as a singer I think he was underrated as an actor.He was a damn good actor
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    Chapter 18

    Seven-eleven had the super big gulp and then the double gulp what would this be? Starbucks has the tall size I guess this would be The obese(limited time only)
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