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I hope that Kadin has made it through.
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I'm enjoying this story very much. You have such an easy style of writing that I just keep on "turning rhe pages". I hope the 3 of them get away soon.
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Chapter 19: Baltimore Business
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 19: Baltimore Business
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Thank you for an amazing adventure. I have loved every moment. Rhe baby seat in the xar was the crown jewel. Thank you for brightening some difficult days on the other side of the world.
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So the story hidden for so long is starting to unravel with the unraveling of Maurice's mind. I wonder if it is Jack down the hole? And if so, what caused I all. I'm loving Dan and Terry. ❤
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Perfect!!!!
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Such an easy style of writing that flows and moves the story along. I enjoy the way you are developing the characters slowly and allowing us to get to know them. I really like Terry. And Dan seems to be revealing a different side of his personality. A super chapter.
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It is as I thought, useless parents who have double crossed both their children. I am delighted that Loe and Lars have found each ither and hope that their relationship can he restored.
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Enjoyed every minute of this series. The characters are so real and Eric's flourishing has been lovely. Thank you for writing.
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I am sure our good Granger will find a way to accommodate the displaced families. I smile so broadly at their gentle teasing if Admiral Nelson. Thoroughly enjoying this series of stories. Long may they last.
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A lovely chapter. It's good to meet Carson and see Aido finally "wuving the little Mugget". I wonder why Lars feels that he deserves a fafe to face meeting?? Was he fed some kind of disinformation about Loeren by his parents? Off to Mexico. I wonder what Seamus and Matt want to talk about?? Hmm lots to ponder. Beautifully written as always.
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It seems barbaric, but with the body disappearing in a flash of light the sacrifice becomes credible. The only question is what lies ahead for those who are sacrificed. Is it a type of Valhalla or hell, dependent I suppose on the true inclinations of Mithra
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Interesting start. I wonder if the boys that go off ever come back, or maybe join other communities elsewhere. What are Gnos? Enjoyed chapter 1!
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I'm enjoying this story. I'm glad William will deal with his sexual excesses. I think that Ian's talk about him spoiling future sex for the girls because William is so good at it is very weak. That is more of a backhanded praise than a reprimand.
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I love this story and I am so glad it has been resumed. Thank you. Granger is my all time favorite character on the GA app.
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I hope that there will be some change of love for Eric, beyond that of friends. Let's see.
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Jay is definitely playing a long game here, and doing it really well. I like him, a lot. He and Loren are going to be great for each other.
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I can't wait for Eric's first kiss
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Good advice from Dex. Time for Jonathan to man up. He is a great guy who is letting his own fears dominate his decisions.
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I'm glad we are getting to know Rob a little better and that Eric is transforming. I'm hoping that as his mind becomes more active, positive and forward thinking, his physical being will likewise transform - we know he can't be young again, but more confidence and losing the stick will bring 9ut the man that remained hidden for decades.
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Hmm. This is going to hurt Peter.
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Really enjoying this series.
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This is a story that engaged both my head and my heart. I am so glad there was some kind of reconciliation with his Dad, and that James has the opportunity for a new start, something all of us need at some point in life. The idea of transitioning through an extended period in multiple incarnations is an attractive one, mostly linked to eastern philosophy, but not unheard of amongst the early Church afathers either. It has a feeling of grace about it that was well presented here.
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That is a big jump for Paki. From South African Street kid, to the USA and then experiencing some kind of brutal accident/attack. Good Zulu. 👍
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I loved this story and how it shows the intersection of sexuality and love and faith. I loved the Episcoplian references. I know that Don has passed on, but I thank him for the pleasure and serenity this story has given to me.
