LD Stratton

This scene is a good one. It grabs the reader immediately and leaves him/her wanting to know the "before" and "after". No, it isn't uplifting but the tone indicates there was a pretty good "before". There are so many directions it could take. Write on!

From beginning to end, a wonderful piece of writing. I do blame you for keeping me up until 4 AM reading "just one more chapter".

From one of the best GA authors an intelligent, well written story of self-acceptance and a growing love. Set in the old West, the author brings the story alive with colour, dialog and a cleverly crafted plot that engages the reader from beginning to end. Worth a read? NO! This is a must read.

I freely admit to being a horndog and lack patience but those boys just moved the relationship along a good mile.

A good drama-free chapter that reveals a lot about the 2 guys, their private thoughts and their deepening interaction with each other.

I was not familiar with that quote but how very true it is. BTW, all chapters checked.

In the words of MacArthur "I shall return" and gladly do a check fest.

Yes I have read all chapters and I do neglect commenting on each chapter but be assured I've read them all. I will try to remember to comment but I am so fascinated to discover what is next I read on.

Just finished "Song and Dance" and enjoyed it so much I did an author search to see what else you have written. Normally I only read COMPLETED stories but your writing is addictive so I took the plunge. First, I want to thank you for writing a story that is grammatically correct. I'm already known as the Grammar Nazi and reading your work is a pleasure. I fully believe I will become physically ill if I have to once again read "He chocked on this large appendage." The word is 'choked'!😡 (After a smack on the back of my head my husband demanded I clean up the previous quote. What a prude.) Secondly, your writing is cultivated and succinct. The story is well plotted and moves along at a good pace. No suffering through multiple chapters of angst or unending descriptions of interior decor. I am looking forward to the future chapters.

Congratulations! (nothing like congrats from a complete total stranger LOL)

Renee you nailed it on the pain, the debilitation of a migraine headache. I started having migraines at University. No light, no noise, my own breathing was too loud. I literally pulled hair out of my head. I prayed for sleep, that was my escape, just get to sleep and then sleep for hours and hours. Once I went to bed at 4 PM and woke up the next day at 2 PM. Yes, 22 hours of sleep! I know what Bryce was feeling and I recognised Kevin's love and caring. This was a beautiful story of love and tender compassion. Thank you.

Curious how the Ben and Pat thing would work out. Actually I would hope they both are miserable but it would be a fertile field for some drama.

Excellent and well written. Characters were well developed and the entire story was captivating.

"I chocked on a sob..." This should be "choked". I see this error over and over in GA. Please google 'chocked vs choked'. RANT OVER.... I loved the story and the rapid-fire delivery. I literally had to stop reading and step away for a few minutes to catch my breath. Wonderful, exciting writing!

Excellent story. I had to keep reading even though it was late at night. Just had to know what was happening next. The one bit of concern is the last conversation between Terry and Justin. I think Justin has a bit of 'wanderer' in him, perhaps sexual curiosity. That does not bode well for the future of Nathan and Justin.