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You know if this chapter wasn't a flashback to when they were younger and I know present day Lyn is alive and well (sort of) I would have sworn Lyn was going to fall off the roof
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To what degree will Carl be a problem? I think it's obvious they will all 'just happen" to bump into each other in Chicago even though it's a big city. I hope Carl doesn't end up being a stalker
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Yeah that trip to Sydney ought to be interesting
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Excellent chapter every thing was so sweet. But then Peter had to go to the hospital. It may be a good thing Marty was with him if Peter was by himself I'm sure he would have said nothing .But Marty insisting he go to the hospital and getting there earlier might be crucial
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Punching My Way to Success
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Punching My Way to Success
That sounded like a good time,Both the Pizza place AND Paul and Jeff dorm room. Well that sucked. I needed to add two extra lines of code, just so our compiler could understand the obvious. One could laugh how it was back then but it still happens now. A friend was hired for a great job and all of a sudden it was removed and he was told they didn't want people of his character working for them. A lot of other weird things like having a bad credit rating all of a sudden. After some investigating which took awhile he came to find out all this happened because some police officer in the midwest mistyped a arrest report by one number and all the things that the report was supposed to say about the scumbag that was arrested was all of a sudden on his background check -
The fact that the coach is calling tells me no rumors have been flying around yet otherwise it most likely would have gotten back to the Coach by now. I wanted to know what happened between them to cause the change in tone, but that would mean me having to answer his questions and I already knew I wasn’t willing to do that. Could it possibly be for a similar reason Joel has? “Yeah,” I said, shrugging. “I was told you two can be good distractions.” “The fucking best,” Gavin offered and before I could react, he reached over and pulled me into him, his arm snaking around the back of my neck along my shoulders. “We need food,” Davin said, finally swallowing the last of the cake he shoved into his mouth. “We can order a pizza when we get home,” Gavin said as he pulled me towards the front door. “We gotta show Joel a good time.” so what kind of distraction could the twins be?.....forget I asked
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Gee I hope my thumb never gets tired because.......Come to think of it you don't want to know the reason
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Ramifications: Alina Gets Her Video
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Ramifications: Alina Gets Her Video
"I like him, Jerry. I was hoping it'd kill her, but the nuthouse works, too. Even that'd cost less than what she spends now. Funerals are fucking expensive anyway." Alina sounds more like a spouse who regretted getting married. "I'll take that as a yes. Besides, if you eat me out now, you'll be getting Jerry's cum. Win-win, right?" There you go the magic words to get a gay or bi guy to participate a in a mixed three-way -
A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
Yeah they talked about seeing places but after nelson mentioning The watershed you wrote 20 minutes later they were there.So did Nelson take the scenic route there😄 -
A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
She had to tell her Aunt Elaine some of the things they did. Elaine seemed satisfied the date went well and Marie behaved. Marie was happy she had fooled her aunt. I noticed you didn't include the actual conversation , Well wasn't the "date" about showing ML around town? So what line of BS could ML have said? If she told the truth it would be "The food was good in the Mexican restaurant ,Oh and the Norris Watershed parking lot was real nice" -
A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Lawyer, Insanity?, and The Date
While I think (And hope) this isn't the case I did wonder did Ed researched this stuff and had it in the back of his mind that he wanted to kill Claude even before the last incident with George? The only other way he would know all this legal stuff is he's a bright student and has plans to become a lawyer himself. -
Family Is What You Make of It
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Family Is What You Make of It
“He was involved in other things,” Wen insisted. “He was a kid, trying to please his parents. Don’t tell me you can’t relate,” Hearst said cuttingly. Wen paled visibly. That must have hit pretty close to home. Maybe Wen just might be capable of learning something.I guess we'll find out in the epilogue. A talk show says so and so will be on their show and they don't tell them first? Is that how far things regressed? Pretty arrogant if you ask me “No. But I do like licking you all over. Does that count?” Since when that doesn't count🤔 -
That'll be enough talking,' our subby said, while looking straight at us when he said it. 'You can save that for later. Now, I'm sure you all know the drill. When I call your name please respond.' A giggle quickly passed through the room, followed by a stern, 'Enough!' It sounded like somebody got out of the wrong side of the bed this morning. 'Anderson, Charles?' our subbie called from the roll. Here.' 'Baartz, Amelia?' 'Here.' The teacher calling the roll saying the last name first reminded of something that actually happened on a first day of one of my school years. We had a buddy his name was Richard Large and yep you guessed it he went by Dick because of course he did. Well all of you could already guess what happened in one class the teacher was calling roll using the last name first and she said "Large, Dick" There was muffled giggling for the rest of the class
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I've heard it said rape is not about sexual gratification but more about power and I can see that being Baker's motivation(I now refuse to call him Timmy that sounds too friendly) Zack being on the small side also didn't help. It will take a lot of guts for Zack to make this allegation🤞
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Even before D (I'm not Joey so I can't call him Darius) found out from Nina about the phone being bugged going to Folly Beach a place where Vinnie sent him in the past is too obvious. If D is going to think or some brilliant plan to avoid the trap being set he's going to need a lot more common sense then he's shown so far
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The New Relationship Gets Complicated
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The New Relationship Gets Complicated
Why am I picturing videos going viral?🤔- 28 comments
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The New Relationship Gets Complicated
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The New Relationship Gets Complicated
She's a.....cut?...dut? no that's not a word. gut?.... I'll get back to you.- 28 comments
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After growing up in the neighborhood Mark did I could see him taking Carl's vanity as a big so what.
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Like in one of your previous stories all this technical stuff has my mind swirling. Chuckling, he replied, “I think I can handle lunch. I’ll send out for Chinese or Mexican, or maybe pizza, or I can order sandwiches from a great deli nearby. spending time with Professor Ellis DOES have its benefits. I appreciate how classic Stairway To Heaven is but that has to be the most overplayed song is history
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Yeah look it up It's a pudding . Might be the cream @Mark Ponyboy Peters was referring to
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@chris191070 can tell you about a desert they have in Britain (And I understand Australia also) called Spotted Dick. These comments tells me you two would like that
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There is obviously a health problem with Peter. I hope it gets revealed while they are on the vacation Peter is going to need all those good people around although it would put a damper on everyone's Chistmas
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A Meeting and Ed In Custody
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Meeting and Ed In Custody
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I think saving the text from Timmy might be a good idea. Im sure some law got broken there
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A Meeting and Ed In Custody
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Meeting and Ed In Custody
I bet Todd liked what he saw if Nelson and ML have a falling out Todd could fill one role of ML's. There's definitely something going on with Ed I just hope it is something that can be diagnosed. "Well, mostly just because we felt things weren't working between us. They were both amicable breakups." Most guys Nelson's age don't use words like amicable he may be too smart for ML "I can see you're a polite young man, saying sir isn't necessary. Wait is this Nelson...or Eddie Haskell🤔- 28 comments
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