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I'm beyond elated at the fact everyone's liking this concept of learning how one's typical belongings feel to a complete alien to human nature. I haven't read that novel, but if it's like Cyn's story, I might have to find me a copy...

Such an informational chapter! I loved how we finally learn more about the four-arms race and what goes on higher up the proverbial food chain! I am growing more curious on the pair bonding scenario. Surely Garjah is feeling something towards Essell, and not just the whole "I have a debt to repay" thing. Uh-oh. Do the tiny ant robots not like Essell? Are they reforming something that doesn't need reformed? *puts on conspiracy hat* Did Timok program the bots to harm Essell, rather than heal him? The situation is getting sticky, and not in the fun way! Next Wednesday can not come fast enough!

@Valkyrie!!! We got him! Excellent Guess Who this month! I'm so excited for the next one!

I need whatever it is you put in your coffee, sir. I think @NFields1608 would be concerned if I gave birth...but I'm really happy this story speaks to you in such a high level! Creating moments for Cyn that we all take for granted is eye opening for me, and I'm glad the readers share the same feelings. Feeling a bed, jumping in athletic shoes, discovering how a pillow works. I know Cyn will discover more and more sensations throughout this story, but it's taking time for me to walk in his shoes to think, "Oh...would he have ever experienced such a thing before? If not, how would this feel for the very first time?" Glad to see your comments, Patch!

I am loving Shea's relationship with his teammates! Great friends and loyal team members, but they sure love picking on him. I'm enjoying writing these small chapters versus RitS' 5k+ ones.

Shifters can have side hobbies, too! Arric is one scary dude. I can't wait to bring out that side of him!!! Yeah, just a small upgrade. No big deal... Yeah! A rogue council member! This is gonna be fun!

Glad you are also reading this story, Buz! Of course they had to make a law! This would have been such a hot debate in the higher forms of lycan government. I want a showdown, and I know it will happen somewhere along the way! There are so many plot points in this story!!!

I really need to stop posting before bedtime. It was very obvious, but this is just a nap. We can only imagine what's going to happen later.. On Cyn's half of the relationship, I'm just worried that our deer will put Shea in an extreme friend zone by accident due to his PTSD/survivor's guilt. Thank you! I'm trying hard with him. I want to resort to my own snarky attitude and quips, but I need to save those for Kara. This type of character is very new to me, and I'm afraid I'm taking his innocence too far sometimes. Ooof! This comment made me dig a mental rabbit hole in regards of how I want to adapt Cyn's mental state through this story! There's several different routes that just flew through my mind, and I don't know where to start! Lots to think about with this one... I don't think he has much of a choice, considering he's in a city, surrounded by moving cars and lycans. He still wants to go back to the forest, but now his human mind is at war by saying, "No! This is okay. I want the comfy bed!" Thank you! I'm happy my characters are so fun! I'll try to get chapters out a little faster, but work's been killing me as of late.

Feeding off the deer’s newfound enthusiasm, he suggested that the two should take their showers and head to town for some clothes. Cyn could use a few more clothes. He really needs some pants that would fit better. Cyn was hesitant about going to the city, but he felt the need to find a jacket so he could return Shea’s. The buck was directed to the next door bathroom and was left alone for some privacy. He knew how a shower worked, as he took countless during his time growing up. I missed

I like Stefan's relationship with Vincent. He left the boy alive all those years ago, found out he became a shadow mage like him, and has been tailing along this entire time. I believe Stefan found him fascinating to toy with, but is quickly finding that he may be a great power if left unchecked. Hmm, I may have to look into a flashback chapter with Yakob, or find time to let him spill his life to Vincent or another character. Always happy to see I have your approval, sir!

Oh my Gods!!! Centex is back!!! I am squealing like a girl right now! I loved starting with Dave and Stacy! Having a whole other couple in the story is so exciting! I can't wait to read more of your comments!

Damn, y'all really want Wagner there at the sparring matches!

I wouldn't say 'Poor Delta Wagner.' He's going to get everything he's got coming. I'd love to be a shadow mage as well, just for that reason! Ha! I knew that quote was coming! These challenges are going to be something. I only hope that Vincent takes the time to come up with a strategy. I'm still cackling at the conspiracies y'all are coming up with.

