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Another string to your bow @Lee Wilson, romantic, seductive, love-making writing. There was a little bit of Barry White or Marvin Gaye in that writing of the sex scene, slow and the participants were on fire, purrrrrrrrrring. One of the finest singers Australia has ever produced recorded a song in 1975 which I think very fitting for this scene. In the USA she was starting to gain popularity on the R&B charts because it was assumed she was African American. When it became known she was a white Jewish girl from Melbourne, Australia, her popularity declined almost immediately. She passed away in January 2023 at the age of 69.

Patty to Marcia - Marcia, Marcia, Marcia. Guess what, I have bradyphrenia. Marcia to Patty - Say what, bradyphrenia? Is that the envy of me because of my beautiful long blonde hair? Patty to Marcia - No its a cognitive condition where my brain is slow. Marcia to Patty - Great, thanks for telling me that. Next time I scream at Jan that she is an ugly fat dyke and Mum grounds me, I can say I have got bradyphrenia. Patty to Marcia - But Jan is an ugly fat dyke isn't she? She is not as pretty as you and she is fat and never wants to go out with any of the boys. Marcia to Patty - Wow Patty. You really do have bradyphrenia. Well @Lee Wilson, I thought bradyphrenia was a Wilsonian creation, but imagine my shock, it is a recognised condition. I have my doubts though it is the root cause of Patty's homophobia and attitude towards her father-in-law. I still don't like her, bradyphrenia be damned. And her "transition" from Anita Bryant to Elizabeth Taylor in a short period of time, disingenuous much.

Patty, sit your arse down bitch and shut the fuck up. What is wrong with this woman. Surely not another brain tumour afflicted Pastore spouse, or did she go to the same St Aloysius School of Enlightenment For Girls that Jessica Muffmange went to? She needs a serious attitude adjustment otherwise life at Pastore Casa is going to be miserabile.

Patty Pastore nee Princess does not like her father-in-law. Is this the case of another Pastore female spouse with anger management issues, or has there been a genuine disagreement between the two? Did Salvatore make a sexually inappropriate comment in her presence or pinch her on the arse? The former seems the most likely given his teasing of Dylan, but who knows. Well @Lee Wilson does, but he is not telling yet. More good work @Lee Wilson. I know it is too early to assess Patty yet, but I have a feeling I am not going to like her. I just she is not a rabid homophobe like Aunt Jessica Muffmange.

Stripes are really "your thing" @weinerdog; very flattering to your figure, colouring and coquettish "look" for the camera. A Bowie song could be about anything, do not let the lyrics fool you @weinerdog. Was Let's Dance really an invitation to dance, or was it about heroin trafficking from Vietnam to Australia, the destruction of the Amazon rainforests or Sylvester Stallone's latest romantic liaison or bowel movement? Dylan wasted no time in informing Colton of the ins-and-outs of his most recent boyfriend dramas. I hope he studied the veracity of those documents in support of Colton's "application" before disclosing all this information. The pace has not slowed down @Lee Wilson. At this rate Dylan and Colton could break Secretariat's 52 year old race record for the Belmont Stakes.

Your "poet's licence" will continue to be renewed, free of charge, if you keep up the good work and obey all the syntax, spelling and punctuation laws@Lee Wilson. Zach's "trial" was as cost effective and time saving as Jackson's. The prison officials run a tight ship at HMAS Mary Catherine Josephine. Colton's "application" will need to include a copy of his original birth certificate, marriage certificate, spouse's death certificate, Jiho's adoption documentation, a notarised copy of his degree documentation, a full current financial report, a blood and semen sample, and a full psyche evaluation report completed within the last 14 days. If these documents cannot be provided his application will be rejected and any monies spent in obtaining these documents not refunded.

