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Well... the assassin problem got solved rather quickly. This made me smile. Mateio shows here that he truly wants to help Aaron, if not give him a full commitment. I now have high hopes for the relationship.
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My God... this chapter was A LOT! Flying green things attacking. Empire invading. Darren gone. Arisa and Adara left behind. Things do not bode well for our team of heroes. Oh, and the assassin's awake, and she's been left with the king. Lovely.
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You spoil this for me, I'll spoil Death in the Shadows...
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It doesn't have to have a happy ending. One is always appreciated, but you are the author afterall...
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Don't worry, I'm guilty as well.
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Assassination of the Heart
astone2292 commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Assassination of the Heart
Okay, there's some hope for this relationship! Wonderful work so far! I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. -
Ye... you better have made these two have a happy ending... Onward to the next chapter!
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What a loaded chapter! Attempted assassination with an off-world poison that shouldn't be there... Let'em have it, Aaron! Then let Mateio have it
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I'm loving the start to this story! It's practically the inverse to The Neko's Tail. I'm eager to see where this story leads!
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Now that everyone is back home, Damian and Jordan's goal will be to help Lysander through the grieving process. It was a delight to see this chapter! Can't wait for the next installment. Another wonderful chapter, ye!
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Yes. Yes. A thousand times, yes. #teamsiku Just did a re-read of Trophy Cub. Gunnar made a mention during Mike's werebear-ducation about aviary lycan. Being a nosy and hopeful reader, is there a chance they will make an appearance in the series? I recall Gunnar saying no one's seen them in person, or something along the lines of them being very seclusive. Thoughts of a bear with a falcon (mate/potential mate) perched on the hide would be completely adorbs.
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I agree, a good sex break was needed. I like Siku. He's shy but nurturing. I wouldn't mind seeing him as the character for the next book... *wink, wink, Grumpy*
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I probably need my eyes checked, but what is that falling over the waterfall?
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Also callin' it: Joe and Bernie are gonna be mates. 🐺🐻
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I'm not sure about the foreshadowing with this chapter. Karhu is implying he won't survive the ceremony, and with Grumpy's streak of hope throughout the series, I think we're overdue to see experience a major death. What has me curious is Bernie's secret word. This isn't any Pee Wee's Playhouse word either; it's pretty dang serious. Now where did I leave my "I'm Callin' It" cap... I'm Callin' It! Bernie is the destined host for Odin; the big bear himself. I'm also predicting Rodney is acting. His repetitive calling of Rieka a "b!¥<#" has thrown me off during a re-read. While the old bear god could be using it as the archaic term for woman, it would be a great outlet for Rodney's displeasure for the sorceress and the group as a whole.
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I mean... I'd be distracted by that thought. Glad you liked the chapter, Patch! I guess we'll have to wait for the next chapter...
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I'll be taking this into consideration for future chapter content.
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Fixed the downwind mistake. That was oversight on my part. With the pack pay scale, there are several factors that could be at play. How much does teaching pay him? My advisor during college had to moonlight-teach at another university's online program since pay was crap. The American Histories professor, one with his doctorate, at the same private college works at the local Kroger for 30 hrs/week. A second thought would be Arric's manor. Is the manor passed down from Pack Alpha to Pack Alpha? All that being said, I'll be sure to implement more details in these regards going forward, for both this story and further ones.
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Kieran closed the door behind him. Slinking through his apartment, his mind was swimming. Beta… to Arric? He sighed and went for the coffee machine, but halted before he could press a button. Looking at the device only intensified his thoughts. Can I even handle it? I mean, Walter says I can. Why else would he nominate me? Hell, I’m dating the Alpha! That’s already a conflict of interest. If I took the position, any suggestions I give Arric would cloud his judgement of others’. Would he ta
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Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
I hope to see many more throughout my writing career. -
I'd imagine so, although the bear god seems to be protective of Tuath De's beliefs instead of the sacrifices' lives. But that's my take as a reader. I'm sure Grumpy has a better answer
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Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
I wouldn't say 2022. Death in the Shadows might make an appearance before then. -
Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
How could I do this? Easy. Content! OMG... ZitS. Now I'm interested... Vincent would be the powerhouse in the survival team, being capable of detecting incoming shadows. The question is simple; who would be in the starting survival team? Which of our beloved characters would be turned/killed? Uh oh... I think I'll have to add a short side story to this series... Thanks so much for commenting, Mark! I'm glad to see you're enjoying this series! -
By far, one of my favorite chapters in this entire series. The seriousness of the Tuathe De dinner was riveting. I can no longer tell if Rodney is acting or if he truly is the embodiment of the bear god, although I'm leaning towards acting as I clutch onto any shred of hope. I am rolling! Susie is just the best character in your arsenal, Grumpy. Axel got the much needed ass-kicking for his smart mouth, but redeemed himself by defending Susie from the ignorant pilot. This scene was pure class.
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Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
Jeezums! Axes too? Bingo! Me too! 😁
