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    Chapter 45

    Writing the funeral was rough! Cyn's confusion for it is genuine, but even I'm not sure if he felt any true sadness for Shelly's death. The only relative experience he has is Colman's death. Arric and Kieran are a nervous mess! Both are acting very differently compared to their date/not-date at the diner. I can't wait to see how they blossom out, especially when Kieran is truly gifted the beta role (we all remember what happened to Shea, right?). I think this was my first attempt at a dramatic timeskip. The only solace found here is Priscilla's death, and even so, I'm not satisfied myself. Cyn makes me feel like a proud dad sometimes. My only question now is whether Shea and Cyn will join the Turbins in the alpha's manor club...
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    Chapter 45

    Cyn held tight to Shea’s hand. He could smell the sorrow in the midnight air as he saw the pack adorned in black clothing. His mate explained to him they were attending a funeral for Shelly, the lady commander. It was strange to him seeing the robed body atop the neatly-placed timber. Sheamus told me the wolves honor their fallen. Kara’s sniffling was incessant. From the whispers, a lot of the members revered Shelly. I know she smiled at me at the meeting, but I didn’t get to talk to her.
  3. Being the fourth book in a series often presents a challenge to some authors, and that's maintaining the reader's attention. I want to assure that this author knows what he's doing. Serpent Mound held my attention from start to finish. Plot points are littered throughout the chapters, including the last several paragraphs of the epilogue. As always, we see recurring characters, but with this installment, we are treated to several new faces. This was a much needed breath of fresh air. As a fan of this series, I wholeheartedly recommend this story. If you haven't started Werebears in America, you are missing out!
  4. Grumpy! The last several paragraphs had me slide to the edge of my seat! Rodney still has the wights?!?!? Holy forkin' shirtballs! If these things can stir chili, imagine what Rodney has them do to Marcus in the bedroom... some extended love sessions in the time void? Onto the review!
  5. Yes, little Faro. Get it all out of your system. These two needed some time together, and a shower did the trick! Another wonderful chapter, Ye!
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    Big Bad Wolf

    Whew... I need a cold shower! I am beyond thrilled the three are starting to get everything back to normal. As an author, I know this feeling won't last long. Lysander is coming out of his funk, and Jordan's little speech helped tremendously. As always, I wait anxiously for the next installment.
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    New Beginnings

    Beautiful! As it's been said, the flow and drama for this book has been simply... So... Siku is going on an adventure. Hate to say it, but this news has ruined my ratings for his potential mate (sorry Ezekiel. I had high hopes.). My I'm Callin' It cap has been put in the closet. For now... A wonderful job, Grumpy! I can not wait for the epilogue!
  8. So glad that I'm caught up with the story. Galen's romantic side is starting to show, even if Reinard can't see it. Like Philippe said, this relationship will never be boring. Brilliant work, Ye!
  9. Progress! Date night? Lovin' it!
  10. So... Galen is going home with Iason. I wonder what Reinard will think about this.
  11. Uh oh. Reinard with a camera... me thinks our Faro's list of kinks is about to expand.
  12. Man, there really isn't a great training regiment for Galen, is there? Iason, being the professional, should have known his heat was coming soon. Aren't the Egaro supposed to be sidelined during this time?
  13. Galen's becoming more mature, as well as coming to terms with his relationship with Reinard. Now if the Faro could finally do the same.
  14. Finally! Communication! Oh, thank the Gods! I thought I'd never see the day... As always, fantastic work, Ye!
  15. I'm already making a rankings list... and I already know who's in the #1 spot. My I'm Callin' It cap is rarely wrong...
  16. YAAAAAAAAAAS!!!!!
  17. This chapter was beautiful. Many loose ends were closed perfectly, and a few more have begun. I am excited to see Susie and Apollo as parents. Karhu is going to be a wonderful Papa to Bernie. Next installment yesterday, please Grumpy! Pretty please with Siku's jockstrap on top?
  18. Thoroughly enjoying it. But, bedtime is here. I'll pick this up in eight hours or so...
  19. I feel for Reinard, I really do. For one to hold onto the hope of bringing back his clan, only to be forced to alter his identity... I only hope they find out who is hunting his clan.
  20. Trying to recall from The Neko's Tail. How long until Reinard shows a baby bump? You have me at the edge of my seat. If I didn't take my melatonin pill, I'd have been up all night... one more chapter before bedtime.
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    Reinard- Truth

    = this chapter, in my opinion. What a plot bomb! Expertly placed and detonated. We knew it was there, but my God... you really know when to pull the pin, Ye! Fantastic!
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    Galen- Somnus

    A do-over. I think this is much needed. Perhaps Galen isn't as much of a fool as I thought...
  23. Reinard needs to open his ears and listen to Nareen. He's shutting out the primary voice of reason in his life. I only hope Reinard has taken the advice and goes home to talk to Ga— Oh crap. Galen's with the deer...
  24. Uh oh. If Reinard comes through the door and sees Galen with Aedan...
  25. I hate the "p" word.
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