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Granger continues to impress me. He is an outstanding Captain and leader. Douglas will remember this lesson for the rest of his life. It may very well prove to be the making of the man. All of us have at some point needed a mentor and have probably ly also been a mentor to others. Granger handled the situation with the perfect balance of firmness and compassion. Pitcairn is a buffoon and deserves his time locked up. It has been a while since we have seen Granger in action in the baths. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for another marvelous chapter Mark.
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What’s That Word… Context?
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What’s That Word… Context?
Well that was a hotpot of emotion and misguided anger. Jonathan and Rusty were just plain dumb to keep their spending rhe holidays together a secret from Maddox. They both should have known that he would fly off the handle. The jersey didn't help. Maddox, stop and think!! Dev and Kane are rhe sane thinkers here. Let's hope that their focus on context will help Maddox cool down enough for Jonathan and Rusty to explain themselves and put things right. As for Connor - in old fashioned slang he is just a tosser. Good stuff! Thank you again Laura. I love catching up on these 2. -
Another wonderful chapter with our hero. Matheus is going to play an interesting role in Granger's life I think. He is very fortunate to have been taken on and I'm sure he will be as loyal as loyal can be. Pitcairn is in deep trouble, and the 1st lieutenant is not dar behind. I'm glad though that Granger understands his own part in not having sufficiently inducted Lt Douglas. I wonder if Granger will inherit anything from his aunt? Thank you for another riveting chapter.
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I'm delighted by the growing friendship between Jonathan and Rusty, but concerned that it will be reported as a betrayal of Maddox. Jonathan and Maddox are in love and so well suited, but this fragile relationship can be blown out of the water by a few sentences penned by a trouble maker. I hope we find out soon who is writing the gossip rag. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
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What a crazy plan to bomb Copehagen. I'm glad that has been postponed. That would be a slap in the face to the Danes in the airforce, navy and army. I'm glad Jorgen is back. Let's see what happens.
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Absolutely agree. Jonathan really needs to wake up. He and Maddox are in love but it is still fragile and could be broken by needless lies of omission. Maddox deserves to know all of him.
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You made me laugh from the belly. Yes they are being a bit precious about this. I'm glad the kids spoke some sense, particularly Vern. Perhaps in rhe morning they will all see clearly. That goes for Jonathan and Rusty too.
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Yes, that sin of omission. Oy vey.
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Well I am not surprised by Maddox's parents needing more time. These are difficult things for some parents to accept, particularly when it flies in the face of all evidence to the contrary. I wish Jonathan had told Maddox Rusty was there He would have been fine with that. I hope he will be wise enough to forgive Jonathan for the implied deceit. Likewise I hope that Jonathan man's up. They have everything going for them and I would hate for it to be spoilt. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
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Karl is taking too much responsibility for George's behaviour. He is not responsible for George's moods or actions. I do understand though, that he feels he is responsible. I'm glad Kristian was able to distract him
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Well, it is easy to be open-minded about almost anything until it comes home to roost. Maddox' mum will be the hard nut to crack in this development. I am sure that his siblings will help get her head around her son3 being gay. Let's see. In the meantime, back at rhe ranch, Jonathan and Rusty reveal a little more of themselves to each other and become more matey than before. Maddox is going to need Jonathan now more than ever. I hope the two of them will be able to speak very plainly to kne another, without the shadow of doubts or jealousies.
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Well the Archduke gave Darien legitimacy as an Imperial Officer, for what that is worth. I believe those commission papers will prove important in the future. I'm glad that Elias' secret is in the open. I don't think it will make any difference to the free/family that is developing.
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A melting pot of relational dynamics to be sure. Kendrick has gone quiet. An Archdale as a friend will be good for Darien, the new hero of the 5th column. A most engaging tale. Thank you Topher.
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Darien and Elias continue to bond. I'm delighted they got through and have secured a vessel in the process.
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Elias and Sarien are starting to bond and care for one another. I'm glad. Losing the ship is sad, but it was always a means to an end. Their saving Lauren and Co has been their saving grace.
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I suspect that Kendrick's addition to the merry band could create tension in the future. Darien is about getting away and finding a peaceful olace to start over. Kendrick is looking for resolution, while Elias, bless him, simply goes with the flow how will all this play out I wonder?
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Kendrick certainly expresses his views and is, I suspect, a lone gay man in this little colony. DRien is enjoying company in bed just for the feeling of being close to another person. Such a simple thing but true for most people, I think.
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Thank goodness Elias is there to Salvage what they can. Clever thinking on Darien's part to fool Jorten's henchmen. This is a good pair.
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Enjoying the story. Darien is a good chap and I think that he and Elias will make a good team. Still not sure exactly what a construct is, but time will tell.
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Exciting stuff. Hooked.
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Arrival in Williamsburg
Doha commented on Late to the party's story chapter in Arrival in Williamsburg
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A good chapter. Yes. Why break in, handcuff the big guy, ignore the small one and go straight for the kid? Who was this guy and why did he do what he did, rhe way he did?
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That was beautiful 😍
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That was super sexy. Well written and easily visualized lol.
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I really enjoyed a change in narrator. The characters are becoming more and more real. I'm enjoying the story. Thank you.
