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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    That picture you have at the top Charlie is certainly a cutie. Somebody who's above drinking beer?....Gee what planet did you think he was from😄
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    Taine already did this with teachers but I wonder what kind of stuff Lynix could say in a class Simon is in Thankfully you didn't write a scene where Kearns or Mrs. Simms are affected by the spell.....Or are you going to
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    I was going to mentioned that in my follow up comment but you stated it better.Asher on the other hand says this "I could transfer to Pemberton, like we originally planned." "You'd do that just for me." "In a heartbeat." That sounds desperate and hasty and contrary to what Asher said not very mature. Bottom line Asher has to stay in town for his still new family who he has gotten close to and also for his P.I. career with his mentor. Of course as I said before I'm rooting for Jacy. Speaking of I'm picturing a conversation with those two where they talk about the situation with Micah and Asher
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    "Where are we going? Am I dressed okay? Should I change my pants?" "You look fantastic. That is a big difference Asher and myself(Well anybody and myself really) Where Asher said "You look fantastic" I would have said "Hmm maybe you choose a different pair of pants" Let's go to your room and I'll help you pick the right pair"
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    The GM/director who has been flawless up to this point makes one of the stupidest mistakes. He should have done a profile on himself VULNERABILITIES: THINKING HE'S SMARTER THEN EVERYONE
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    Yikes I was being facetious in my comment but I was closer than I thought and I almost said CW but I wasn't sure if that was still around.
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    Not done reading the chapter yet but when I saw this **HILCREST HIGH: SEASON 1**. Was that on Fox? Oh wait this is Canada CTV? YTV?
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    Australian-Texan?🤔
  9. . “Why would you tell him?” “Because they asked. They knew something was wrong, and they asked, and I answered.” “But—but, uh.” He darts his eyes around. “But what?” I push past him. “You act like it's this huge fucking secret that would be the downfall of humanity. The thing is, though, Bryan, is that the only person who got hurt in this whole thing was me. Sure, it was stupid of me to kiss you, but I was twelve years old and confused, and my best friend kicked me to the curb.” “It wasn’t like that,” he says. On one hand Cooper says his parents asked and he answered simple communication right? So why can't he communicate with Bryan?
  10. weinerdog

    First Days

    Welcome the story @Jason Rimbaud without giving anything away I'll only suggest this..Be patient...But it will be worth it
  11. Out of all the way I imagined it going I have to admit this wasn't one of them So now I imagine Kitt is going to have conversations with Tom.Mateo and perhaps even Leah, Wouldn't it be something if one of the children at the center says something that inspires Kitt to take some kind of action? Now what does Matt do? I guess he is going to stay quiet as far as telling any adult about this.He absolutely won't tell Kitt's parent because Stephen is the one responsible for this happening. Matt won't tell his parents because he'll be afraid they will tell Kitt's parents. One scene I hope to see is IF Matt somehow lets it leak that he knows where Kitt is and Stephen approaches Matt is his boorish way and demands Matt tell him where Kitt is I want Matt to go off on Stephen with some choice words Not that I disliked the character before but in this chapter we find out Lindsay is an awesome person
  12. I’m pretty sure I'll be the biggest guy in ninth grade. Yeah, they better watch out. Are they in a junior high or high school? Middle school doesn't have ninth graders.If they are in a junior high then Scott can take care of things but if it's high school uh-oh Sam's birthday party is next weekend. Virgil's a couple weeks later. Well Scott doesn't have to buy them a birthday present he already has it on him. Of course it's debatable who is really getting the present🤔 "Yes Bobby. And saying nakkie isn't cool. Just go with nude, naked, or even bare-assed." Yeah I would never say nakki I would be to embare-assed to
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    The Soldier's are one thing but it seems Septimus himself is not aware of the rooftops. I mean if they can't find the children anywhere where else could they be? The Knights might be aged and smaller in numbers but as far as being tacticians they have a huge advantage
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 17

    I think it's Septimus himself shifting into whatever that was.If I'm right I think this would be known among the more elder knights
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    Then Mrs. Hartley said: "I'm going to need more tea. Much more tea." She didn't mention what she was going to put in the tea. "Does it count as pansexual if you only, technically, sleep with yourself?" I wonder if a pansexual with a double jointed back has this conversation with himself
  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    I have to think there's a way for the GM to think things are going to plan and BOOM at the very last second before he can react something happens, Tim being an insider now might be in a position to do that
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    You need this more than I do
  18. I'll refrain from commenting on chapters that haven't appeared on GA yet but I will say I'm disappointed in Hunter also, But I remember how horny I was when I was Hunter's age, Could I honestly say I would not have done what he did? I hope I wouldn't have but I can't say for sure,
  19. There has to be some way for Kitt to let Matt know he's alive and surviving without giving away where he is. “It leads to hardship. To judgment. To sickness. To danger. To a life without… without normalcy. I didn’t want that for him.” Right now Kitt has all of that.Is it because he's gay? No Stephen it is not it is because of YOU!!!!!!!
  20. weinerdog

    Dilvuging

    So the very idea he could think, even for a moment, that Tom would turn on him made him nauseous. It was a feeling he never wanted to feel again. For a person who is so good at what he does Gabriel sure fucks up a lot Sean, with zero training, had an innate ability to observe and correctly read people’s motivations, Who knows how far this Sean/Gabriel thing goes Gean? Sabriel? but I digress. Even if they only end up being friends it sounds like Sean could make appearances in future Gabriel stories with this ability he has. Hmmm🤔 is Justin Timberlake an operative by any chance? At the far back was a large table with a brightly lit vanity. This is where he’d alter his appearance and change the look with wigs and makeup to transform into other people. When I first read that I was thinking if Gabriel messes up with Sean he could his appearance and start over. Unless Sean seen a certain body part of course.......Actually I would not surprise if Gabriel has stuff to change the appearance of that also
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 50

    All these things happening....... Sound like a typical day of a rock band to me
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 50

    Jesse put a hand to his chest. “Excuse you. I am wearing a costume.” Ariel raised one dark eyebrow. “Oh?” “Yes,” Jesse said gravely. “I’m a tired dad.” That reminds of a time we had a costume party at a house I was a roommate at. I was in my regular clothes and somebody approach me and said "You're suppose to have a costume" And I said 'I do I came as Comfortable Man"
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    Chloe snorted. "Charlemagne? You want to call him Charlemagne?" @Topher Lydon since your stories are set in Canada I assume you're Canadian. Well if you are I'm sure you know who Burton Cummings is (He's been forgotten by some in the U.S.) Well he wrote a song called Charlemagne (probably could be found on YouTube) where there are lyrics that read 'I did not and I could not change my name to Charlemagne" I wonder if you were thinking of that🤔
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    They were brothers, bonded by a weird twist of demon trickery that had them in each other’s bodies, and forced to share a bedroom. One thing about those two sharing a bedroom...Seeing each other naked is not an issue since they sort of do 24/7
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    You forgot to include (Not her real name)
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