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I've waited so that I can binge read a bit. 😃
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Thank you for a great first chapter. I'm sorry that Elijah has had to deal with the double murder of his parents and glad that Tyler is there for him. I think we are going to see a lot of Kage who is going to play a role in Elijah's sexuality becoming a little more clear perhaps. Let's see.
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Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 26: Telepathic Teller
Thank you for another super chapter. I'm glad that Vinnie is settling into his new role for the EC. U believe he will become a great asset. What is the divine affinity? Sounds very powerful, some way of connecting to the power of the gods perhaps? Let's see. I hope Yakob can prepare Vinnie. I'm quite certain rhat Tierney will manage to do exactly what Morrine has demanded. 😃 😀 more power to them both. -
I was delighted when I saw a new Mac Rountree story was beginning. Thank you for letting us see the next part of Pate and Timmy's lives. Pate has some serious thinking to do.
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The tale of Rick, the plumber and Gus, the Concert Pianist is one of my favorite stories on GA. The characters are well-developed and capture both our minds and hearts. In many ways, their stories are our stories and we can empathize with their dilemmas, and celebrate their joys. The story comes to a pleasing conclusion, and yet I long to know more and to engage once again in the lives of these two delightful men.
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Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
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Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Bumpy Banquets
Thank you for a super chapter. I'm glad that Caleb and family have begun the process of reconciliation. It is always difficult, but the first steps have been taken. Also delighted that Vincent has been so thoroughly adopted by Mason's family. I wonder what a lipard is and what it's special qualities are. Lucky Lowe. -
I'm really pleased for Wagner. Hr is a good guy and has made some great changes. He played his part so well and I'm glad that he is back in good standing with the pack and has this new position of responsibility. The snake Snyder deserves whatever comes his way. Creating homelessness for financial gain is despicable behaviour. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
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Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Shifter Sorrow
Thank you for a super chapter. I'm really pleased that Vincent's wolf will start learning about his human parents. It is good that Vincent has reconnected with Caleb's parents. I'm proud of what he now doing for the Lycan Council. I think he is going to be very good at it. The Owensville Pack is growing instature, despite the small town. -
A very touching chapter. I glad Jorgen is back and that Karl is not entirely alone. It will be interesting to see how the Danish squadron fares.
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Loving the storyline and the characters. Thank you Mawgrim for bring them to life in such a vivid way. I do hope that Kadin and Jevikel impress together. I guess the youngsters who seem homophobic are simply reflecting their upbringing and will soon reassess their position on this. It is quite common to reflect a majority view if something does not impact you personally. Let's hope that Illithal matures a little. I really admire D'gar's style of leadership and I'm glad that Riorth and Herebeth mated. Thank you again.
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Another chapter that enthralled me. D'gar is showing great leadership. I do not recall this being done with him when he was a weyrling. Exposing the youngsters to the possibilities and where their aptitudes might be is a good sign if things to come from him as Weyrlingmaster. Jevikel will make a good wingleader in the future. He has already shown his bravery and loyalty. Kadin too, for that matter. I'm delighted that he will only stand if Kadin does. Another sign of loyalty.
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What a super chapter. Thank you. I'm glad D'gar did not go down with F'drun. D'gar is going to be a first rate Weyrlingmaster. We've known him from the beginning ro be brave, caring and loyal. It is good that our lads have seen the true D'gar. They will learn so kuch from him. I can't wait to see whether Kadin and Jevikel will impress on the first round. I hope so.
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Granger continues to impress me. He is an outstanding Captain and leader. Douglas will remember this lesson for the rest of his life. It may very well prove to be the making of the man. All of us have at some point needed a mentor and have probably ly also been a mentor to others. Granger handled the situation with the perfect balance of firmness and compassion. Pitcairn is a buffoon and deserves his time locked up. It has been a while since we have seen Granger in action in the baths. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for another marvelous chapter Mark.
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What’s That Word… Context?
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What’s That Word… Context?
Well that was a hotpot of emotion and misguided anger. Jonathan and Rusty were just plain dumb to keep their spending rhe holidays together a secret from Maddox. They both should have known that he would fly off the handle. The jersey didn't help. Maddox, stop and think!! Dev and Kane are rhe sane thinkers here. Let's hope that their focus on context will help Maddox cool down enough for Jonathan and Rusty to explain themselves and put things right. As for Connor - in old fashioned slang he is just a tosser. Good stuff! Thank you again Laura. I love catching up on these 2. -
Another wonderful chapter with our hero. Matheus is going to play an interesting role in Granger's life I think. He is very fortunate to have been taken on and I'm sure he will be as loyal as loyal can be. Pitcairn is in deep trouble, and the 1st lieutenant is not dar behind. I'm glad though that Granger understands his own part in not having sufficiently inducted Lt Douglas. I wonder if Granger will inherit anything from his aunt? Thank you for another riveting chapter.
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I'm delighted by the growing friendship between Jonathan and Rusty, but concerned that it will be reported as a betrayal of Maddox. Jonathan and Maddox are in love and so well suited, but this fragile relationship can be blown out of the water by a few sentences penned by a trouble maker. I hope we find out soon who is writing the gossip rag. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
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What a crazy plan to bomb Copehagen. I'm glad that has been postponed. That would be a slap in the face to the Danes in the airforce, navy and army. I'm glad Jorgen is back. Let's see what happens.
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Absolutely agree. Jonathan really needs to wake up. He and Maddox are in love but it is still fragile and could be broken by needless lies of omission. Maddox deserves to know all of him.
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You made me laugh from the belly. Yes they are being a bit precious about this. I'm glad the kids spoke some sense, particularly Vern. Perhaps in rhe morning they will all see clearly. That goes for Jonathan and Rusty too.
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Yes, that sin of omission. Oy vey.
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Well I am not surprised by Maddox's parents needing more time. These are difficult things for some parents to accept, particularly when it flies in the face of all evidence to the contrary. I wish Jonathan had told Maddox Rusty was there He would have been fine with that. I hope he will be wise enough to forgive Jonathan for the implied deceit. Likewise I hope that Jonathan man's up. They have everything going for them and I would hate for it to be spoilt. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
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Karl is taking too much responsibility for George's behaviour. He is not responsible for George's moods or actions. I do understand though, that he feels he is responsible. I'm glad Kristian was able to distract him
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Well, it is easy to be open-minded about almost anything until it comes home to roost. Maddox' mum will be the hard nut to crack in this development. I am sure that his siblings will help get her head around her son3 being gay. Let's see. In the meantime, back at rhe ranch, Jonathan and Rusty reveal a little more of themselves to each other and become more matey than before. Maddox is going to need Jonathan now more than ever. I hope the two of them will be able to speak very plainly to kne another, without the shadow of doubts or jealousies.
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Well the Archduke gave Darien legitimacy as an Imperial Officer, for what that is worth. I believe those commission papers will prove important in the future. I'm glad that Elias' secret is in the open. I don't think it will make any difference to the free/family that is developing.
