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And Darius thought—These two idiots were his now. And for better or worse, they were a team. I'm picturing Beverly Hills Cop Darius is Axel Foley and the two idiots are Rosewood and Taggart. You mentioned Murphy's Law @akascrubber. You didn't mean Eddie Murphy did you? I ain’t the same dumbass kid You're absolutely right about that Josh......You're a DIFFERENT dumbass kid

When this story started Alexander was easily the biggest douche of the three. After. This chapter he might be the least. Although he still had to say "Roman not Greek" Brad probably doesn't even know Lyn vomited because he was too busy looking at the two boobs showing the four boobs

Baker got off cheap IMO. But I can imagine this will be the gift that keeps on giving for Baker everything being on Facebook an all. Maybe you already have but I see material for another story with these characters .Perhaps from Zack's POV. And speaking of another story It's not prom night, mum,' I protested. When I read that line I was thinking of them actually doing that and The Catholic school's reaction to it,

The word "loose" involving a story with ML in it.....Yeah it fits

Well I was trying not to pile on while this one not as good as the other ones but here goes ML is also known as Mrs. Lincoln, Why? Everyone took a shot at her in the balcony

Coffee with pods is the best but while the Keurig machines are affordable the price of pods is outrageous so it's drip for me also. BTW how do you make instant water? Just add water?🤔

You just know there is going to be a scene later in the story with all three of them and voices will be raised and big mouth Carl will spill the beans about their encounter

Perhaps Baker was only going to go to the party and keep his distance.But after seeing that text it will most likely spur him and his goons to do something at the party especially if there is some alcohol around. Not that Baker needed any encouragement to do something stupid

You talked about the possibility of continuing Ed's story I could definitely see if after 6 months Ed goes back to school there will be some who think he got off too light. Did Claude have a younger sibling? "Just once, though, right?" "Right. [spit take} cough, cough choke. Sort of like a lawyer saying "Just a white lie" . She wants to have a threesome, well, actually a foursome." Well the more the Marie-er (No that wasn't misspelled)

Whatever the hell Brad is thinking. it sure won't make it in a "How To Have A Happy Marraige" book

“Took a hit, but he’s stable. Getting a transfusion now. You can visit. Just don’t be seen.” This might be a good time to to have Joey in drag.....accompanied by Big Mama of course eh @drpaladin

Well we see a way out now but that doesn't mean @mastershakeme isn't going to put these guys through World War Two...Maybe even world war three with nuclear weapons😳 “We’re playing pool.” Joey groaned, dramatic. “D, I don’t know how to p-play pool.” “Then I’ll teach you.” How come I was picturing Joey ripping the pool table cloth?🤔 Don’t do anything stupid. And don’t raid the mini fridge—this isn’t the Hilton.” Aw how heart warming a federal employee concerned about the nations budget

I sort of see a situation where Jeff and Paul could be going to school together the coming fall🤞 On Monday we learned that the tour operator insisted dinner had been included and that we must be lying. Oh really! Someone should have insisted that a trip be taken back there and ask the Amish ladies themselves if they charged the students for dinner. Would the tour operator have call them liars? Interesting In didn't know about the Amish using modern power tools to make furniture. I see Werner von Braun got mentioned. You should have wrote it where he was the guest speaker. I wonder how many in the group would have called him a Nazi

I second that.

Nobody has said anything about the ML part of the chapter so here goes Nelson's father was a junior partner in one of the largest legal firms in the area. Well even if ML doesn't love Nelson he is still the most practical choice for her marry.

Yeah most of those people seem to get elected to office

Judging by your stories.......It's just you😄

A friend of mine son went to a Catholic HS and they knew he was gay and nothing happened from the administrators......Of course he was also the football team star quarterback....gotta have your priorities you know

I think Davin said Colt has never stayed there make me wonder if Colt is oblivious to how the twins feel and how they apparently hate that house. Joel and the twins know what it's like to have parents that suck and Colt doesn't I bet he's unaware of how lucky he is

not really being too into pizza at all, OMG what a weirdo Joel is (kidding) he IS right about the too much sauce and not enough toppings a lot of places are guilty of “I’m going to go to Faith’s,” Gavin said as he downed his second beer. I watched as he cleaned up the condensation ring before throwing everything away. “Why?” Davin asked as he stepped into Gavin’s path. “You were just over there.” “If you need an answer to that question, Dav, then I feel fucking sorry for you,” Gavin said as he winked and shouldered past him. Gavin had a similar comment in another chapter I think it's another clue about Davin “I can’t wait to get out of here,” Maybe with Joel when the time comes If Wes and I had tried that, he would have punched me and we would be on the ground, both of us trying to better the other, but that hadn’t happened in years. Not after I outgrew him and put on muscle. Since you said we. are not even at the halfway point yet could you add a flashback scene where Joel And Wes were younger and Joel kicks Wes ass for the first time?.....I know it probably doesn't fit the story but I think us readers would want to read that anyway😄

I wish I had a better ability to be more descriptive as @Laura S. Fox was a very unique way or writing but this much I can say I highly recommend this it is a whole lot of fun

A+++++++++ 0r 10********* out of 10 whichever you prefer I'm sure your going to get questions like this but what did Wen end up doing after 3 years

I wonder if Dallas dad was going to say the same load of crap.He may have showed up calm but I guess seeing JJ in just a towel put him in the same state of mind he usually is in. 'Don't tell me that you still insist on ham and pineapple? That is sacrilege!' Truer words have never been spoken

Sorry for the cliffie!!! No, I'm not 😂🤪 You warn us of that but not about Skylie I'm bummed at that. I guess you used her like like the writers of Star Trek used to use faceless members of the Enterprise crew.Captain Kirk or Bones or Uhura don't die just the other crew members. My guess is the answer is in the fish Joey found that had the flash drive. Now for a WTF observation Then—BANG. Someone slammed into the bathroom door. WHY DID YOU USE BANG FOR SOMEONE SLAMMING INTO A BATHROOM DOOR!!!!!!!😲😳 Don't you know authors use the word bang for shooting a gun?????For a second that's what I thought happened “Fine. Just… try not to drive her off a cliff, okay?” Apparently Zeke didn't see the part about Sorry for the cliffie!!!

Peter noticing something was off about Todd was mentioned for a reason. I hope it's what @Flip-Flop speculated that it was because of Angela but if it's something physical damn.