Justice was delivered swiftly, cheaply and with a minimum of fuss to Jackson. I strongly doubt he committed suicide. Prisoners are notorious for their dislike of rock spiders and I doubt prison officers would do much to protect said spiders. It appears Jackson was the "brains" behind the child pornography business he and Zach had going. Being a teacher he had ready access to children and for all intents and purposes he appeared to be very affable. His downfall was his arrogance, arrogance boosted by frightened children. I shudder to think how long he had been videoing children and how much longer he could have continued to do so if he had not encountered the very smart, brave and confident, Dominic Pastore. A cracking pace @Lee Wilson, one which fortunately the school and the police were able to sustain, therefore swiftly taking both Jackson and Zach into custody without delay.

Motherfucker, that seems to be the only word offensive enough to describe both Jackson and Zach. Seemingly Jackson fucking Dylan was a payback to avenge Zach's hurt that he did not get the opportunity to "tap that ass". And now Jackson is going after Dominic to have him "star" unknowingly in child pornography. Was this their sole intention all along? I knew Jackson was lying about Zach, but I had no inkling they were in cahoots together. Given their intention to film a naked Dominic perhaps motherfucker is not offensive enough after all; see you next Tuesday sleazebags will have to suffice. The deceit of Dylan by both Zach and Jackson, and Jackson's intentions towards Dominic, are amongst the most despicable acts perpetrated by any of your heinous characters to date @Lee Wilson. Although not as bad (yet), they are the gay equivalent of Abel Kraft and Kathy Nelson. Scum.

I think Neil will likely be the most forgiving of all @Cane23; he has already demonstrated it with his forgiveness of Owen, Ned and Robbie. The latter two seem very immature for their age, Owen a little less so. Ned and Robbie will always follow the leader I think, Owen may eventually stand up to Lucas, but I think it will take something very drastic e.g. extreme violence, for him to do so. The three of them are snapfrozenturds as far as I am concerned.

1 or 2 then perhaps Lee? How could Hammer and Nomes resist this?

One with an "obsession" to have a rescue cat (or 7) as a therapy companion?

Dylan's character growth in this story has been phenomenal. When he first married Lacy I could not have foreseen him not only acknowledging he needed help, but also seeking it. He is to be commended for acknowledging his vulnerability and breaking point has been reached. Salvatore is to be commended for being there to support him no questions asked. The break from Jackson needs to be permanent. He cannot be trusted. Jackson, one of your most frightening creations yet @Lee Wilson as he is an accomplished and very convincing liar. I fear not only for the safety of Dylan, but also the safety of Dominic. I suspect there is a very good reason for the facial burns, whether self-inflicted or inflicted by someone else.

What are you talking about @Cane23, it never happened, Owen did not deliberately out his supposed best friend Neil to their circle of friends, facilitate the whole school finding out, facilitate an assault on Neil by Lucas and finally shout at Neil when he attempted to confirm he was gay. No, never happened, capisce. I agree with you and @Al Norris, Owen, Ned and Robbie do not deserve Neil's acknowledgment of their existence, let alone his friendship after the bullshit they have carried on with in recent times. Neil has much better friends in Alex and Sammy, and perhaps Gerry if he loses some of his "attitude". Lucas' mental capacity appears to be deteriorating further. Any reasoning with him, which has always been limited at best, has now gone completely. It will not surprise me at all if he attempts self-harm and has to be hospitalised for his own safety.

The wee laddies have married in a simple but heartfelt ceremony. All who were important in their lives were present and the ceremony went off without a hitch. No homophobes attempted to gate crash the ceremony, no tornado appeared out of nowhere and struck the Hilton, the attendees were not suddenly overcome by a case of rabid food poisoning, and no one got intoxicated and pulled out a high-powered gun and started shooting. Phew, what a relief @Lee Wilson (LOL). Love Is In The Air everywhere the wee laddies look around. First marriage and now serious discussion about adoption. I applaud both Hammer and Nomes for their decision to adopt an older child(ren) and their (almost) decision to consider one with special needs. Bart's offer to give up work is also commendable, but they must, and I believe they will, give serious consideration as to what special needs they would rule out, if any. Tremendous chapter @Lee Wilson (almost as good as Before And After The Divorce). Go for it 'Squeak', you did Australia proud.

