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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    If I recall correctly someone mentioned last chapter if Nate could possibly get out of his commitment with the Australian army if he decided he wanted to stay. In the 70's in the U.S. Army you just had to be gay or bi I assume the policy was the same down under then. with the protesting hinges of the door once again giving away his entrance. Jeez WD40 or something like that'll stop it. Get some already. ‘Are you decent?’ a now familiar, sweet voice called out. Why did she have to ask that?🤔.Actually it reminds me a gag I once did.There was a knock on my bedroom door asking me I was decent when she walked in she said "YOU"RE NAKED" and I said "You didn't't ask if I was naked you asked if I was decent.Most people will tell you I am"
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    Chapter 23 S3

    Clint is never going to stop trying is he? Oh and can you ask Devin and Mac to but some lottery tickets for me🙏
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    Not Enough

    I suspect something has to happen to get Carter out of their orbit before they can make any kind of progress
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    Packing Up

    The roles are reversed in this chapter .In previous chapters Marty was making sure Peter did what he had to do. But then there is this “You rest here for a few minutes, and I’ll get dinner ready.” “But I told you I’d do that!” Marty protested, his back arching as he was about to get up. Peter sprung up quicker, however. He stood directly in front of him and placed both his hands firmly on Marty’s shoulders, playfully but firmly pushing him back down. “You got most of the stuff done already, so it’s not a lot. And I hardly did anything all day, especially compared to what you went through.” “But I said…” “Stay!” Peter ordered. Now I'm looking forward to the trip home. Good luck Angela🤞
  5. WOW!!!!! You really have cut down on your whiskey intake that's about 95% less then what you used to put in it Seriously it sounds great I gained 5 pounds just reading the ingredients
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    Chapter 14

    Well obviously at the dinner table
  7. Even with Carmine and Vinnie and all their thugs(like the ones who killed Skylie) Ronnie is the biggest POS in the story. I hope you have something really special planned for him
  8. Great chapter Bluefund...Er @mastershakeme
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    I Promise

    “Promise you won’t think of anyone else while you suck my cock,” Alexander ordered again. “I promise.” Lyn presented his pinky with a big smirk on his face. I'm surprised Alexander didn't say "I can read minds" And mean it Brad had assured them that this part of the island was never visited by tourists, so it was okay for them to just swim in the nude. Like in their younger years, I disagree NOT like in their younger years there's a difference a BIG difference....This time Luke was there.........Well to me it's a big difference😛
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    Longings

    No communication between Mark and Johnathan whatsoever.You can't solve anything like that
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    The Flood

    Noticed Larry wasn't mentioned That's good. They’ve had some name acts perform there in the past.” “So who’s gonna be there tonight?” Paul asked. “Never heard of them, but they’re supposed to be good,” I replied. “Folk music, I think. I was hoping you would come up with a name of a band that hadn't made it big yet. This was 1972 so The Eagles were just starting to get known. You could have used Jim Croce even if he never played there. What they said about cars was so true .My brother worked for Toyota in the 80's and there were a lot of stories about how far behind American cars were then
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    I do get what you're saying but remember while it's been 10+ chapters for us hence 10+ weeks it has only been one week for Joel.Hmm🤔 14 chapters to cover one week? If this story goes to the Baseball season how many chapters will it take?
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    Chapter 14

    “Get your feet off that damn table, the cleaners are coming,” So? That's what they are there for. Unless the cleaners have to report to the parents how dirty the house was when they cleaned it🤔 wondering what the hell I just got myself into. If it involves more alcohol...geez. I think this is unlikely but perhaps Colt somehow gets the secret out of Joel.He would then tell Joel he would have no problem with Celia. Perhaps Cole would see Joel issues as an distraction for Trace and Celia while he goes off and does God knows what with Sierra. So if Celia goes with them could you have Joel's mom tick her off so much that Celia decks her?🙏.......Yeah I know that's not Celia so how about but how about a cutting remark instead😄
  14. Hate to burst your bubble but they contacted ME on your background check.....I'm kidding call off the hit on me
  15. Hey I live in San Diego you can buy me lunch 😁🤪
  16. Great chapter with the family.But Mike and Brad being surprised by Peter going to sleep so fast is it related to his condition?
  17. Josh may have turned what could have been a smooth operation into Hell and high water but it wouldn't be a @mastershakeme story if it wasn't The ocean’s got sharks. I’ve seen Sharknado, man.” Uh has Josh seen Jaws? and then the lawyers, the judge, they all started turning into demons. Well the judge is debatable but.....How can lawyers turn into demon?🤔 They already are.
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    Chapter 1

