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    Chapter 17

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    Chapter 17

    No
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    Chapter 17

    I'm not threatening nor emotionally blackmailing anybody. Mine is a simple statement. My supplication was (seems?) despised and if things won't change I won't read kboys anymore.
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    Chapter 17

    I SUPPLICATED you to give us a happy ending and this chapter is your answer. If you don't find a way to resuscitate Kage I Will NEVER forgive you and I won't read anymore anything written by you. Moreover I will cancel my recommendation.
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    Chapter 14

    Dear kbois, you are a great writer and I truly enjoy your novels. But please please please give us a happy ending! Let the love between Elijah and Kage triumph over everything and despite every problem! Real life is already so sad... We've got war, Covid19, monkey pox, climate changes and, here in Italy, the worst politicians in the whole world. Please, give us a bit of happiness...
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    Epilogue

    I'm very disappointed from such a sad epilogue. I had hoped until now that Lothar and Edwin would find a way to live happily together ever after. Shame on you. You lost one of your readers.
  7. What a wonderful story! Every chapter is better than the previous one! I work in a hospital near Milan, Italy and right now I'm surrounded by patients with Covid19 related disease. This story brings a sunbeam in this sad place!
  8. Firstable, I apologize for my poor English. I'm not used to write in this language, even if I can read it without any problem. I've really enjoyed these five chapters. There is only one little flaw: Venice, I assure you, has no sewage system. The town was built in the early Middle Age on artificial islands that were created in the low water of the lagoon by thrusting millions of wooden poles in the sand. The dirty waters coming from every single house of the town go directly into the many canals separating the islands. So, no sewage system in Venice to be used by Stefan.
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  10. Very sad. After a whole day spent working in a Covid Hospital I needed a romantic Happy Ending.
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    Chapter 1

    🙂 THE AUTHOR MAY BE ILLITERATE, BUT HE'S IN ANY CASE A VERY GOOD WRITER. I TRULY APPRECIATE HIS WORKS.
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    Chapter 1

    IN LATIN "NEMUS, NEMORIS" IS A NEUTRAL WORD, SO THE ACCUSATIVE IS THE SAME AS THE NOMINATIVE. NOBODY WOULD EVER HAVE SAID "AD NEMOREM", EVEN IN THE MIDDLE AGE! THEY WOULD HAVE SAID "AD NEMUS"! SO, EITHER THE LADY FENICE WAS ILLITERATE, OR MENDAMERO IS NOT ATWOOD. SORRY FOR MY POOR WRITING, BUT I'M NOT FLUENT IN ENGLISH.
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