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Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
Shaw had such a redemption arc! Going from showing his ass by accusing Vincent and confronting him about being a mage, to finally seeing the bright side of life. But we all can't have nice things. It was a little vague of a description, but Stefan's hand gesture was him releasing his shadow magic. The assailant was not a shadow mage. *dun, dun, DUN!* Plenty of material to work with for Book Three. Two investigations, a Global and North American Summit, and a showdown! I better start writing Cernunnos so I can start on Death in the Shadows! Just the Coyote Cub leaving Coyote Cliffies. I can't thank y'all enough. It means a lot to have so many dedicated readers to this series. Just as you try to be patient, I'll try to push my fingies to the limit. Uh oh. Pitch forks? Torches? Thanks, Kitt! I understand everyone's loving frustrations, and I feel the love. Once Cernunnos is knocked out, I'll be focused and on my "A" game. Just a few months. It'll go by before you know it.❤️ Thank you for reading and commenting, mikedup! If I remember correctly, you've been there since the first chapter of LitS was posted. I'm thrilled to have entertained you, as well as the readers. Uh oh. Speechless Patch. I think I broke him... Same thing as mikedup and centex, you've been following along for quite some time. I can't thank you guys enough! I don't know what I'd do without my emoji-affinity reader. Oh, Shaw knows them. But who would use such a term like, "mutt-lover?" Thanks for commenting, Omaygawd! By the way, I forkin' love your name! I foresee a trail of excited reviews and comments throughout the GA community. Make sure to take my Chromebook when you come nab me! An author needs his typewriter! I agree that Shaw was dealing with a very experienced opponent, but I'm not sure if Ingle "set" him up. Ingle was trying to get Shaw more out and about in the shapeshifter community. Let's hope we don't have another double agent death... *cough* https://gayauthors.org/story/astone2292/love-in-the-shadows/25 *cough* Sorry, G. I switched the POV style halfway into RitS and found it tells a much better story, versus having everyone's thoughts running amok. I think having LitS and RitS updated before DitS (don't like how the abbreviation sounds, but I ain't changing the title) will be for the best. Ah, a clue has been uncovered. I wonder what other ones can be deduced... -
Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
Looks like there's a new telepath in town... and they like guns! The flip phone has one number, and possesses one use. If Vincent's going for it, then he must be either confident... or reckless.- 47 comments
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Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
Thanks for commenting, centex. It means a lot that you've followed this story since its inception. Stefan is a smart man. There's no doubt this was a calculated move. But who is the gunman? Pesky plot holes... -
Tossing the keys onto the coffee table, Wagner got the message. Didn't expect it though. It's a damned good opening! His denial as enforcer bothered him, regardless of the reason why. Is this why he chose to do it now? To have these powerful emotions? Yeah, that's it. Alpha Vonder is smart, but this is really smart! With his mind swimming, Wagner debated on taking a shower. No, I can't. It will give me time to cool off. I need to do this now! Scrolling through the contact list,
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Wonderful plot twist! Infected by a wight/bear god and convinced that the People aren't bad. In the moment of confusion, Rodney is turncoated. Hope Marcus and Bill can fix him.
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Marcus is impressive. Despite the breakdown at the end, he's has a knack for undercover work. Did we just find the next branch of the Academy? The undercover operative extracurricular course?
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Gotta love plot devices! They all seem to be D'oh! moments, but they're completely necessary. Very good work, Grumpy.
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Wonderful chapter as always, Grumpy! Bernie's handling of the truth is heartwarming, as he already intends to reunite with Karhu. What worries me was Bill's description of noble passion from kindred humans. I got a feeling Bernie's going to sneak off in the middle of the night...
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We'll get back to the manhunt soon enough. I'm not sure if Morgan has many secrets to spill involving Eike. I wonder where he's lurking...
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I'm sure Walt will stick around, but Arric and Kieran have a lot of thinking to do. Always happy to see your comments, Patch.