    Well so far this is different AND fascinating some with rusted carcasses of old motor vehicles parked beside them, I now have an idea what happened to some of my old cars two young men and three young women – all of whom perfectly fit the modern-day description of a hippie, with long hair, clothes that ranged from shabby to way-out, and bare feet. Do Cheech and Chong appear in this? The first boy laughed. ‘No, most of us don’t go by our old names here. We consider ourselves to have been reborn. We’re starting over in a new environment, so we’ve chosen to change everything about us, starting with our names.’ ‘Oh . . . I see.’ ‘I’m Arlo, by the way,’ the boy said. ‘And you’ve met Taren and Nova. The others are Wren and Luna.’ In addition to Cheech and Chong is Moon Unit Zappa here also?
  19. Great stuff❤️ A bunch of random thoughts that do't connect in any way (So from me what's new😄) "Oh. I guess since Rich is OK with it, I'll have it and he'll take care of me." We said a lot of things about ML all of them accurate but what we didn't say enough about is her general cluelessness For most of the story ML was the most hated character but in one short appearance Uncle Doug became the worst character. He also never remembered the details of that fateful day. I guess that's a good thing. When I have vivid memories of my worst moments (obviously not as serious as Ed) I cringe with shame.But he still remembers that he probably is responsible for the killing so I hope the shrinks helped him and it seemed like they did. Just a thought since you have all the players later on in life some with multiple children how about Billy's now 18 year old child contacting him? If I remember right you're going on vacation .Enjoy❤️
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    Chapter 22 S3

    Don't worry about posting new chapters concentrate on getting better.🙏I was told this by someone who said this worked for him so I'm just throwing this out there and you probably thought of this yourself. But perhaps acupuncture or acupressure?
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    Chapter 22

    Where the hell did you come up with THAT ONE!!!!!
  22. What a coincidence I'll just be happening to be passing by tomorrow
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    Chapter 22 S3

    it seems that people are constantly finding priceless objects You're not kidding about that two example that pop up to mind are a guy at a garage sale saw a plain white album sleeve with a hand written Velvet Underground on it for 75 cents. Turns out it was a demo recording BEFORE they became well known that was never released and if fetched $155,000. Another was a guy who saw one old worn out painting for $4.00 and bought it also because he wanted to use the frame. When he took off the frame he found a copy of the Declaration of Independence and carbon dating determined that it was from that time and it was worth 2.42 million
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    Chapter 22 S3

    Like @drsawzall and @Lee Wilson I'm also wondering if Pa will win. “Because sometimes there are really creepy guys hanging around outside the ladies’ room and hitting on the women as they pass by. If there are more than one of us walking together, the creepy guys will usually leave us alone, especially after we all give them a piece of our minds.” I have always heard comments about women going to a public restroom together and comedians tell jokes about it. But after what what I read here it all makes sense.Did another woman tell you that @Bill W? And if we’re lucky, it will be a huge sum that will last for several lifetimes.” Well since they are going to live several lifetimes they are going to need it and that means @Bill W will have more stories to write oh wait.....That would mean @Bill W would have to live several lifetimes also.....Is there something you're not telling us @Bill W🤔
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    Out of Bounds

    Part of me wanted to leave an angry reaction because of Larry but that would be dissing @Altimexis and since this is autobiographical that wouldn't have been right. Larry is obviously academically smart being in this program but in all other ways he's a moron. I have no doubt that one day you’ll carry a computer around in your pocket, Well Dr. Ellis sure got that right I assume he's based on someone you know. So did this Professor also see these little computers being also part of a phone?
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