Yep. He used the Alpha Voice. I mentioned it briefly when Dave tried to soothe Vincent in the Greenthumb parking lot. Betas and Deltas can muster using it for a few seconds, but it can take its toll. Oh, Gods. Not the mustard! The affinities have manifested, but whether Vincent has discovered what all he can do with them is the question. Shadow Slinging...Frost Flinging...that's it! I'm 100% convinced you and Buz are working together on these descriptions! Our dynamic duo will return shortly. I think Lowe can handle waiting another week to see Alpa and Vinsy. Thank ya kindly! Times Square and hot dogs! A great summary of the chapter's events from our resident emoji-affintity mage! I'm excited to write how Wagner will be disciplined. Haven't gotten there yet, but a few ideas are flowing in my head. I'm looking forward to writing this new "player" y'all have dubbed him as. He...is most certainly not a player. He...is a contender...and a big problem. For which pack...I won't tell. Teehee.

I agree! Alpa is really cute, and Mace does need to get over it... Oh, Gods. Are you and Philippe in cahoots? I can't, y'all a lot. You two are the wonder twins of the affinitied universe with your descriptive magic. CyrusB is! He's going to make an even bigger appearance shortly, so get ready!!! Shaw's in a sticky situation, and I agree. I wouldn't want to be him.

I can't help it! I was missing your comments and I needed a way to lure you out of the proverbial woods! I love writing for the animal minds! Vincent is eager easy to irriare, Mason is knowledgeable and also easily irritated, and Cyrus' is playful and bashful. The concept of them playing tag and conversing with their human minds is so much fun to write. Buz...we got this book, and one more. There's time for a flashback about Dirk. We all know you want to be in the big lug's arms and whisked away... (I don't blame ya) I can't wait to see your next comment...

I wanted to jump right back in ASAP, despite already working on a whole other story. I couldn't stay away from Owensville! Stacy is really fun to write for, and I need to bring her up more in the upcoming chapters. I agree, that's the quote to beat in the entire series thus far. Me thinks Elaine is used to her son not telling her what's going on. That mark? Oh, Buz... *laughs and walks away*

Buz!!! I am so excited to see your comments!!! I could just run up and spin you around in circles like I would if you were Lowe! I missed you and you humongous comments! Congrats on moving! I can't go and make Vin's new teacher all perfect and whatnot! I am so excited to see Dirk's Mage Dance, but at this rate, we'll have to shove that deeeeep into book three. I'm off to read your other comments!!!

Love the insta-suss on the new Alpha... I hope Stefan and mystery man doesn't work together! That'll ruin my plans as the author!!! I think we'll find that Enforcer Wagner will get his discipline at some point...

I get that issue! It's not the hide of a panda, but I was aiming for a Rorschach test design that a psychiatrist would use. I will be looking into finding a new way to describe the rug to eliminate this issue. I'm so excited for Cy and Kap's relationship to blossom! I'm even more excited for Vincent's future fights! Our little hero is going to be adding a lot more weapons to his arsenal.

I...am so excited for this new character, and what is coming!

Putting his phone back into his pocket, Vincent felt a sense of wonder surrounding him. He knew where he was standing, but the mage couldn’t help but be captivated by the sounds and the lights. After all this time, I can’t believe I haven’t spent some time just wandering the world. My magic allows me to be anywhere I want to be. I can travel around the globe in less than an hour, but I haven’t taken a moment to be adventurous. I say start. Lights pretty! I want see more! Snorting at h

Listen, between you and Val, one of you has access to my Stories documents! Arric is the Alpha, and he's always thinking of the long plays. He sees opportunity, and he will not hesitate to pounce. A different race? You think Eike would make such a daring move in a populated place? Sir? Um, sir? I don't think Cyn trusts Shea thaaaaat much... well, not yet anyway.

I haven't taken the time to learn much about astrology. Let me rephrase that: I...don't know squat about astrology. Just looked up my Zodiac sign (Scorpio, apparently. Not sure how I feel about being a scorpion...), and I'm disturbed by how accurate the descriptions of my personal life were (reviewed three sites for confirmation, all fairly similar). Like...I'm personally bothered by this. How did it know that I'm witty and either I'll trust you as a person or kick you off a cliff? I have never considered looking to astrology in writing, but I might look at some sign descriptions to better build my characters. I don't see myself using compatibility matchmakers, as they were incorrect from my past relationships and my current marriage (All relationships have been with Capricorns...weird.). Glad this thread exists, because I've been missing out on reaffirming who I am as a person, and learning how I can grow. Using it in writing, I'll glance at the information, but I doubt I will rely on it.

As Bill said, if there's anything, feel free to let this forum thread know. It won't be much, but I'm happy to help wherever possible.