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I like this. I can see this happening...
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Just had to stick up for my evil characters a bit What's been lingering in my mind is the concept of Shea mating with Cyn, a former-prey shifter. What would Cyn think if Shea wanted to go hunting non-shifter prey (deer)? Or would Shea completely give up hunting? I think this might be a conversation in the near future...
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Apollo and Susie!!!!!!!!!! I forking knew it! Susie couldn't have stayed single for long, especially to Big Daddy Apollo! And they've mated? While this chapter suggests that bad things are coming, I am on cloud nine with this new relationship! Sorry, secret boyfriend Supreme Alpha Taylor...
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I love the analytical recap! What is Arric going to find from interrogating Morgan? Walt's a thinker. He probably had the thought on his mind, but with spouting three options "off the top of his head," he wasn't prepared for Arric's demand of options. Put yourself in a wolf's... shoes (I guess)? There is now an extra step in the hunting process; are they or are they not a shapeshifter? Just as in our real world, some don't like the sudden change in their daily lives, and some will go to extremes to protest. I love the opinions on the nominations, particularly Kieran's. Don't tempt me... I'm easily tempted to make changes.
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Arric snarled as he pocketed the phone, prompting a questioning look from his driver. “What’s up, Alpha?” “New development. You don’t leave my side. We need to find Doctor Morgan.” “Cyn’s surgeon? Why?” “He’s a mole and told Eike of the cern’s whereabouts when he was in the hospital.” The car accelerated, alarming him. “Relax! No need to get—” “Anton’s there. I love Walter, but I don’t think he can fight someone like Morgan.” Realization hit Arric hard. He swiftly d
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Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
Thanks so much for commenting, JR! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Teehee! Philippe tends to do that to some people. Always a pleasure to see your comments. Speaking of pleasure, I love seeing your comments, Patch! I knew you'd love this chapter. Cyrus got to see his parents, Kaplan officially met them. Which begs the question... where's Kap's? Dave and Stacy, Tierney and Morrine... who knows who else finds a potential mate! Dirk? Wagner? Yakob?!?!?! -
Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
The energizer panda!!! I forkin' love this! I think Remis' boost gave Cy some much needed energy for later... Uh oh. Did I get some readers addicted? Good thing the text background is white, because I hate for y'all to think I like white lines... I mean, Morrine does like to scratch things. Particularly, Ty's back. -
Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
Teehee! I'm sure Cy's going to be very busy with Kaplan... Stacy's definitely an option... but we can't forget about a certain alpha and his girlfriend... 🐺🐯 -
Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
I'm so happy to have Cy and Kap mated! Now, if I keep up the trend of one mating per book... who's next? -
Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
You know what happens after chapters filled with joy and happiness... -
Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Memorable Morning
Writing this whole chapter was so much fun and such an emotional ride! I wonder where Wagner ran off to... -
Kaplan stood. He couldn’t take his gaze away from Cyrus’. His mate? A blend of nervousness and glee filled his chest. I’m his m— Lips touched his, and the wolf knew everything in the moment was right. Cy loves me… and I love him. He wants me to be his mate. Reaching to the alpha’s chest, he gently planted a hand. Caressing the larger body, Kaplan heard the crowd’s whispering. Pushing himself away, he stared at the emerald eyes once more. “Are you sure?” “Without a doubt. Are you okay w
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Little Mall of Horrors
astone2292 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in Little Mall of Horrors
Damn! This was pretty unexpected. I was hoping for a nice, calm, and relaxing day for Bernie. Having Reika and the wights manifest from a movie character's joint smoke... that is very clever, Grumpy! My hopes for a werebear calvary. -
Prompt 132: Starting Over
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Prompt 132: Starting Over
Go digging in the old pages of Peeks and Prompts in the Writer's Circle! There are some goodies in there. -
Prompt 774 - Proper Path
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Prompt 774 - Proper Path
I've thought about it, but there are many projects in front of it...
