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Another cracking chapter. Thank you kbois. Kage and Elijah seemed to have slipped into a type of domesticity that suits them. They are clearly able to be around each ither for long periods of time and fet on with things. A good foundation to their relationship. I do hope that Seb and Ben will appear in the next few chapters. They are good friends to Elijah and it will be interesting to see how they and Kage respond to kne another.
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I'm glad the 3 of them are getting on. The age gap between Kage and Elijah is an interesting one. I do wonder about cross-generational relationships, straight or gay. I'm not sure I could manage the nearly 20 year gap. I will be very interested to see how this works.
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Yes, I have that sense as well. He is finally going to feel things he never thought he could and he will have big decisions to make.
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Well Kage certainly got a thorough going over from mama. He handled it like a pro. Camping should prove interesting. I wonder if there will be another attempt on their lives far from the public eye?
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So Elijah's lessons begin. 🤣 I'm glad to see that he learnt well. Strangley, domesticity seems to suit Kage which I'm enjoying.
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Yet another duplication. 😃
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Yet another wonderful chapter, well-paced with a real cliffhanger at the end. Tyler is a genuine friend who cares deeply for Elijah. He will now have to be told about Kage. I agree with Anthon Cloche, Sebastian will now fet involved once he hears of the attempted killing.
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I hope not. I would be as irritated as could be. 🙂
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Nice touch. Jay Petermeyer poster 😃. Kage and Elijah are going to grow into each other. I'm glad that the house has been cleaned, but where might the laptop be? Possibly in the classic car still with the auctioneers. I agree with Kage. I'm sure it will have the details if the pedophiles who bought the young wolves.
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Another great chapter nicely positioned to take us into the next one, with the question about MacTire. Kate and Elijah are clearly attracted to one another and I believe that even this early in the story, Kate will choose Elijah, over his bosses. There is quite a big age difference between Kage and Elijay though, 17 years. Let's see how this works out. Thank you Kboi.
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I've waited so that I can binge read a bit. 😃
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Thank you for a great first chapter. I'm sorry that Elijah has had to deal with the double murder of his parents and glad that Tyler is there for him. I think we are going to see a lot of Kage who is going to play a role in Elijah's sexuality becoming a little more clear perhaps. Let's see.
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Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
Thank you for another super chapter. I'm glad that Vinnie is settling into his new role for the EC. U believe he will become a great asset. What is the divine affinity? Sounds very powerful, some way of connecting to the power of the gods perhaps? Let's see. I hope Yakob can prepare Vinnie. I'm quite certain rhat Tierney will manage to do exactly what Morrine has demanded. 😃 😀 more power to them both. -
I was delighted when I saw a new Mac Rountree story was beginning. Thank you for letting us see the next part of Pate and Timmy's lives. Pate has some serious thinking to do.
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The tale of Rick, the plumber and Gus, the Concert Pianist is one of my favorite stories on GA. The characters are well-developed and capture both our minds and hearts. In many ways, their stories are our stories and we can empathize with their dilemmas, and celebrate their joys. The story comes to a pleasing conclusion, and yet I long to know more and to engage once again in the lives of these two delightful men.
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Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Crikey. A tiger and a wolf. A Tolf? Or a Wigger? 😃 -
Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Thank you for a super chapter. I'm glad that Caleb and family have begun the process of reconciliation. It is always difficult, but the first steps have been taken. Also delighted that Vincent has been so thoroughly adopted by Mason's family. I wonder what a lipard is and what it's special qualities are. Lucky Lowe. -
I'm really pleased for Wagner. Hr is a good guy and has made some great changes. He played his part so well and I'm glad that he is back in good standing with the pack and has this new position of responsibility. The snake Snyder deserves whatever comes his way. Creating homelessness for financial gain is despicable behaviour. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
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Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
Thank you for a super chapter. I'm really pleased that Vincent's wolf will start learning about his human parents. It is good that Vincent has reconnected with Caleb's parents. I'm proud of what he now doing for the Lycan Council. I think he is going to be very good at it. The Owensville Pack is growing instature, despite the small town. -
A very touching chapter. I glad Jorgen is back and that Karl is not entirely alone. It will be interesting to see how the Danish squadron fares.
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Loving the storyline and the characters. Thank you Mawgrim for bring them to life in such a vivid way. I do hope that Kadin and Jevikel impress together. I guess the youngsters who seem homophobic are simply reflecting their upbringing and will soon reassess their position on this. It is quite common to reflect a majority view if something does not impact you personally. Let's hope that Illithal matures a little. I really admire D'gar's style of leadership and I'm glad that Riorth and Herebeth mated. Thank you again.
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Another chapter that enthralled me. D'gar is showing great leadership. I do not recall this being done with him when he was a weyrling. Exposing the youngsters to the possibilities and where their aptitudes might be is a good sign if things to come from him as Weyrlingmaster. Jevikel will make a good wingleader in the future. He has already shown his bravery and loyalty. Kadin too, for that matter. I'm delighted that he will only stand if Kadin does. Another sign of loyalty.
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What a super chapter. Thank you. I'm glad D'gar did not go down with F'drun. D'gar is going to be a first rate Weyrlingmaster. We've known him from the beginning ro be brave, caring and loyal. It is good that our lads have seen the true D'gar. They will learn so kuch from him. I can't wait to see whether Kadin and Jevikel will impress on the first round. I hope so.
