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Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
I'm glad Vincent is enjoying his new role and learning the ropes. Using his naivete as a cover is a good idea. Jake 8s a good mentor. 👍- 17 comments
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What a horrifying chapter. 😳 I cried. 😪 Magnificently written. Awful content. 😖 I hope that in some way it I not the end of Kage and you have some shifter resurrection in mind. Elijah needs to go somewhere for a while and recover, regroup and then come back and take Huntingdon down!
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The Power Of Long Letters
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Power Of Long Letters
Ray is the best kind of best friend. He will find a way through this mess. Maddox's mom has just become a heroin. So Jonathan and Maddox have a whole lot of good people on their side. The Xpress makes me think of Bridgerton and Lady Whistledown. The ragged excuse of a school paper will be shown up and the writers shamed as they ought to be. Maddox, Jonathan, Ray, Rusty and the boys have to find a way soon. Hopefully Hanna will be with them. Such a well written chapter. Thank you. You have elicited a range of emotions: anger, smiles, laughter, rage, more rage ... -
Nope. Hortaimin is quite thick.
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Thank you for a super chapter. Hortaimin is revealing more of his true nature, which is pretty foul. Jevikel did what he needed to, to prevent Turmevon being thrashed. I loathe characters like Hortaimin. D'gar is nobody's fool and I'm certain he is fully aware of what is going on.
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Hortaimin is an arse. I am interested to see how he gets on and whether he will impress the brown at least, expected by his father. I'm glad Kadin has impressed the Harper. Kadin is a good guy and a perfect mate for Jevikel. I am sure D'gar is aware of the candidate politicis going on and will sort it out on due course.
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Wow. Elijah will have to pull a rabbit out the hat on this one. I'm sure he will come to the rescue somehow. As for Trevor, he needs to go.
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Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
I had forgotten about the impending marriage. Thank you for a lovely chapter with many moving moments. 😘 That wedding night is going to be a riot. I am pleased that Vincent's parents were there, even in spirit. -
I can accept that 😃. We shall wait with baited breath.
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The real danger starts. Let's eee how this pair does against a lion alpha. I hope a by product is work for Ty.
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Clean Up Your Act, Rusty Parker!
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Clean Up Your Act, Rusty Parker!
The Express is a rag that is hurting people for the entertainment if others. The editor is someone who is a sadist with some kind of narcissistic elements as well. It could be Conor, or a new character we haven't met. I don't rhink it could be Ray, or Kane or any if the "bros". I'm glad Rusty got Maddox to see reason. Maddox was enjoying his anger dar too much. We do that sometimes, nurturing our righteous indignation, long after the event. It NEVER does anything but prolong the pain. I hope Maddox will hunt for Jonathan and find him. -
Well that chapter had me laughing and crying. I hope that Kage will reasses his thinking about Elijah. His life is a dangerous one, but love doesn't come knocking every day. Take it when you can and fight for it fiercely.
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Home is wherever Elijah is. Love it!
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Another cracking chapter. Thank you kbois. Kage and Elijah seemed to have slipped into a type of domesticity that suits them. They are clearly able to be around each ither for long periods of time and fet on with things. A good foundation to their relationship. I do hope that Seb and Ben will appear in the next few chapters. They are good friends to Elijah and it will be interesting to see how they and Kage respond to kne another.
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I'm glad the 3 of them are getting on. The age gap between Kage and Elijah is an interesting one. I do wonder about cross-generational relationships, straight or gay. I'm not sure I could manage the nearly 20 year gap. I will be very interested to see how this works.
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Yes, I have that sense as well. He is finally going to feel things he never thought he could and he will have big decisions to make.
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Well Kage certainly got a thorough going over from mama. He handled it like a pro. Camping should prove interesting. I wonder if there will be another attempt on their lives far from the public eye?
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So Elijah's lessons begin. 🤣 I'm glad to see that he learnt well. Strangley, domesticity seems to suit Kage which I'm enjoying.
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Yet another duplication. 😃
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Yet another wonderful chapter, well-paced with a real cliffhanger at the end. Tyler is a genuine friend who cares deeply for Elijah. He will now have to be told about Kage. I agree with Anthon Cloche, Sebastian will now fet involved once he hears of the attempted killing.
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I hope not. I would be as irritated as could be. 🙂
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Nice touch. Jay Petermeyer poster 😃. Kage and Elijah are going to grow into each other. I'm glad that the house has been cleaned, but where might the laptop be? Possibly in the classic car still with the auctioneers. I agree with Kage. I'm sure it will have the details if the pedophiles who bought the young wolves.
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Another great chapter nicely positioned to take us into the next one, with the question about MacTire. Kate and Elijah are clearly attracted to one another and I believe that even this early in the story, Kate will choose Elijah, over his bosses. There is quite a big age difference between Kage and Elijay though, 17 years. Let's see how this works out. Thank you Kboi.