Jackson is trouble, big time trouble. I am beginning to wonder if anything he has disclosed is the truth. Have you created another psychopath @Lee Wilson? The hidden agenda comment you made above is very alarming.

I am still not convinced Jackson is telling the truth. Zach did not have a photograph of his Jackson Burben, so who is to say Jackson Burben and Jackson Tevron are not one and the same. When Jackson first disclosed his Zach Washington had hit him he described him as follows: "Washington, average height, a little stocky, black?" Now Jackson is claiming his Zach Washington is white. I don't think his colour is something which he would forget. Something does not ring true @Lee Wilson. Is this perhaps another sneaky Wilsonism?

You're a sneaky so and so (LOL). I have just started reading the next chapter and discovered your treachery. Kiss On My List may still be apropos after all, and eventually perhaps You Make My Dreams may be even more apropos.

All I can add to all the astute comments above is: FUCK! Does anyone Dylan is personally involved with tell the truth apart from Dominic and probably Salvatore? I was going to post Daryl Hall & John Oates Kiss On My List after what happened at the beginning of this chapter @Lee Wilson, with the hope that Dylan and Jackson's partnership was going to be a happier one. It seems I was premature in my thoughts, the imminent split between Dylan and Jackson will likely be more acrimonious.

It's 12.43am Saturday morning in Sydney, Australia. I rarely go to bed before midnight, even when working full-time, so it is not outrageously late for me.

"No worries. Strictly a hands-off evening. I feel the same way. After being burned by Zach, I'm taking... What" I am curious @Lee Wilson if Jackson was burned literally by Zach and it is this which has caused his disfigurement. I daresay this may be addressed in a future chapter. It certainly appears Dylan was lucky he did not become more involved with Zach as he is obviously a complete psychopath. Salvatore does need to be a little more discreet I think as Dominic is only 7 and 1/2 years of age. Mind you, Dominic is one very smart and witty boy. Is the "big game" baseball or gridiron?

Jackson is hot. Those nipples. Yum. Salvatore is delightful and very observant. Are you sure Dominic is only 7 and 1/2 years of age @Lee Wilson (LOL). I would caution Dominic outing his father to all and sundry though as this could invite unwanted attention from another Aunt Jessica clone. I have not been able to logout yet as I am totally rapt in this story, which seems like a good introduction to the posting of another great song. This time from my all-time favourite American band, second only to ABBA as my favourite band. The lead singer is also one of my favourite female soloists and a goddess to boot. It is still hard to believe she will be 80 years of age this year.

Binge reading your stories has been a comfort, along with my feline "daughters". Even my music has not been of comfort this week as my receiver needs "attention". I do not stream music or play it on my phone, I still listen to it on CD or vinyl.

Indeed I am, although I shall have to finish shortly. I have been sick this past week with an early season 'flu or something equivalent, which has given me more time to binge read.

Aunt Jessica. Bitch needs to die, and like now @Lee Wilson. What a hateful, malicious, ignorant, harpy. I hope Lacy did not leave her anything in her will. I daresay she will not appear in the story again, but I hope you at least reference her corpse, and sooner rather than later. Still a great story, one of your very best.

Hopefully Aunt Jessica got slammed by that out-of-control semi-trailer driven by a man who has had a heart "episode", the one I have suggested on several occasions to address homophobia in some of your stories @Lee Wilson. What a fucking bitch. I assume Simon is her husband; well bitch he is more likely to molest a child than Dylan you ignorant imbecile. Dylan's father was a wonderful surprise, and a far more suitable relative for Dominic to be exposed to than Jessica Muffmange from Minnesota. This story is superbly written @Lee Wilson.